Tried my hand at something

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"Enrise... What are you doing? You suck... Stop!"

First:

[img]http://i526.photobucket.com/albums/cc342/Exodius13/Enrisetag2_zps91689d9c.png[/img]

Second:

[img]http://i526.photobucket.com/albums/cc342/Exodius13/Enrisetag_zps30d5aff8.png[/img]

I like the first one, since the second one was really uploaded after I forgot to make a layer visible, and I realize that the text looks really light and almost unreadable (despite it being Greek).

Note: I now see that it cut off the ends, have no idea why. Eh. Disregarding that, you may now puke in disgust.

[-DG-]

first is better.

For better logo results, don't try and cram vector brushes into one big logo. Simple is generally better, and that's the rule with things like this you need to go by.

this style would be better with colors, instead of B/W IMO.


Also, never make your text barely readable in anything, just a heads up.

The text here, as well as the entire thing isn't very sharp. too blurred.

[Enrise]

So I decided to simplify things, like you said, but I'm not entirely sure if the result is great. I mean, I'm still new to this kind of art, my forte is paper and pencil.


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[Aix]

The logo at the very top is still better than all the rest. There is too much empty space on the rest of them, you need to make them closer together to fill up the area it is covering. ATM, each of them are more like two logos connected by a line rather than a single logo.

[-DG-]

your colors aren't complementing, and you're still using those brushes.

Go simpler, and use a different font. It doesn't seem to fit with this