RogueZero Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Thanks a lot, I'll edit it right now But, do my chant have to be in latin ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 No of course not. It just makes it look cool~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 [quote name='Spike the Bloody' timestamp='1358050922' post='6119427'] No of course not. It just makes it look cool~ [/quote] latin is cool. is boss. everything is cool in latin. All the cool kids are doing it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueZero Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 No problem, I'll translate it right away now, am I accepted ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Yep~ PM me though if you wish to be tracking the main party, before you make your first post~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Cortizean Malachi[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Age:[/b] 18 years of age.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Gender:[/b] Male. To go with his gender, his sexuality is Heterosexual.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Appearance:[/b] Cortizean stands as a rather tall height warlock (or wizard, but he calls himself a warlock), and is fit for his age rank. He stands at 6 feet and approximately 2 inches at best. Being tall and fit, he's been characterized as being skinny, but having adequate weight enough to hold his own height, and possibly more because of males having more upper body strength than females. His hair is seen as being spiky, long, and black with two strands of white hair in the middle section that combines together to look like a white feather (google Chyuta - A Last Dream and you'll see what I mean). His facial characteristics are defined as having a narrow jawline; while his nose is small as the tip is small and round itself, as the bridge of the nose is narrow. His upper and lower lip is small and soft; his upper lips being an inch bigger than the lower lip. His eyes shows the personality that he has of being relaxed and yet lazy because of the fact that his eyes looks as if he was/is half asleep. Both eyes consist of the color black, but as a magician of high power (regarding Signweaver), they change from the color black to white pale white, almost as if Cortizean had no eye pupils whatsoever. Cortizean also wears scars of various training that he has endured, and trying different methods of training in order to improve his magical abilities. He also wears a scar on the left side of his eye. His skin tone is that of a smooth skin, similar to a baby's bottom.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]The attire that Cortizean wears. This attire was given to him by his father for when he died of illness, as his father was a powerful magician himself back in his young years. Cortizean still wears it until this day. Cortizean's attire simply consists of a hood with [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]a scarf that is wrapped around the neck [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]that he wears to shield his appearance from others, a hood that he mostly wears over his head that its material is charcoal washed. The hood's color his black, as his entire light armor color is black. Wrapped around his neck is line with wolf fur that is lined on the collar of the armor. His robes are very much different then actual robes that look like dresses to some mages. The material of the robes (or chest piece) is silverite - which is the material for the rest of the armor except the hood. The robes are described as a chest piece with a three-dimensional armor plate that takes the appearance of a reading book, small suspenders that wrap around the armpits to the back shoulders to keep the chest piece along with the silver wolf fur in tact, an armor vest with no sleeves that is tucked inside a tight big belt with a little carrier bag attached to it, and on the bottom of the belt are white ragged tears from the tight compression shirt that he wears under the armor vest. His gloves is consisted of two different gloves: On the [b]Left Hand[/b], it is described as a open finger gauntlet with 3 belt buckles wrapped around the wrist to the forearm. On the [b]Right Hand[/b], it is described as a full arm gauntlet with the fingers of the gauntlet to look like claws of a ferocious beast. The gauntlet also comes with a shoulder gauntlet and an elbow gauntlet attached to the gauntlet that has spikes coming out of it.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Cortizean's bottom attire consists of leggings and paladin boots that reaches from the feet to his knees with spikes coming out of them. There is also a white cape attached to his waist. (For then entire outfit, google Mantle of the Champion from Dragon Age: 2)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Personality:[/b] [/size][/font][/color][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][size=3][color=#000000]He specifies himself as the most quiet of his species, as words mean nothing unless spoken to. As a child growing up, Cortizean was respectable and therefore a loving child. He did what he was supposed to do and followed every direction. He was very helpful and cheerful toward other individuals and a lot of people respected him because of his personality and the way he was very helpful toward his parents. He was very proud for being the son of well-respected parents and siblings of that manner. But when the War took away his hopes, dreams, friends and his father, everything changed. His personality and ideological thinking process switched to those of the emotion of evil, his heart blacker then the midnight sky. Now, he cares for no one but of himself, and disrespects anyone that comes in his way. [/color][/size] [size=3][color=#000000]His cold demeanor and aloof personality allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised and off-guard. However, he does not seem to compensate and comprehend the Human trait of fighting against all odds or the very concept of the so-called Human heart; during his battle with an enemy in his younger years of training, he completely overwhelms the opponent after he damages Cortizean's left eye, causing him to go blind on that eye, yet the opponent continues to fight on regardless of that manner. Because of this, he sighs to himself, looks at his opponents and immediately tells him that "to continue this constant fighting is utterly disappointing." Cortizean is also highly perceptive, cunning, and analytical. During his first visit to Reli as an evil wizard, he makes several surprisingly accurate remarks on the people that confronts him, but keeps it to himself. During battles with his opponents, he uses the concept of manipulation to throw his enemies off-guard and toy with them, putting vigorous and revolting insults in their head in order for them to attack first so he can analyze their movements and make strategies to have a flawless victory or a victory with a few marks on his body. [/color][/size] [size=3][color=#000000]Nonetheless, he analyzes his surroundings to get a better feel of the environment and "make himself feel at home."[/color][/size][/font] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Implement:[/b] As a more traditional wizard, Cortizean channels his energy in the means of a wand. The wand is described as a wand with chestnut wood and a dragon heartstring core (think of Peter Pettigrew's second wand in Harry Potter).[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Weapons:[/b] Cortizean's weapons is somewhat very odd and strange for a regular wizard. Instead of rods, staffs, and wands, he personally uses daggers as his weapons. Cortizean's daggers are much different than any other dagger. The blade of these daggers are tip-less, meaning that they are good for both cutting and using it for defense. Another thing about the daggers is that the daggers also holds a second handle that extends from the main handle at 90 degrees to which Cortizean calls it, "Dagger Tonfa." Cortizean - who usually holds the daggers by the secondary handle that extends from the main handle - can utilize the daggers into both offense and defense. The dagger's appearance are unique as well. The blade itself has the shape of a miniature lightning bolt as the cross-guard is described as a U-shape guard covering 2 inches of the blade of the dagger, with lightning design.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Primary Magic Type:[/b] Summoning. Cortizean utilizes Summoning as his primary because he feels as if the greater the number, the greater the chance to win. His chants after chants of summoning aid in battle gives his allies a much needed boost. From surprise attacks to late entries, Cortizean uses Summoning as more of a support build to his abilities. In addition to summoning, Cortizean specializes most in summoning birds. Reason why because attacks coming from the air would probably be the most unexpected surprise since a lot of people don't pay attention to what's above them at times.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Secondary Magic Type:[/b] Arcane Force. Cortizean adapts himself in the arts of Arcane Force magic - a magic that most wizards, mages, or warlocks specializes in the most, being that it is used for destruction. Cortizean uses Arcane Force as more of his offensive build, summoning giant fists of the gods to hammer down opponents, pushing them away from Cortizean or deflecting incomng attacks, and even pulling enemies closer to him to deliver a fatal strike.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][spoiler=Magical Abilities][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Messenger from the Above[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Type:[/b] Summoning (Bird-type)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Recharge: [/b]3 minutes.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]What it does:[/b] Cortizean uses this ability as simple as the name - to send messages from people who are at a far distance from him. The bird that he summons to do so takes the appearance of a Greater Vasa Parrot.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Spies from the Sky[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Type:[/b] Summoning (Bird-Type)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Recharge:[/b] 4 minutes.[/size][/font][/color] [size=3][b]What it does:[/b][/size][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3] Not many people would hardly recognize birds watching their every move, unless the bird is continuously following them everywhere they go. Cortizean uses this ability as a means of spying on his enemies. The problem with this is that Cortizean takes spying into overboard to the point where his enemies can destroy the bird because the bird follows them wherever they go, giving away his cover. The type of bird he uses for this is Cinnamon Mutation Cockatiel.[/size][/color][/font] [size=3][b]Name:[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Flight[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Type:[/b] Summoning (Bird-Type)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Recharge: [/b]6 minutes.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]What it does:[/b] Cortizean uses this ability as a means of... well self-explanatory. He summons large birds that can usually carry up to at least 5-10 people at the most, and flies them to their destination. Cortizean mainly uses this skill as a traveling ability - when walking does not suit him best for far destinations.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Rain[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Type:[/b] Summoning (Bird-type)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Recharge: [/b]25 minutes.[/size][/font][/color] [b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Chant: [/size][/font][/color][/b][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][size=3]Les oiseaux de l'obscurité, entend mes paroles, et tenir compte de ma commande. Douche vos ennemis et les tuer tous.[/size][/font] [size=3][b]What it does:[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Cortizean uses this ability as simple as the name. He jumps high into the air and summons a large bird to keep him in the air. After doing so, he chants a spell. While chanting the spell, Cortizean grabs his wand and points it at the surrounding enemies or enemy. After saying the last word, a 5 second pause is issued. After the pause, a swarm of birds dives right to the enemies or enemy. Maximum number of 15-20 birds are summoned by this spell. The birds have explosives tied onto their backs. As they make contact with the ground, they explode, causing area damage as well. This spell is used as a Last Resort, when nothing else prevails in most of Cortizean's battles.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Name:[/b] Clone[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Type:[/b] Summoning (Bird-type)[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Recharge: [/b]3 minutes.[/size][/font][/color] [size=3][b]What it does:[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Cortizean uses this ability as simple as the name. He summons one clone made of birds to aid him in battle.[/size][/font][/color] [size=3][b]Name:[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Fists of the Gods.[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Type:[/b] Arcane Force[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b]Recharge: [/b]5 minutes.[/size][/font][/color] [size=3][b]What it does:[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Cortizean smashes his opponents to the ground with a hammer-like fist made from thin air.[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font][/color] [size=3][spoiler=Bio][/size] [font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][size=3]Cortizean was born the second youngest of three kids (two boys and one girl) in the Malachi household that was located in Viz, the first safe point in Breol. However, he lost that position when his parents were gifted with another girl, making it four children with two of the same gender. When he was young, he would always go outside of his home and look up at the sky in amazement of watching the birds fly all around the atmosphere. His father would go outside with him and tell him all about birds: species, what kind they are, how they fly, how intelligent they are, and etc. In addition to that, he would always go to his father, along with his brothers and sisters, so that he could teach them the ways and arts of magic - since their father was a tutor at doing so. Their father started out with the oldest to the youngest, starting with Cortizean's older brother, Ricol. Ricol explained to their father that he wanted to be a elemental type of wizard, and that he always wondered why did it burn when you touch fire. Their father gave Ricol a book that was mainly indicated for Fire wizards, and he also gave him a wand to practice some of the spells in the backyard. Everyone watched as Ricol was getting the hang of the fire magic, but he was still learning. [/size][/font] [font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][size=3]It was now Cortizean's turn to learn magic from their father. The sister's wanted to learn also, but their mother insisted not to because she viewed magic as dangerous for the little girls and maybe when they get older, they can do so. Their father had no problem as the two little girls had made pouty faces. Their father laughed as he kissed both of them, promising them he would teach them magic someday. After that, they left with their mother. Now, it was Cortizean's turn to learn magic. Cortizean explained to his father about the birds they have seen together, and he wanted to base his magic around that. Cortizean's father gave Cortizean a hand-made wand, created by his father, to use for that type of magic which was called Summoning. He spent hours with his boys teaching them the arts of magic, the advantages and disadvantages. As the children got older, Cortizean and his brother Ricol mastered magic at the age of Eighteen (Cortizean - Summoning (Bird Type) and Arcane Force) and Twenty-One (Ricol - Elemental (Fire) and Life Force). Their sisters would still learn magic right now. A war broke out in Viz as monsters had infiltrated the safe point, killing everyone in sight. Cortizean and his family fled to the forest, leaving their father and Ricol to fight behind them. Cortizean summoned a giant bird to take his mother and two younger sisters (Mimi who is Seventeen and Mia who was Sixteen) to much farther place, away from here. The war was brutal and fierce, but the wizards manage to get the best of the monsters and killed off majority of them - the rest decided to retreat. [/size][/font] [font=verdana, geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cortizean had searched for his brother and father, but to no avail was the brother, and found his father covered in his own blood, almost on the brink of death. His father told Cortizean that Ricol fled to the forest so that he could be kept away from the war. His father died in his arms. Cortizean made his into the forest in order to track down his older brother.[/spoiler][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 I vote no to having a blatantly evil character added since we have enough to deal with. Particularly since he doesn't have a bio, does this wierd combination of his history with his personality, and never explains what his "species" is. And there's also the matter of him going over the starting spell limit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Well, he did say join the bad guys. Can't blame him enough for that. As for species, I forgot to type in humans as in wizards. My apologies. And going over the spell limit, I deleted the 4 spells, now I have a maximum of 6. And as for the personality. It's not mixing the history with the personality, or having a "weird combination", it's showing an example of how he acts in certain events. Someone misread my application. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 you need a section labeled: Bio. That's where it should describe your character's history more in depth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damiano Tosē Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 If I can recall, Rouge Zero does not have a bio either, but I am not the one to complain. I'll get to mines right away. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 ha. nice call. maybe yosuke'll notice that one, but good on you to not complain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueZero Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Whoops ! Sorry Seems like I forget about it, I'll edit that right away ! Thank you for reminding me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 ....dammit, I dunno what I'm thinking with lately. Howd I miss no bio. Rouge, dont post till you have a bio up xD Hey Beginning, how powerful is Silvest on his own? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 So...Spike. Still want me to wait for Aix? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Yeah. That way you can reply to everyone as a group. BTW guys. Cantrips like Mel just did? You can all do. Those first two up there are meant as a guideline I've been waiting for a chance to use that radio-interference thing. :3 Also, Beginning, Silvest can't push Beatrice. Her and Mel are up against the back of the cage, and to be able to move you, he'd either have to be outside the cage or be able to pull you, neither of which looks likely =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Asriel Dreemurr Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 It's possible that there was some confusion as to the size of these cages, just saying. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Probably. I'll make sure that doesnt happen again =P Btw guys, the cages are a bit like those big dog crates, but maybe a small bit bigger, enough for two humans to fit with some wiggle room left over. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueZero Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 I already have a bio, so can I post right now ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Bio needs to be a bit longer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RogueZero Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Awright I'll edit it right away ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Guys, my timezone is EST. Selena doesn't have to be Jak's girlfriend. They are sort of just friends ATM. I'll go post now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Trololol. Nao go post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 i'll make my post after ketodama. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 Alrighty. Lol, gonna have to have Beginning post one more time before we go into le dungeon. Back and forth character action does get in the way sometimes doesnt it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted January 13, 2013 Report Share Posted January 13, 2013 i kinda like how it's going now. seeing how beatrice is tooootally gonna reject mel. -pulls up a chair- dis gon' be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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