Astolfo Posted January 1, 2013 Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 I'm getting in the bandwagon [s]and failing horribly.[/s] Same rules, free for use, blah blah blah. [img]http://i45.tinypic.com/1f7l38.png[/img] [img]http://i45.tinypic.com/2vtxfdw.png[/img] [IMG]http://i45.tinypic.com/2q21wm9.png[/IMG] More coming up. I'm slower and not as good as the others, but I still try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted January 1, 2013 Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 First would've been much better without the big purple glow in the way. Second looks all-right but there is too much going on, you need to focus on the render rather than the background. Also don't be scared to use more G-Maps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 Thanks Serenade~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted January 1, 2013 Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 More than welcome, if you want reviews on your next pieces you know who to ask. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted January 1, 2013 Report Share Posted January 1, 2013 Second is a little messy still, but much better. Atmosphere is improving. I think Tormy and I were both agreed on the purple glow there on the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 Bump~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted January 3, 2013 Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 I like the new one conceptually, but it lacks [i]oomph[/i]. It's cool, but not made for utility. Not even sure whether the blur was needed. Glowing up the hexagons could have made better sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted January 3, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 Okay then. Thanks. Would you think there is a particular area I'm good at? Bad at? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted January 3, 2013 Report Share Posted January 3, 2013 I think you should experiment more before I say anything. There's not much to evaluate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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