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SIII: Seven Swords Saga [ OOC / Started / Not Accepting ]


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[color=#0000CD]I gotta say, Blu. Another excellent looking RP. Sorry it took me so long to get to really checking it out. School and work prevented me from doing so. But now I'm here. And I have an idea for my character. But it may be a bit before I have it completely done. Working more on the weekend. I'll get to it...after anime...a bit behind because of work... [/color]

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Nearly done with my app. :D

[img]http://i48.tinypic.com/2dsg5xi.jpg[/img]
[i]"Are you worth my attention? Then let's go! Ikke!"[/i]

[b][u]Personal Info[/u][/b]
Username: 76290112
Name: Hakyu
Age: 19
Gender: Male
Date of Birth: Dec. 23rd
Blood Type: O
Hobby(s): Practicing sparring with others, taking "nature walks"
[spoiler="Appearance"]http://i49.tinypic.com/258ndsk.png
http://i47.tinypic.com/34hf6ko.jpg[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Personality"]A very vibrant personality that has a natural charisma, but whips out at people if they step out of line. For instance, if someone made a joke with him as the "pranked" person, he'd probably throw the person up a tree or something else near. He also doesn't like people being difficult whether on purpose or not. He looks kind of bored/"rude"/unruly at first appearance, but once you get to know him, he's a great guy to be with. If you stay around Hakyu too long though, you might become slightly more... "unruly", to say it nicely. Also, he doesn't mind nicking some food and items from stalls as he goes on his morning dashes through the roads, and he likes the challenge when the "police" come after, or the victims chase him. An enigmatic person in all other aspects.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Bio"]When Hakyu was born, he was the child of a kind bar owner and a nice woman, and he often helped with the chores and such at home, before he got old enough to help at the bar. Inevitably though, with it being feudal Japan and all, he grew to wanting to learn the art of the sword, and first started practicing at the age of 4, waving a bamboo stick. He kept a strict regime to himself and taught himself how to use the sword, and at age 14, he was relatively good, being able to mimic others' technique nearly instantly fast, and could find faults and such. At the bar, once he started to help there, he started using his treasured stick he practiced with all the time to help with the serving, launching cups and plates across the room without spilling their contents.

Once he reached the age of 18 and took leave after thanking his parents repeatedly, he started looking through Japan in search of a professional swordsman. Hakyu nearly gave up, when he found a humble old village deep in the woods. The man dwelling there went by the name of Koitsumi and took it upon himself to teach Hakyu the finer arts of swordsmanship. Hakyu also learned to be humble and generous there, as he was a bit of an arrogant brat before. Along with learning the arts of swordsmanship, he also learned techniques of espionage and disguise.

One day, drunk rogue soldiers stumbled through the woods, and found a now 19-year old Hakyu along with a 81-year old grandfatherly figure. They took it upon themselves to "liberate" the duo of some nice possessions, but quickly turned violent when the two resisted, and cut down the old man. In rage, Hakyu sliced his bamboo stick through the air so hard it smashed the entire hand of one warrior, and crushed the windpipe of another. Then, with a final yell of anger, he drove the sharpened stick through the chest of the still alive warrior. He quickly checked over Koitsumi, but the old man was near death, and when asked why he hadn't resisted, like the man could've easily done, the man said, "Because it is harder, yet more wonderful to spare, than to reap lives." The man soon died after, and Hakyu had regretted killing the two soldiers, and buried the wonderful figure as nice as he could, before taking on a new identity and sliding back into the world of the streets and roads.

Hakyu is believed to be located somewhere between the country of Ryūjin and Fukai currently.[/spoiler]

[b][u]Combat Info[/u][/b]
Warrior Type: Swordsman
[spoiler="Primary Weapon(s)"][url="http://www.northstarzone.com/sitebuildercontent/sitebuilderpictures/Yamato.jpg"]http://cloud1.lbox.m...48039067859.jpg[/url][/spoiler]
[spoiler="Secondary Weapon(s) & Equipment"]Bag of 200 Kane - a relatively decent amount of money
Whip - a slightly enchanted whip that can extend out and transform slightly into different shapes for Hakyu's use[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Ability(s)"][b][u]Superhuman dexterity[/u][/b]
Hakyu has faster reflexes, can do a variety of dodges and flips, and jumps and such that would normally be impossible. This helps Hakyu get into "perfect positions" during a fight.

[b][u]Enhanced Mind[/u][/b]
Hakyu has a very high intelligence, and combined with his dexterity, he is a very skilled foe, being able to near-instantly think and react to situations.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Special Technique(s)"][b][u]Godspeed[/u][/b]
Imbues Hakyu's weapons with Nature Energy temporarily, so the weapon can slice through the air blindingly fast it leaves "background images". Can only use this around 8 times a week, and for short periods of time around 7 minutes at a time.

[b][u]Dual Gear[/u][/b]
Can temporarily split his blade into two swords he can wield blindingly fast, and the strike after he fuses the blades together again will be in essence, a shockwave. However, this is very difficult to use for the sonic boom effect, so for now, he uses it as a simple dual wielder. The duration of the Dual Gear is around 10 minutes.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="Magic"][b][u]Untouchable[/u][/b]
Makes the user and the sword intangible, but still able to damage the opponent. This exhausts Hakyu however, and he can only keep it up for around 10 seconds. He only uses it about once per every couple of months, on average.[/spoiler]

[b][u]Other Info[/u][/b]
• Hakyu's favorite food is mapo tofu.
• Hakyu can be mischievous frequently.
• No matter how fast he moved in the past, if he got caught in trouble, his mother could spank him 50 times in before you could say "Kuso!"
• Has a sharp, elegant script
• Likes to read novels

Here's my finished App. :D

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Dusk, everything looks great, but you need to make your personality a line longer to fit the requirements.

Double C4, good luck ^^

Loki, well it varies, depending on when all apps are in and right now we're still waiting on a few. [size=1]Back in the day, that wouldn't have been a problem >:][/size]

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Um, Blu, I'm a little confused about something. As far as I'm aware, only the seven nations of where the RP is being set in have been mentioned. Will there ever be any mention of cities or villages of those nations whatsoever? Cause the bio in my app is lacking a particular village in which it's set in.

Would it be okay to make up one just for the sake of me finishing my bio?

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I've been contemplating this since yesterday and after thinking for a while, I've decided to eliminate the following people:

Kidd Buu
Loki Rancid
Neph
Ketodama

While all of your apps were good, they didn't capture me in the way the other apps did. I wish you the best of luck in your other RPs and such.

Congratulations to those who weren't eliminated. You're safe for now.

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Chaos, don't celebrate, you were one person away from being eliminated -__- lol jk xD

But I agree, everyone has amazing apps.

Anyways, there are still people who haven't completed/posted their apps so the competition is still very much on. Remember, I'm only accepting three others.

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[quote name='.:Blu:.' timestamp='1355693507' post='6095206']
Chaos, don't celebrate, you were one person away from being eliminated -__- lol jk xD

But I agree, everyone has amazing apps.

Anyways, there are still people who haven't completed/posted their apps so the competition is still very much on. Remember, I'm only accepting three others.
[/quote]

I know, I'm just glad I didn't get eliminated right away. Mainly this is me getting excited cause I wasn't able to send in an app for your "Pandoria" or your other RP I'm having trouble remembering...XD

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