DL Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [img]http://i.imgur.com/ElKfZ.png[/img] Was mainly focusing on the smudging, and the shading for the render to make it blend into the bg more. I think it turned out okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]Y'know, the main problem I have with this is that you made no attempt to [i]blend[/i] the focal into the smudging. Look at this smudge tag here:[/font] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img13/3702/supernaturalsmudge.png[/img][/font] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]The focal is blended into the smudge-- he looks like he is a [i]part[/i] of the tag, y'know?[/font] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]Otherwise, your lighting could use work-- tag looks pretty flat.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='sicknastyKakashi' timestamp='1357308794' post='6110922'] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]Y'know, the main problem I have with this is that you made no attempt to [i]blend[/i] the focal into the smudging. Look at this smudge tag here:[/font] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif][img]http://imageshack.us/a/img13/3702/supernaturalsmudge.png[/img][/font] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]The focal is blended into the smudge-- he looks like he is a [i]part[/i] of the tag, y'know?[/font] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]Otherwise, your lighting could use work-- tag looks pretty flat.[/font] [/quote] So basically, I should add smudges over the render a bit too? IDK, that's always been one of my main problems x___x And yeah, I gotta work on lighting effects a bit... I should try to mess around with some fractals in tags once in a while ^.^'' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 [quote name='Fluttershy401' timestamp='1357309326' post='6110927'] So basically, I should add smudges over the render a bit too? IDK, that's always been one of my main problems x___x And yeah, I gotta work on lighting effects a bit... I should try to mess around with some fractals in tags once in a while ^.^'' [/quote] [font=lucida sans unicode,lucida grande,sans-serif]Not just add smudges [i]over[/i] the focal but smudge the focal [i]in[/i] too. An obvious example of this would be on the right should of the man in the tag above.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 Smudge the focal in.... smudge the focal in... Basically, click&drag the borders of the render with smudgyness a bit, to make it flow into the bg better? I'm sorry if that's not it, but I really am kinda new at this so some lingo is a bit beyond me x.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted January 4, 2013 Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 The Render also seems a little small for the size of the tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DL Posted January 4, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2013 I thought that too, but I wasn't sure >.< I should try an easier to work with render next time....that arm sticks out a bit too much xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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