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Kingdom Hearts: The 13th Requiem [PG-13/Started/Not Accepting]


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Varian, a few things.
1. Why did your character feel it necessary to explain what Claire and Lightning already know? They know she's on another world. That's why they are trying to kick the Bowler Hat Guy's ass so they can leave!
2. From the way you described it (or, in this case, didn't describe at all), your character appeared out of nowhere, and somehow knows about these two, as if he has been watching them for quite some time. You do realize that these two are not very trusting, as evidenced by the fact that they almost killed each other recently?
3. How does he know who they are, and how long has he been watching them? It's rather creepy how he knows everything about them already.
4. Again, you're not describing your character. What indicates that he may be able to provide some sort of help?

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1-He didn't know how much they knew so he explained it in case they didn't know
2-He was hiding but ya I should have done a better job of explaining where and how he was watching them
3-He began watching a little before the two met up
4-As for how they know whether or not he's telling the truth they don't but he's planning on using their desperation to his advantage.

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I'd suggest that each ring looks identical until worn; at which point it personalises itself to the user. It would be better than him already owning these random rings that for some reason perfectly suit the kids - if it was like it, he would likely have hundreds of the rings.

So I'm gonna take a simple metal band and personalise it to James.

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[quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1357838699' post='6117316']
I'd suggest that each ring looks identical until worn; at which point it personalises itself to the user. It would be better than him already owning these random rings that for some reason perfectly suit the kids - if it was like it, he would likely have hundreds of the rings.
So I'm gonna take a simple metal band and personalise it to James.
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That's a good idea. The movie doesn't explain how the rings are made, so I felt like leaving that bit up to interpretation. He either had a number of rings on hand and went to get them, or he only just then made the rings.

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Name: Sugar Momma
Gender: Female
Age: Unknown
Alignment:Resistance
Source Material: Proud Family
Appearance: [img]http://24.media.tumblr.com/78205f0a9f01c9f03ee837cf674562da/tumblr_mfkld81mpO1r0qte5o1_250.jpg[/img]
Personality: Suga Momma is rather sarcastic and blunt, quick to deride others. Suga Momma enjoys watching wrestling as well as heckling her worthless son Oscar. Despite her bluntness she cares a lot more for her family then she is willing to show and willing to fight all of these punk whippersnappers.
Character History: No one exactly knows when Suga Momma was born, some claim Suga Momma was always there, sitting on a chair, watching violence before humans had a word for it. Suga Momma eventually had a family, including a evil sister who fell to the darkness long ago, it is in combatting her that Suga Momma first encountered the heartless and has secretly been preparing for there return. A return that is about to come sooner then she could have ever imagined. After a heartless attack wrecked her television, Suga Momma has taken to hunting down the one responsible and forcing whoever it is to pay for a new tv.
Equipment & Abilities: Suga Momma is far stronger then she looks, able to easily wallop people who logically shoul be in far better shape then her. Suga Momma is also capable of traveling worlds through sheer will, much like Beast demonstrated in the first game. Suga Momma also has a poodle, poodles are pretty cool.

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[quote name='Double C4' timestamp='1357870166' post='6117697']
Someone care to elaborate how Yen Sid WAS a Keyblade Master? Even in BBS, I never saw him with one, which surprises me.
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He retired so he no longer uses a keyblade and the like.
[quote name='Generation D' timestamp='1357870597' post='6117707']
So if you are resistance then you have to play as an alrready created character eg: Cloud of Final Fantasy?
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In theory yes but Varian is playing Xehanorts son as resistance so you can probbably play the spawn of something else.

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[quote name='Double C4' timestamp='1357870166' post='6117697']
Someone care to elaborate how Yen Sid WAS a Keyblade Master? Even in BBS, I never saw him with one, which surprises me.
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He retired so he no longer uses a keyblade and the like.
[quote name='Generation D' timestamp='1357870597' post='6117707']
So if you are resistance then you have to play as an alrready created character eg: Cloud of Final Fantasy?
[/quote]

In theory yes but Varian is playing Xehanorts son as resistance so you can probbably play the spawn of something else.

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