Double

[Ovedrive]

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Experimenting stuff. Cnc.

[RickiMinaj]

Not gonna lie, the first one is flat out ew. The lighting and color composition are quite bad (The yellow lighting looks overdone and flat out fake while the blue lighting doesn't even make a stance when it should). On top of that, the sharp edges don't work with the piece like they do with the second one. So yea, first one needs a lot of work.

The second one is nice but I feel like you're playing it safe with the overuse of black. The sharp edges work on this piece because they seem to be the common motif pulling the piece together. The background is ba ba baaad though. It's a mess and the flares of dark red that show through do not coordinate with the light red in the foreground. On top of that, the color scheme is more monotonous than Nixon's decision making (U.S. History reference).

You're on the right path though. That's the good news. Learn more about the elements of principles of art and your skills will improve. I would also suggest that you start studying Goethe's color theory if you want to improve in your concept of color. From the looks of your work, he might help you best.

[Catman25]

Both kinda have the double focal syndrome, especially the first. Depth is coming along, and as said, color could be improved as it's looking rather monotonous right now.

[Ovedrive]

Thank you both for your comments. It helped a lot.