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Of more important what is with all the villians using apple? In addition im somewhat confused with Beginings post, its a bunch of small things so its not like this is a huge flaw that I am completly hanged up on like the weird weapon things.

 

Buuut:

 

1. Queen of hearts actually never lost in kingdom hearts, her forces were defeated naturally when she flipped out against Sora but she... was suprisingly pretty cool about it and declared a cease fire, the heartless never successfully best her and she actually is pretty diligant about weeding them out. She was a ass but atleast in kingdom hearts she wasnt evil. It can be assumed due to the nonsense inherent in her domain she died of having nothing better to die from. Place is weird like that.

 

2. I am seriously so confused with this apple thing, it's like is the real superior Vetoxsebejs? (Steve jobs)

 

3. Frankly Narissa always struck me as the single handedly most genre savy character in the entire history of disney, this is why rather then kill off the princess at once in fantasy world where the good guys always win, she sent her to new york WHERE EVERYONE GETS SHANKED. She also made fun of how the male character was ironically the damsel of distress and so on. Her problem was that she thought her henchman would just take her shit since thats what henchman do but since it's manhattan tropes were able to be subverted and she got royally fucked. She also seemed like someone who had no real objective showing up there, she lived in a different world and went to Manhattan to shank a bitch, whos the bitch she is shanking?

 

I bet its Morganna, evil witches gotta stick together girl always knew Narissa was her main squeeze, shes got a wit like a knife and a booty like pow.

 

1. She would simply see Sora stomping on all of those soldiers at Alice's trial and that would equal defeat. The screen wouldn't show the Queen of hearts acting all calm, it would switch to the next one royal showed.
 

2. Okay what happened is that heartless went all over New York to find Narissa (originally Horvath), but I guess I can expound more upon that later. In turn the Heartless went through all the buildings in New York including the Apple store. I simply had them snatch three iPads from the store. They all would've come back on their own accord but Narissa used her super magic to take over a heartless and appear before Nerhyx. Therefore he called all of them back and thought it would be a more effective way to get the point across. I would have put the apple store bit, but it just seemed extraneous so I got rid of it.

 

3. So the problem is why do I have Narissa in New York anyway? Besides the obvious I messed up in choosing Horvath and had to scramble and find another Disney villain, the story line is like all KH interventions in Disney. Nerhyx has come at an unstated/newly created part in Enchanted movie. For the premise of this story I was making it so Narissa was checking to see if New York would be an appropriate place to send the damsel. This was going to be via that omni view thing she uses to see people through liquids and whatever and that is when the heartless spot etc etc you've seen the rest. And to further address you point about Narissa being the genre savy queen. Well Enchanted as a movie is just a satire on the entire princess theme. So that is why I over inundate her with images of the other queens defeat because for someone who just happens to know everything about everyone else's tropes she would easily grasp her own.

 

Hope that helped. Now I need to figure out where to go next. Cars or Incredibles?

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1. She would simply see Sora stomping on all of those soldiers at Alice's trial and that would equal defeat. The screen wouldn't show the Queen of hearts acting all calm, it would switch to the next one royal showed.
 

2. Okay what happened is that heartless went all over New York to find Narissa (originally Horvath), but I guess I can expound more upon that later. In turn the Heartless went through all the buildings in New York including the Apple store. I simply had them snatch three iPads from the store. They all would've come back on their own accord but Narissa used her super magic to take over a heartless and appear before Nerhyx. Therefore he called all of them back and thought it would be a more effective way to get the point across. I would have put the apple store bit, but it just seemed extraneous so I got rid of it.

 

3. So the problem is why do I have Narissa in New York anyway? Besides the obvious I messed up in choosing Horvath and had to scramble and find another Disney villain, the story line is like all KH interventions in Disney. Nerhyx has come at an unstated/newly created part in Enchanted movie. For the premise of this story I was making it so Narissa was checking to see if New York would be an appropriate place to send the damsel. This was going to be via that omni view thing she uses to see people through liquids and whatever and that is when the heartless spot etc etc you've seen the rest. And to further address you point about Narissa being the genre savy queen. Well Enchanted as a movie is just a satire on the entire princess theme. So that is why I over inundate her with images of the other queens defeat because for someone who just happens to know everything about everyone else's tropes she would easily grasp her own.

 

Hope that helped. Now I need to figure out where to go next. Cars or Incredibles?

 

 

Besides the discussion on worlds did we ever decide on who the 7 princesses would be? Also Narissa can be in New York for the same reason as in the movie or maybe she's checking the place out before sending the princess there.

 

 

I'm guessing you missed that part or did you just read all of Jane's post and not mine?

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Okay so lets make a list

 

New York via Sorcerers Apprentice and Enchanted

Aladdin

Nightmare Before Christmas

Little Mermaid

Peter Pan

Hercules (Hades Cup at least) 

Twilight Town 

Black Cauldron 

Incredibles (Think I'm heading there next)

Cars (seems to be happening) 

 

Did I miss anything. That's seems like so much yet so little at the same time lol and still out 7 princesses of heart so yay.

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Sorry for the absence of posts. Been going through a LOT of crap lately irl :/ I'll start on a post right  now.

 

So, how's Cars gonna work? I assume the  apprentices will turn into cars, but I'm not fully sure how combat's gonna work there. You know, since we have  no hands in which to wield our Keyblades or any other form of weapon ._.

 

I still think Repunzelshould be a princess too xD 

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Make one up. We'll name her Kair- I mean... Iriak.

 

But seriously, we should just make the last one an original. That way we could expand on other characters romances and stuff rather than bombarding Viola with that.  Hell, one of the Nobodies could fall in love with her. That could be the thing that goes wrong to screw them over.

 

Just saying there's a lot of potential  with doing that xD

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-.- A Nobody in love...

*Prepares an anihlatrics*

Though I do agree that it might be smart to make our own princess of hearts but just anagraming Kairi's name probably isn't a good idea, lets actually think about this, what world is she from, how old is she, what is she like, and appearance, finally is she going to be useful or useless.

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POSTED :D

 

 

-.- A Nobody in love...

*Prepares an anihlatrics*

Though I do agree that it might be smart to make our own princess of hearts but just anagraming Kairi's name probably isn't a good idea, lets actually think about this, what world is she from, how old is she, what is she like, and appearance, finally is she going to be useful or useless.

 

Well, to be fair, there's Roxas and Namine...

 

Of course naming her Kairi backwards is dumb xD I didn't seriously mean it.

 

I'd assume she'd be around the same age as the apprentices (17 since that's the middle ground there) and why not make her from Twilight Town? I'd say Radiant Garden, but  that's where EVERYONE comes from so no. as for what she's like, there's really not much personality difference with someone who's got a heart of pure light and a mary sue .3. Hate to say it, but she'd probably be a lot like Kairi with only a few changes (like she's not Kairi)

 

I'd also like to request she be at least a little useful. Kairi was so painfully useless through the  series thus far it actually  hurts to see her keep popping up in it .3. I mean, obviously she's gonna do something next game (FINALLY) since she's the seventh light to face the thirteen darkness', but it shouldn't have taken an entire game series for her to finally get off her ass.

 

 

 

I think the Kairi's anagramming thing was sarcasm, Trimage. But I do agree that we should make an original. And yeah, too many guys are pouncing on Viola (three, to be exact) xD. It'd be nice to have it spread out a little.

 

I'd like to point out that while Shuren does like her, he's not exactly pouncing on her xD So far he's been too dumb to even recognize he likes her that way .3.Not saying he won't pounce, he's just taking his time~

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Okay so World to princess ratio is 

 

Sera in unknown world(1) New York(1 possibly 2 if we use Viola as 1) Aladdin(Already had one so no) Nightmare Before Christmas(probably no) Little Mermaid(I don't think we should use this one) Peter Pan(none) Hercules(maybe)  Twilight Town(maybe) Black Cauldron(1) Incredibles(none) Cars(I don't think we should use this one) Tangled(1)  Pocahontas(1) Princess and the Frog(1)
Grand total 6/7 out of 7
 
Also Roxas and Namine weren't really in love their counterparts were in love and that kinda transferred over to them, plus they were special Nobodies and we don't have any of those.
 
Finally we need to fill the worlds with characters pretty soon otherwise the apprentices won't have anyone to interact with.
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