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[quote name='Spike the Bloody' timestamp='1358177998' post='6120581']
I still cant understand it, but I'm actually gonna put this one to a vote. I'm not exactly sure on it, so I figure I'll let everyone else decide.

Simdoggy, Regenade, Blur, what do you think of Zeros app?
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I can kind of make sense of it, but it's rather confusing and doesn't seem to follow common English grammar and sentence structure. So for now, I'd say no, because if the app is like that, the IC posts are probably going to be similar and hard to read and understand.

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[quote name='Spike the Bloody' timestamp='1358177998' post='6120581']
I still cant understand it, but I'm actually gonna put this one to a vote. I'm not exactly sure on it, so I figure I'll let everyone else decide.

Simdoggy, Regenade, Blur, what do you think of Zeros app?
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It seems he is having trouble conjugating the verbs as well as having problems with sentence structure. I say no, because if the app is like this, then the IC posts will probably have the same problem.

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[quote name='Otaku-sama' timestamp='1358207907' post='6121076']
Reserve me a spot please.

A question: What do archons look like? Some of the descriptions of the races were a little scant.
[/quote][img]http://aow2.heavengames.com/pics/types/t-archon.jpg[/img]
Close as I can get. They all wear that gold armor and the red cloaks and stuff, and have pale skin. But otherwise they look human.

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Spike?[quote name='Neph' timestamp='1358203881' post='6121010']
What sort of attire is 'normal'? Modern Earth-ish? Or really fantasy-based? (robes/armor/etc) Also, it says Sorcerers don't need an implement, but can they if they wish? Also, can the character have wings?
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[quote name='Admiral_Stalfos19' timestamp='1358191003' post='6120734']
Why's everyone going for the Battlemind, for? What happened to the lovely thing called "variety"?
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From what I see it seems my character is the only battlemind, so we still have variety haha

[quote name='Spike the Bloody' timestamp='1358177998' post='6120581']
I still cant understand it, but I'm actually gonna put this one to a vote. I'm not exactly sure on it, so I figure I'll let everyone else decide.

Simdoggy, Regenade, Blur, what do you think of Zeros app?
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To be brutally honest, it is incredibly difficult to have a good rp when there is someone who can't use proper grammar within the rp. It makes everyone's job harder. I don't want to be offensive, but i've just been through too many rps that had great potential only to be thwarted by a single rper's bad english. I vote no, sorry :\

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[i]"I wish everyone could just... get along. Is that too much to ask?"[/i]

Name: [acronym="Dratch As-Tur"]Drache Aster[/acronym]
Age: 19
Gender/Sexuality: Male

[spoiler="Personality"]Drache has what you might call a very 'unique' personality, although most might call it a tad frustrating. He never means any harm with his antics though, although he got a couple of close scrapes with it when he accidentally flew through a person's ceiling too many times. However, the unique part of Drache's attitude comes in here. Drache seems as if he dances between the very brink of genius and insanity. His close scrapes usually came in when an invention he made apparently failed and exploded or something else of the sort. His insanity, if you could call it that, seems to come into play when such events happen to occur, and he does all sorts of bizarre things to get away, which are usually running jokes - pun intended - with his fellow friends. One of Drache's most famous - or infamous, depending on who you asked - 'escapades' was arguably the time when Drache had literally flipped over his chaser's head, and inadvertently set fire to the man's stall. Drache had put the fire out rather quickly, but it was still a sore point with the dragonfruit - which was a bit of humorous coincidence, but not to the - vendor.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Appearance"][url="http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn240/horsesrules12/wolf_Prince.jpg"]Drache[/url] is a bit of an oddity in magical terms as although Drache has magical potential and strength to utilize it, he has one core, what one could call 'weakness'. Drache is blind. His eyes are a dull cloudy gray-blue. Although he can't see, Drache's other senses were heightened, and his senses are almost as good as having eyesight and average senses. Some things, he could only have done with his newly heightened senses, but others, he lost without his eyes being able to see. Drache doesn't mind though. He still enjoys life to the fullest, and although he looks somber at some times, he is usually happy. Drache's hair is a whitish-silver, and some distinctive marks are a tattoo on his forehead, and a tattoo under his left eye. The tattoo on his forehead resembles a curled dragon tail of sorts, while the one under his eye is a stylized teardrop basically. Drache wears a mix of casual street clothes and magic types, as indicated by his sash with a dragon insignia, his stylized jacket with folded sleeves, and plain clothes underneath, bound with simple cloth straps. Drache respects both nonmagical, weak, powerful, magic, and all other creatures, and feels his clothing represents his beliefs well.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Biography"]Drache's childhood wasn't particularly special besides the occasional escapades mentioned previously, but one bright point of his life that Drache loved the most were being with his friends almost always. He and his friends met at a park or some other, and played games like "Last Man Standing", "Boom, You're It!", and racing.

Drache also learned tips on flying, using his magic, and using his other talents Drache had from his father. His father was the one who taught him how to use his fire, and from that Drache had developed his fire-art he can create today.

His father, Wyr, was Drache's only family. His mother and little siblings were kidnapped by Orcs long ago, and Drache mostly gave up, knowing Orcs would probably kill and eat their prey. There was a minuscule chance of his family surviving, but it being so little, Drache tried to keep a brave heart and protect his dad, but sometimes, the burden was too much. When this happened, Drache lashed out, burning things in his anger and frustration at his being unable to do anything. At the time the Orcs had come after his family, he was only 4. Even at that age, with his wild instincts telling him something was [i]badly[/i] wrong, he burnt several of the Orcs easily, and his father easily destroyed most of them, but a lucky swipe from an Orc had smashed his father's arm nearly beyond repair, and to this day, it's still far from healing completely.

Knowing that it was impossible to have complete co-existence with the other more savage races, Wyr had taught little Drache the arts of fighting brutally, and both with honor, and with all-out, any-means fighting, as Drache stood the chance of having to face either. Drache tries to convince himself not to have a permanent grudge or harbor resentment towards the Orcs, because as his father told him, [i]"Vengeance is self-defeating. Know this. Not all creatures are inherently evil, but they choose to do so. So a race deemed evil might have good sparks in it, it is just the overwhelming majority is evil or so in that race. I want you to remember this. Promise me."[/i] Even so, Drache can't help but have some resentment towards Orcs, although it is not to the point of complete hatred or sadism towards the Orcs at all. Drache strikes a bit harder and more powerfully when fighting the more…. [i]unrefined[/i] of races, especially towards Orcs. He knows it is by no means possible to eliminate all the 'darkness' without having more, as his father had also told him another phrase, [i]"There shall always be pure hearts with a capacity for great evil, blackened hearts with the potential for true remorse and heroism, and neutrals capable of either. As the opposites clash, we will undoubtedly despise each other, but that is the only way, unfortunately."[/spoiler]
Race: Draconian
Class: Sorcerer

[spoiler="Custom Abilities"]None as of yet.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Current Abilities"][u][b]Arcane Blood[/b][/u]
Arcane magic literally flows through your blood. You are nearly immune to spells that aren’t of an elemental nature, and all of your spells have boosted power.

[b][u]Prismatic Explosion[/u][/b]
You throw a small rainbow orb, and wherever it lands, an explosion of multicolored light blinds and damages all enemies within a 10-foot radius of wherever the orb landed. You can use this up to three times per day.

[b][u]Dragonfire Prism[/u][/b]
A prism of flames erupts around you, forming an impassable wall. This can be used up to three times per day.[/spoiler]

[b][u]Other[/u][/b]
• Drache's first name came from a bastardization of 'dragon' in another language.
• Drache's favorite category of food is meat, with vegetables as the worst.
• Drache likes to stargaze.
• Drache tends to "accidentally" set things on fire when he gets temperamental.
• A special talent Drache developed is breathing out a swathe of fire, and molding it with his hands, if he reinforced them with magic, or some specially made gloves he had created for this purpose. With this, Drache can make fire-art.

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This is my fixed app Spike.

Name: [acronym="Dratch As-Tur"]Drache Aster[/acronym]
Age: 19
Gender/Sexuality: Male

[spoiler="Personality"]Drache has what you might call a very 'unique' personality, although most might call it a tad frustrating. He never means any harm with his antics though, although he got a couple of close scrapes with it when he accidentally flew through a person's ceiling too many times. However, the unique part of Drache's attitude comes in here. Drache seems as if he dances between the very brink of genius and insanity. His close scrapes usually came in when an invention he made apparently failed and exploded or something else of the sort. His insanity, if you could call it that, seems to come into play when such events happen to occur, and he does all sorts of bizarre things to get away, which are usually running jokes - pun intended - with his fellow friends. One of Drache's most famous - or infamous, depending on who you asked - 'escapades' was arguably the time when Drache had literally flipped over his chaser's head, and inadvertently set fire to the man's stall. Drache had put the fire out rather quickly, but it was still a sore point with the dragonfruit - which was a bit of humorous coincidence, but not to the - vendor.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Appearance"]Drache is a bit of an oddity in magical terms as although Drache has magical potential and strength to utilize it, he has one core, what one could call 'weakness'. Drache is blind. His eyes are a dull cloudy gray-blue. Although he can't see, Drache's other senses were heightened, and his senses are almost as good as having eyesight and average senses. Some things, he could only have done with his newly heightened senses, but others, he lost without his eyes being able to see. Drache doesn't mind though. He still enjoys life to the fullest, and although he looks somber at some times, he is usually happy. Drache's hair is a whitish-silver, and some distinctive marks are a tattoo on his forehead, and a tattoo under his left eye. The tattoo on his forehead resembles a curled dragon tail of sorts, while the one under his eye is a stylized teardrop basically. Drache wears a mix of casual street clothes and magic types, as indicated by his sash with a dragon insignia, his stylized jacket with folded sleeves, and plain clothes underneath, bound with simple cloth straps. Drache respects both nonmagical, weak, powerful, magic, and all other creatures, and feels his clothing represents his beliefs well. Drache's scales are a silver-blue mixture that is dull, yet amazing to see. His tongue is a strange, smooth, silver-like in looks and soft in texture. The flames Drache can breathe are a whitish-silver in color, and his wings are of more or less the same colorations, with chasings in dark blue.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Biography"]Drache's childhood wasn't particularly special besides the occasional escapades mentioned previously, but one bright point of his life that Drache loved the most were being with his friends almost always. He and his friends met at a park or some other, and played games like "Last Man Standing", "Boom, You're It!", and racing.

Drache also learned tips on flying, using his magic, and using his other talents Drache had from his father. His father was the one who taught him how to use his fire, and from that Drache had developed his fire-art he can create today.

His father, Wyr, was Drache's only family. His mother and little siblings were kidnapped by Orcs long ago, and Drache mostly gave up, knowing Orcs would probably kill and eat their prey. There was a minuscule chance of his family surviving, but it being so little, Drache tried to keep a brave heart and protect his dad, but sometimes, the burden was too much. When this happened, Drache lashed out, burning things in his anger and frustration at his being unable to do anything. At the time the Orcs had come after his family, he was only 4. Even at that age, with his wild instincts telling him something was [i]badly[/i] wrong, he burnt several of the Orcs easily, and his father easily destroyed most of them, but a lucky swipe from an Orc had smashed his father's arm nearly beyond repair, and to this day, it's still far from healing completely.

Knowing that it was impossible to have complete co-existence with the other more savage races, Wyr had taught little Drache the arts of fighting brutally, and both with honor, and with all-out, any-means fighting, as Drache stood the chance of having to face either. Drache tries to convince himself not to have a permanent grudge or harbor resentment towards the Orcs, because as his father told him, [i]"Vengeance is self-defeating. Know this. Not all creatures are inherently evil, but they choose to do so. So a race deemed evil might have good sparks in it, it is just the overwhelming majority is evil or so in that race. I want you to remember this. Promise me."[/i] Even so, Drache can't help but have some resentment towards Orcs, although it is not to the point of complete hatred or sadism towards the Orcs at all. Drache strikes a bit harder and more powerfully when fighting the more…. [i]unrefined[/i] of races, especially towards Orcs. He knows it is by no means possible to eliminate all the 'darkness' without having more, as his father had also told him another phrase, [i]"There shall always be pure hearts with a capacity for great evil, blackened hearts with the potential for true remorse and heroism, and neutrals capable of either. As the opposites clash, we will undoubtedly despise each other, but that is the only way, unfortunately."[/i][/spoiler]
Race: Draconian
Class: Sorcerer

[spoiler="Custom Abilities"]None as of yet.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Current Abilities"][u][b]Arcane Blood[/b][/u]
Arcane magic literally flows through your blood. You are nearly immune to spells that aren’t of an elemental nature, and all of your spells have boosted power.

[b][u]Prismatic Explosion[/u][/b]
You throw a small rainbow orb, and wherever it lands, an explosion of multicolored light blinds and damages all enemies within a 10-foot radius of wherever the orb landed. You can use this up to three times per day.

[b][u]Dragonfire Prism[/u][/b]
A prism of flames erupts around you, forming an impassable wall. This can be used up to three times per day.[/spoiler]

[b][u]Other[/u][/b]
• Drache's first name came from a bastardization of 'dragon' in another language.
• Drache's favorite category of food is meat, with vegetables as the worst.
• Drache likes to stargaze.
• Drache tends to "accidentally" set things on fire when he gets temperamental.
• A special talent Drache developed is breathing out a swathe of fire, and molding it with his hands, if he reinforced them with magic, or some specially made gloves he had created for this purpose. With this, Drache can make fire-art.

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Honestly, I'd prefer it if there was one person of each race, but if you MUST have a race that someone else took, I can allow 2 of each race.


Ill begin on my App den
[spoiler=App WIP]
Name: Leo Hunt
Age: 30 (Human males)
Gender/Sexuality: Male/
Personality: Leo is optimistic, sarcastic, and quite immature. He acts like an 12 year old often, and he is pretty disrespectful when it happens. His parents always told him he acted like a cub, and he actually liked that label. In battle, he acts more serious. Even then, his childish side shows. He often "Plays" with enemy's like a cat and a mouse. Leo prefers to travel with others, since he hates the fear of being alone. He isn't like a typical proud lion, he would rather stay with others. He is willing to befriend almost any Tigran, but usually Tigrans of other races(Such as panther, or Cheetah) turn him down harshly. Leo thinks of Tigrans as one big family, and he attempts to treat them as such.

Appearance: Leo, despite being in his 30's is really young looking. His fur is vibrant, and lush. His main is soft, and vibrant. She has bright white teeth, and a nice build. Leo despite his youthful appearance, is still lean and athletic. He is slightly taller than most Tigrans of his age. Like most Tigrans, he mainly wears a loin cloth so he can wander through the land he used to call home without getting caught on trees/shrubs. When he travels, he wears leather armor.
Biography: Leo was pretty alone growing up, since he wanted to meet other Tigrans. this develoed his fear of being alone. He never had an actual friend, not even the other Tigrans liked him. Most thought of him as a snob since he was a lion. Leo never understood why the Tigrans were like that. They wee all the same family. Leo looked to fighting to blow off steam. During a huge war, Leo brought out his bow, and helped the fellow Tigrans win the battle. After that, he earned respect. During the flood, he got scared and ran. He was lost, and the world was flooding. He didn't know what to do, until he noticed in the distance, a group of Tigrans. they were Cheetahs. He tagged along, even though he felt the others did not care for him. He never did see his pride, but he still hopes they are put there, no matter how harsh they were to him.
Race: Lion Tigran
Class: Ranger(It suits them best imo)
Custom Abilities: N/A

[spoiler=Current Abilities:]

Arcane Tracking
Arcane Tracking is a spell known to most Rangers. The user must be holding an item or DNA sample of a target to cast this spell. An invisible trail of energy will appear, only able to be seen by the caster. This trail leads to the target.

Woodland Cover
This spell can only be cast in a woodland or jungle-like environment. The caster's skin and clothing change to match the environment, increasing the caster's stealth dramatically.

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Equipment/Items:

1 Long Bow and arrows

1 Steel dagger

Riding horse

Provisions

Normal Cloths

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[quote name='Neph' timestamp='1358372593' post='6123161']
This is my fixed app Spike.

Name: [acronym="Dratch As-Tur"]Drache Aster[/acronym]
Age: 19
Gender/Sexuality: Male

[spoiler="Personality"]Drache has what you might call a very 'unique' personality, although most might call it a tad frustrating. He never means any harm with his antics though, although he got a couple of close scrapes with it when he accidentally flew through a person's ceiling too many times. However, the unique part of Drache's attitude comes in here. Drache seems as if he dances between the very brink of genius and insanity. His close scrapes usually came in when an invention he made apparently failed and exploded or something else of the sort. His insanity, if you could call it that, seems to come into play when such events happen to occur, and he does all sorts of bizarre things to get away, which are usually running jokes - pun intended - with his fellow friends. One of Drache's most famous - or infamous, depending on who you asked - 'escapades' was arguably the time when Drache had literally flipped over his chaser's head, and inadvertently set fire to the man's stall. Drache had put the fire out rather quickly, but it was still a sore point with the dragonfruit - which was a bit of humorous coincidence, but not to the - vendor.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Appearance"]Drache is a bit of an oddity in magical terms as although Drache has magical potential and strength to utilize it, he has one core, what one could call 'weakness'. Drache is blind. His eyes are a dull cloudy gray-blue. Although he can't see, Drache's other senses were heightened, and his senses are almost as good as having eyesight and average senses. Some things, he could only have done with his newly heightened senses, but others, he lost without his eyes being able to see. Drache doesn't mind though. He still enjoys life to the fullest, and although he looks somber at some times, he is usually happy. Drache's hair is a whitish-silver, and some distinctive marks are a tattoo on his forehead, and a tattoo under his left eye. The tattoo on his forehead resembles a curled dragon tail of sorts, while the one under his eye is a stylized teardrop basically. Drache wears a mix of casual street clothes and magic types, as indicated by his sash with a dragon insignia, his stylized jacket with folded sleeves, and plain clothes underneath, bound with simple cloth straps. Drache respects both nonmagical, weak, powerful, magic, and all other creatures, and feels his clothing represents his beliefs well. Drache's scales are a silver-blue mixture that is dull, yet amazing to see. His tongue is a strange, smooth, silver-like in looks and soft in texture. The flames Drache can breathe are a whitish-silver in color, and his wings are of more or less the same colorations, with chasings in dark blue.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Biography"]Drache's childhood wasn't particularly special besides the occasional escapades mentioned previously, but one bright point of his life that Drache loved the most were being with his friends almost always. He and his friends met at a park or some other, and played games like "Last Man Standing", "Boom, You're It!", and racing.

Drache also learned tips on flying, using his magic, and using his other talents Drache had from his father. His father was the one who taught him how to use his fire, and from that Drache had developed his fire-art he can create today.

His father, Wyr, was Drache's only family. His mother and little siblings were kidnapped by Orcs long ago, and Drache mostly gave up, knowing Orcs would probably kill and eat their prey. There was a minuscule chance of his family surviving, but it being so little, Drache tried to keep a brave heart and protect his dad, but sometimes, the burden was too much. When this happened, Drache lashed out, burning things in his anger and frustration at his being unable to do anything. At the time the Orcs had come after his family, he was only 4. Even at that age, with his wild instincts telling him something was [i]badly[/i] wrong, he burnt several of the Orcs easily, and his father easily destroyed most of them, but a lucky swipe from an Orc had smashed his father's arm nearly beyond repair, and to this day, it's still far from healing completely.

Knowing that it was impossible to have complete co-existence with the other more savage races, Wyr had taught little Drache the arts of fighting brutally, and both with honor, and with all-out, any-means fighting, as Drache stood the chance of having to face either. Drache tries to convince himself not to have a permanent grudge or harbor resentment towards the Orcs, because as his father told him, [i]"Vengeance is self-defeating. Know this. Not all creatures are inherently evil, but they choose to do so. So a race deemed evil might have good sparks in it, it is just the overwhelming majority is evil or so in that race. I want you to remember this. Promise me."[/i] Even so, Drache can't help but have some resentment towards Orcs, although it is not to the point of complete hatred or sadism towards the Orcs at all. Drache strikes a bit harder and more powerfully when fighting the more…. [i]unrefined[/i] of races, especially towards Orcs. He knows it is by no means possible to eliminate all the 'darkness' without having more, as his father had also told him another phrase, [i]"There shall always be pure hearts with a capacity for great evil, blackened hearts with the potential for true remorse and heroism, and neutrals capable of either. As the opposites clash, we will undoubtedly despise each other, but that is the only way, unfortunately."[/i][/spoiler]
Race: Draconian
Class: Sorcerer

[spoiler="Custom Abilities"]None as of yet.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Current Abilities"][u][b]Arcane Blood[/b][/u]
Arcane magic literally flows through your blood. You are nearly immune to spells that aren’t of an elemental nature, and all of your spells have boosted power.

[b][u]Prismatic Explosion[/u][/b]
You throw a small rainbow orb, and wherever it lands, an explosion of multicolored light blinds and damages all enemies within a 10-foot radius of wherever the orb landed. You can use this up to three times per day.

[b][u]Dragonfire Prism[/u][/b]
A prism of flames erupts around you, forming an impassable wall. This can be used up to three times per day.[/spoiler]

[b][u]Other[/u][/b]
• Drache's first name came from a bastardization of 'dragon' in another language.
• Drache's favorite category of food is meat, with vegetables as the worst.
• Drache likes to stargaze.
• Drache tends to "accidentally" set things on fire when he gets temperamental.
• A special talent Drache developed is breathing out a swathe of fire, and molding it with his hands, if he reinforced them with magic, or some specially made gloves he had created for this purpose. With this, Drache can make fire-art.
[/quote]Accepted, I'll add it to the OP :3

After Cherz turns in his app, we will have the minimum amount of people needed. I will put up the IC a week after Cherz submits his full app :3

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