OCG help wanted

[NikolaSama]

I'm not sure, if I did this right. Could you check this?

 

'Discard 1 Fire-Attribute Monster from your hand to your Graveyard and inflict Direct Damage equal to the monster's Level X 100. This effect can be used once per turn.'

 

'As long as this card remains in Face-Up Position, gain 200 X number of Water-Attribute Monsters on your field Life Points in each of your Standby Phases.'

 

'Tribute 1 Earth-Attribute Monster on your field and raise this Monster's DEF by 500.'

 

'As long as this card remains in Face-Up Position, Air-Attribute Monsters can't be targeted by Spell or Trap Cards.'

 

Also, I would like to hear your opinion on the effects.

[72night]

"Once per turn, discard 1 FIRE monster from your hand to your Graveyard. Inflict Direct Damage equal to the discarded card's level x100."

 

"As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, during your Standby Phase, increase your Life Points equal to x200 for every WATER monster on your side of the field."

 

"Tribute 1 EARTH monster on your side of the field and increase this card's DEF by 500."

 

"As long as this card remains face-up, negate the effects of your opponent's Spell Cards and Trap Cards that designate WIND monsters."

 

The effects are good, nothing to special. Kinda boring in my opinion, but that's only me, don't worry. XD Also +rep appreciated! XD

[NikolaSama]

Thanks, I also need this one corrected.

'Negate the effects of your opponent's Spell Cards and Trap Cards that designate this card. Tribute 1 monster on your field and destroy all DARK monsters on the field. During your Standy Phase, flip a coin. If Heads, discard a random card from your opponent's hand. If Tails, Draw a card.'

I'm thinking the Tails effect should be deleted or something... How about you?

[72night]

ya it should, it isn't very balanced. Since either way it's a win win situation XD. Make it so that your opponent has a win situation as well, like maybe make it, If tails, discard a random card from your hand. ^^ Oh, and Heads and Tails doesn't have to be capitalized.