Caught in the Past

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Ok, so I don't know if I'm allowed to post this here, but whatever. I've been working on a rap song for the past week, and its my first one. It has a story to go with it that has to do with my life, which I will explain later, but basically I'm asking for any feedback. I know its pretty bad right now. I just want to see if anybody can figure out what the songs about before I say it. Anyway please help me with it.

[Spoiler=Caught in the Past]

[center][b]Caught in the Past[/b][/center]

[center][b][CHORUS][/b][/center]
[center]I’m caught in the past[/center]
[center]I’ve been wantin you back[/center]
[center]It feels like I’ve been without you[/center]
[center]For as long as I can remember[/center]

[center]I’m caught in the past[/center]
[center]I’ve been wantin you back[/center]
[center]It feels like I’ve been without you[/center]
[center]For as long as I can remember[/center]

[center]Caught in the past[/center]
[center]And looks like no comin out[/center]
[center][b][CHORUS][/b][/center]

[center]I thought it was gonna last[/center]
[center]And when I think back in the past[/center]
[center]I realize how bad I f***ed up[/center]
[center]But now I’m fixin it[/center]
[center]I’m apoligizin[/center]
[center]And completely meanin it[/center]
[center]But no, you don’t think I mean this[/center]
[center]Now hear me out miss[/center]
[center]I was gonna stay by you forever[/center]
[center]But that’s fuckin changed[/center]
[center]You don’t think I still wanna[/center]
[center]But I mean this with everythin I got[/center]
[center]I’m sorry for everythin, I know it’s a lot[/center]
[center]I don’t even know why I did this[/center]
[center]This shits crazy[/center]
[center]It was supposed to be your day[/center]
[center]I was gonna do whatever the hell you say[/center]
[center]But then somethin snapped I dunno what[/center]
[center]I made the worst decision I’ve ever made[/center]
[center]It sucks now[/center]
[center]But I’m not gonna allow[/center]
[center]You to just forget bout me[/center]
[center]We’re goin back to where we used to be[/center]
[center]I wanna be back with you[/center]
[center]I’ma chase you through and through[/center]
[center]I’ma stick to you like fuckin glue[/center]
[center]I know you don’t feel the same[/center]
[center]What’s the point in stayin this way[/center]
[center]I’m puttin myself through more pain[/center]
[center]But its just[/center]

[center][b][CHORUS][/b][/center]
[center]I’m caught in the past[/center]
[center]I’ve been wantin you back[/center]
[center]It feels like I’ve been without you[/center]
[center]For as long as I can remember[/center]

[center]I’m caught in the past[/center]
[center]I’ve been wantin you back[/center]
[center]It feels like I’ve been without you[/center]
[center]For as long as I can remember[/center]

[center]Caught in the past[/center]
[center]And looks like no comin out[/center]
[center][b][CHORUS][/b][/center]

[center]Ya know what[/center]
[center]I know why[/center]
[center]I ain’t leavin you[/center]
[center]I needa make this thing right[/center]
[center]I fuckin screwed up[/center]
[center]And you know it just as well as me[/center]
[center]Now why the f*** can’t you just see[/center]
[center]I’m fuckin sorry[/center]
[center]We all make mistakes[/center]
[center]But not to the people who mean the most to you[/center]
[center]Everybody knows how bad I f***ed up[/center]
[center]I dunno what you think of me now[/center]
[center]I hear you still loved me[/center]
[center]Until I fuckin lied[/center]
[center]That’s my biggest mistake[/center]
[center]I’m leavin this s***[/center]
[center]And I ain’t comin back[/center]
[center]I’m done with life[/center]
[center]Maybe I might just take a fuckin knife[/center]
[center]I’ma f*** the world a make it bleed[/center]
[center]Feel the pain that I felt[/center]
[center]She don’t understand this s***[/center]
[center]But its more than meets the eye[/center]
[center]I would’ve had her back if I just didn’t lie[/center]
[center]Why the hell did I have to go and do this?[/center]
[center]Your all pussy’s[/center]
[center]Don’t know the real story[/center]
[center]Neither do I, so I dunno what’s goin on[/center]
[center]All I know is I’m sorry for what I’ve done,[/center]
[center]But maybe I should just move on[/center]
[center]Who the hell knows?[/center]
[center]But then I think back[/center]
[center]And realize what I did[/center]
[center]And know that I just cant move on[/center]
[center]There’s more I gotta do[/center]
[center]I needa fix this[/center]
[center]We were meant to be[/center]
[center]Gonna last till the end of the world[/center]
[center]Till the fuckin world gets f***ed by[/center]
[center]Some ugly-ass f***[/center]
[center]Who knows nothing bout how to act[/center]
[center]But who knows, maybe I was that guy[/center]
[center]I may not have done it to that many people[/center]
[center]But I put her through pain and I’m sorry for that[/center]
[center]And now I’m runnin right back[/center]
[center]And Im still[/center]

[center][b][CHORUS][/b][/center]
[center]I’m caught in the past[/center]
[center]I’ve been wantin you back[/center]
[center]It feels like I’ve been without you[/center]
[center]For as long as I can remember[/center]

[center]I’m caught in the past[/center]
[center]I’ve been wantin you back[/center]
[center]It feels like I’ve been without you[/center]
[center]For as long as I can remember[/center]

[center]Caught in the past[/center]
[center]And looks like no comin out[/center]
[center][b][CHORUS][/b][/center]

[center]b****, listen to me or I’ma strap you down[/center]
[center]You needa hear what I’ma bout to say[/center]
[center]Ok?[/center]
[center]But now I know there’s no goin back[/center]
[center]You moved on and now its my turn[/center]
[center]Its just I’m fuckin[/center]
[center]Caught in the past[/center]
[center]Wantin you back[/center]
[center]Baby, your all I care bout[/center]
[center]I need you[/center]
[center]And you need me[/center]
[center]Come back[/center]
[center]Don’t leave me[/center]
[center]Baby please[/center]
[center]We’re goin right back[/center]
[center]To where we left off[/center]
[center]Now take me back please[/center]
[center]I’m beggin you[/center]
[center]Complete my life and stay with me[/center]

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