Aix Posted January 30, 2013 Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 Is there anything wrong with the Logo I makes? Any improvements I could makes? Please tell me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crystal Alien Posted January 30, 2013 Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 Just a grammar tip you're suppose to put "Make" not "Makes" sorry if it comes off rude just trying to help. The logo looks fine and it pretty eye catching so good job on that aspect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted January 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 Just a grammar tip you're suppose to put "Make" not "Makes" sorry if it comes off rude just trying to help. The logo looks fine and it pretty eye catching so good job on that aspect. Thanks and I was messing with my grammar on purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 31, 2013 Report Share Posted January 31, 2013 The white outline around the AIX stands out in contrast with the black symbol you have behind it. It's not very appealing and looks rather pixelated. In addition, it's one of those logos that, even though the discontinuities were purposeful on the typography, doesn't look good in general. Your colors are also harsh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted January 31, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 31, 2013 It's one of those logos that, even though the discontinuities were purposeful on the typography, doesn't look good in general. Sorry I don't really get what that means. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 31, 2013 Report Share Posted January 31, 2013 Sorry I don't really get what that means. It means that the size difference on the text doesn't look good and it means that the white outline on the red text isn't working. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted January 31, 2013 Report Share Posted January 31, 2013 Just a grammar tip you're suppose to put "Make" not "Makes" sorry if it comes off rude just trying to help. The logo looks fine and it pretty eye catching so good job on that aspect. Comes to this section to talk about grammar? Please. Anyway the black design behind AIX is far too obvious and so keeps you a little distracted from the overall piece, either make it have a lower opacity or remove it altogether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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