DL Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 I'll be proof reading the script. Considering how (atm) all my contributions can only be written, and I've had no slot of writing, I want me some action ._. Alright, when I post it, you all can have a go at it :3 However any changes that are actually MADE to the final script will have to be accepted by a general consensus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 Well obviously XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 How about we bastardize the opening instead? These days, all Machinima openings are being bastardized, whether they be uploaded to YouTube or not. Who's in for bastardizing the intro? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 [quote name="Double C4" post="6152123" timestamp="1361984669"]How about we bastardize the opening instead? These days, all Machinima openings are being bastardized, whether they be uploaded to YouTube or not. Who's in for bastardizing the intro?[/quote] That's basically what we're doing; taking the original intro and corrupting it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 Didn't sound that way to me. Probably misinterpreted it. Oh well. Oh, DL, are you just about done with the script? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 I think the Gangreen gang should just end up being a poorly executed version of the delightful children from down the lane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 I think the Gangreen gang should just end up being a poorly executed version of the delightful children from down the lane. Mixed with a poorly executed Common Cold, and that's ace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 I'm...at the last 2 minutes of the episode. Basically, it should take me a couple of hours if I procrastinate....I'll post it, and the openings later And probably the voices tomorrow.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 So there's Blossom, Bubbles, Buttercup, Narrator, Prof. Utoneum, Mojo Jojo, Him, Gangreen Gang, the Major... I better get busy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 No script yet BUT http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93upbVXBDzM&feature=youtu.behttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O1LBx9z77KA&feature=youtu.be Which one's better? EDIT: THE SCRIPT IS DONE :3 [spoiler=Script] PPG HOME Bubbles is running away from a cockroach BUBBLES If you spare me I swear I will feed you my sisters in ritual sacrifice! BUTTERCUP Ritual WHAT?? BUBBLES I said sisters, not brothe- AGAFGAHAAROACH! Bubbles runs away, Buttercup tries lasering the roach with her eye-lasers, but misses, and runs after the roach, leaving a melted hole in the wall BLOSSOM Buttercup, what did I say about having your period all over the wall? PROF Now see here, girls. This is a cockroach. Commonly known as the living filth that plagues our planet and deserves to die. ROACH S'not what your mother said last night, buddy... PROF Oh dear, it seems that someone wants the cactus~ ROACH Please tell me you're asking about dinner... PROF NO, IT'S TO STICK IT UP YOUR- Opening plays PROF Aaalright, now that we took your intestines for research...you may go. ROACH I hope you die a virgin... ROACH GUY HOUSE ROACH GUY Soldiers! Gather! ROACH GUY Now as you know, I make it my pastime to spy on kindergarten children. And we have learned the Powerpuff Girls are afraid of only three things. Bad hair days, cacti, and COCKROACHES. So, combining our army, with a barrage of cacti, we will leave them defenseless! AND I WILL BE ABLE TO SET UP CAMERAS IN THEIR BATHROOMS TO WASH THEM SHOWER! AHAHAHAHAHA! Cut to a shot of the town at night, voice over from roach guy ROACH GUY ...I need a new hobby... Cut to a bright Townsville. In this part, most buildings are orange. NARRATOR It's Paint-your-Building Orange Day in Townsville! Where everyone paints their buildings orange for no particular reason...except that one in the right. GUY 1 YOU'LL NEVER CONVERT ME, BITCHES! Hot dog man offers Guy 2 a hot dog. But then cockroaches pop out from EVERYWHERE. HOT DOG MAN Here, have a hot dog GUY 2 Oh golly gee, that's mighty nice of you, isn't i- AAAAHGGGAAOOOH OH MY DEAR SWEET JESUS BABY LORD AAAAAHHH YOU FORGOT THE KETCHUP!!!!! NARRATOR And this, kids, is why you should never forget to put the ketchup... Scene shows roaches climbing up on the buildings, even the one not-orange one GUY 1 NICE TRY, DEMOCRATS! FUCK ORAAANGE! CEREBELLUM Sir, don't you think you should make...'the call'? MAYOR Oh, right, right! Very wise! Call the powerpuff girls! CEREBELLUM No, sir...I meant...the other 'call'... BLOSSOM (picks up the phone) Yes, mayor?! What?...no...this isn't the justice league... Blossom hangs up, then turns to her sisters BLOSSOM I just had an amazing idea! Fuck school! The three Powerpuff Girls dash out of school, but encounter an army of roaches everywhere. BLOSSOM You know what the professor always says. If you ever have to go against an army of roaches, remember that ninety percent of them are allergic to Go Fish! Blossom gets a giant jar and heads quickly towards the roaches with it. NARRATOR Did you know Go Fish was played with a giant jar? We didn't either! BLOSSOM (in her mind) Oh, bugger off, mate. While Blossom collects the roaches in the jar in a physically impossible way, the narrator and Blossom talk NARRATOR How the hell are you collecting every single roach by just going in a straight line? BLOSSOM It's a vacuum jar. NARRATOR Vacuum jar? BLOSSOM Vacuum jar. Blossom manages to collect all the roaches, and the girls stand on top of the jar. BLOSSOM Take that, you roach freaks! ROACH GUY How foolish! My roaches ate Captain Crunch for breakfast! BLOSSOM What does that have to do with- oh dear... Roaches break free from the jar and is forming a huge roach monster with Roach Guy ROACH GUY Hahahahaha! Roach monster is formed fully ALL 3 POWERPUFFS LET'S DASH STRAIGHT AT 'IM After the dash starts, it cuts to them being trapped inside the creature BUBBLES Admittedly not the best idea we've ever had, but if you ask me, I blame capitalism. BLOSSOM Y'know, we seem to be forgetting we have a useful little thing called GETTING THE HELL AWAY FROM HERE FOREVER! ROACH GUY Hey, where are you going? Get back here! NARRATOR And sooo, once again, the day isn't quite saved...thanks to, the Powerpuff Girls! BLOSSOM No seriously...bugger off, mate... [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 Can't play the videos. Says they're private. I like the script, though. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 Changed to public :3 And thanks ;D Any changes? :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 Definitely the first one. The second one was still too canon for comfort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 ....The hell did I just witness.... O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 ....The hell did I just witness.... O_O What do you mean? Definitely the first one. The second one was still too canon for comfort. 1st as in first one posted, or first as in, 1st by title? =P AKA Let the bodies hit the floor or Original, but pitched-down version? cD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 What do you mean? Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhy??? O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 1st as in first one posted, or first as in, 1st by title? =P Bodies That one Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhy??? O_O Cause hello. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 Sonic Be coherent And alright 1 vote for Bodies I say Bodies too~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 I am...I think... But still...what made people choose PPG?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 We decided based on unanimous decision. It's a good show, innit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 Depends on who you ask... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 I don't think we should use the metal one. Screaming is kinda stupid. Actually hearing a theme is nice. Also, I'm not that big a fan of the script. And the democrat joke made no sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 I don't think we should use the metal one. Screaming is kinda stupid. Actually hearing a theme is nice. Also, I'm not that big a fan of the script. And the democrat joke made no sense. I'm open to suggestions. The timing was good, but there could probably be a better line there, of course. And alright 2 metal 1. normal theme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kōsuke Ueki Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 I'll just leave the voting to you guys. Though, I should suggest finding that one evil song from Insanity Movie (you know, the one that sounds like a metal song sung by puppet versions of Alvin & the Chipmunks?). If anyone knows what I'm talking about and can find it, use it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 28, 2013 Report Share Posted February 28, 2013 Just make the regular theme sound darker. Shouldn't be too hard. TURN UP THE BASS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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