RickiMinaj Posted December 10, 2012 Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 [center] [img]http://i752.photobucket.com/albums/xx161/WhiteMoosa/CraneProject.png[/img][/center] [center]V2[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted December 10, 2012 Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 It's original and I can see a concept forming but the execution is inapt. I feel as if the bottom portion is the main problem in terms of concept, remove that, add a blue hue, and perhaps some origami fish, koi maybe? To allow for the concept to flow more naturally. Other than that it's a cool style, interested in seeing more. Oh and I've missed you babe<3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted December 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2012 Night - working on and fixing the piece up at the moment. So add some origami fish, remove the blur, etc... Thank you. And I've missed you too babe <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted December 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2012 Bump, edited version posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted December 18, 2012 Report Share Posted December 18, 2012 It still suffers from that surreal feeling, try and establish a bit of reality and proper atmo with the use of colors and varying depth. The blur that you had prior was not completely inadequate, try and establish a proper perspective and if accurately executed, the blur will do just fine. Add that blue tone to the bottom half, that should help develop the piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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