zombie deck help needed

[lightswornGENEX]

this is the basic format i made and i was wondering if i could have suggestions that could improve this deck. i was thinking it would be logical to include malefic stardust dragon to protect zombie world.

thank you very much

 

1 mezuki

1 sangan

1 summoner monk

1 plaguespreader zombie

2 immortal ruler

3 pain painter

3 il blud

3 zombie master

3 pyramid turtle

3 goblin zombie

 

2 book of life

2 one day of peace

2 zombie world

1 lightning vortex

1 monster reborn

1 swords of revealing light

2 mystical space typhoon

1 allure of darkness

 

2 dark bribe

2 solemn warning

2 bottomless trap hole

1 mirror force

 

EXTRA DECK

1 ally of justice catastor

1 stardust dragon

1 scrap dragon

1 ancient fairy dragon

1 black rose dragon

3 revived king ha des

3 archfiend zombie-skull

1 photon strike bounzer

1 number 39: utopia

1 wind-up zenmaines

1 leviair the sea dragon

 

SIDE DECK(just ideas, not sure on all of them)

malefic stardust dragon

 

red dragon archfiend

assault mode activate

red dragon archfiend/assault mode(because of zombie-skull effect)

 

imperial iron wall

chaos hunter

 

ninja grandmaster hanzo

ninjitsu art of super-transformation

white dragon ninja

[newhat]

The Ninjas in Side don't really fit.

 

You don't need Swords of Revealing Light because this Deck has some of the best deterrence in the game. I'd suggest Shock Master if you can get your hands on it.

Rather than protecting your field, you could just run another copy of it, but Malefic Stardust works, more or less.

[Aix]

• If you have Zombie World, you'd prolly want 1 or 2 of Sacred Crane and you want 2 Summoner Monks.
• Also, you want triple Book of Life.
• 3 Il Blud is too much, I personally don't run it at all, but I suppose 1 or 2 could possibly be fine.
• Immortal Ruler is REALLY bad, eats up your Normal Summon and Tributes itself just to get Zombie World.
• You want 3 Zombie Worlds.
• Where is your Dark Hole?
• Swords of Revealing Light is unneeded. Stall is next to useless in this format.
• You want 2 Tour Guide From the Underworld to create Leviair and recycle your Plaguespreader/Mezuki.
• You only want 1 Archfiend in Extra.
• You only want 1 Revived King Ha Des in Extra.
• Ptolemys is better than Strike Bounzer
• You need 2 Maestroke, 2 or 3 Lavalval Chain, 1 Cornship of Black, 1 Photon Papillerotive (don't know how to spell that) and 1 Gagaga Cowboy.
• Ancient Faerie Dragon is better than Ancient Fairy Dragon.
• 3 pain painter is too much, just 1 or 2 is fine.
• You want at least 1 Bone Crusher, you can take a Mystical Space Typhoon out for that. Put as many MSTs as you can into the Side Deck.
• Assault Mode Stardust is the best Assault Mode, but I wouldn't use Assault Mode at all because it is too inconsistent.
• You probably want at least 1 Heavy Storm.
• You probably want at least 1 Blue-Blooded Oni.
• WHERE THE HELL IS YOUR FOOLISH BURIAL?!?!?!
• The Ninjas have no place here.
• You probably want at least 1 Solemn Judgment and 1 Torrential Tribute.