Astolfo Posted January 21, 2013 Report Share Posted January 21, 2013 So... yeah. CnC and all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted January 21, 2013 Report Share Posted January 21, 2013 The render is poorly placed, not blending in very well. I feel like you threw the C4D's on there without taking placement into consideration. On top of that, they look choppy. Big time. The glow around the text just makes it look bad, so avoid that. In fact, go ahead and remove the text all together. Your main problem with this one is your choppy execution, which in turn is affecting the flow and other things as well. Even the lighting (though it may be correct) seems poorly executed. The piece has potential, but it needs a lot of work. Especially on the smooth transitions between the levels of depth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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