ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 It'd be so much easier if Kotomi was there...To kidnap...Then keep safe from Sakura...And taunt Sakura with....and piss Sakura off...and cause Plasma-Rocket rivalries....and stuff....and epic battles...and stuff.... Y'know....*hinthint**nudgenudge* XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Well she does live in Unova. Have Plasma grunts kidnap her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
encapturer Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 You know, Mallath could have a change of orders.... EDIT: Or he can run into her... DOUBLE EDIT: [quote name='Oswald the Lucky Rabbit' timestamp='1353890107' post='6078019'] Well she does live in Unova. Have Plasma grunts kidnap her. [/quote] And contact has successfully been made. Don't know how easy you want this to be, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Why not make things even more complicated with a Plasma/Rocket stand-off? *coughcough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 While Victor can fight the 3 or 4 people who are in New Bark, maybe, or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
encapturer Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 A battle on multiple fronts, huh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 [quote name='encapturer' timestamp='1353901097' post='6078134'] You know, Mallath could have a change of orders.... EDIT: Or he can run into her... DOUBLE EDIT: And contact has successfully been made. Don't know how easy you want this to be, though. [/quote] Virizion will make it difficult for Plasma to get her, but she'll be caught [quote name='Mihails Tāls' timestamp='1353947399' post='6078363'] Why not make things even more complicated with a Plasma/Rocket stand-off? *coughcough* [/quote] Sakura's inner b**** will be released. Be aware EDIT: Brandon, I posted my last app. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 How much money does Kotomi have on her person, if she can purchase a last minute flight to Orre, at 19 years old? And it's getting a bit annoying with Kotomi just running around all over. Seriously, it's bad for story and stuff. Having someone holed out somewhere with no other PCs around, especially in a place where the PCs have very little access to, is just asking for lack of activity. It would've been much better for you to have left Kotomi in Anville Town, and have her search around for somewhere to hide while Mallath chased her. And I doubt a 19 year old girl could've out run a veteran fighter and pokémon wrestler, even with the 5 minutes given to her by the plant. It's called Power-Playing, and again, it makes for a dull RP. Sorry if it seems like I'm nit-picking, but a lot of the RPs I've been in recently have been stressful and quite demanding, and I was hoping for a simple, easy RP with fun and lots of Character interaction and action and stuff, not chasing a 19 year old across 3 countries within about an hour or so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 No feel free to nit pick. I suck at writing. I was planing to have a clumsy Rocket spy in the Under waiting for her. Whoever runs into them first can have Kotomi since this grunt won't be that smart. He'll take her back to the port in Cherrygrove I made up, where Victor can meet them. EDIT: In fact, I could add that real quickly if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 S'okay; I was just a bit worried that it was gonna result in inactivity; cos leaving a character alone with no PCs nearby is a terrible thing to do. Rarely goes well. I wouldn't say you suck at writing; your posts are good, it's just that you need to think of the impact what your characters are doing will have on other characters and the story; not to mention the activity of the RP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Ok, no idea what to do next. Ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 [quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1353969225' post='6078619'] I wouldn't say you suck at writing; your posts are good, it's just that you need to think of the impact what your characters are doing will have on other characters and the story; not to mention the activity of the RP. [/quote] Yeah I need to work on that... I'm not good at thinking ahead :I EDIT: I think I'll add it anyways. Cause I'm kinda bored :I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Kay then. Also, I'm waiting for Eki, Hayato and Sisori, if people didn't pick that up. A guy in a suit, with a strong looking Espeon and a crafty looking Murkrow just turned up in front of them, asking for a Girl that had vanished a few moments before, if you needed it shortened (T'was a long post). An Idea could be to recognise the Plasma logo that is emblazoned on Victor's tie, though that is the only place it appears and of course, that is merely an idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Oh really! Nice, I'll get right on that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 I was thinking that Victor could see the Rocket grunt trying to drag Kotomi through the forest, then say Sakura wanted him to transfer Kotomi to Plasma. Or whatever. The grunt will be dumb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 And literally as I posted that, Chaos posted completely ignoring Victor. >.> Seriously, the head of one of the most ruthless organisations in pokémon history, and the most profitable man in Unova turns up, inquiring about a girl you met a few moments ago, and you're more interested in your headache? XD Victor shant be pleased. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Oh and I added the grunt kidnapping Kotomi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Accidental double post. And cool; I'll wait until the interaction with these other kids; the shadow can spot the grunt and appear beside Victor in a few posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 We were having our own little interaction. Eki and Sisiori are all caught up now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 Kotomi's in the open now if Victor wants to take over Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 I did say "a couple of posts". Victor's going to get caught up in a 3-on-1 pokébattle, he's not going to be paying that much attention. Just sit back and watch the pokémon battle while Victor beats up these pip-squeaks XD (Maybe resorting to the use of Crobat to defeat them truely) and for the Shadow to notice her and alert Victor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pichu Posted November 26, 2012 Report Share Posted November 26, 2012 So I think I want to add a small thing to Kotomi's app. She is technically the owner of Giovanni's Persian, but he left him to her, but Kotomi never went to get to and thus it lurks around the Rocket HQ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 [quote name='Spike the Bloody' timestamp='1353888541' post='6077982'] App (WIP) Name: Ariel Williams Age: 22 Pokemon Within: Raquayza. Gender: Female Appearance: [img]http://i86.photobucket.com/albums/k94/Inuyashagirl244/Whyareyousolate.jpg[/img] Personality: Ariel is very shy, often stuttering and blushing quite a bit. She enjoys hanging out wither her Pokemon, and with a friend, Pokemon battles. She doesnt really have a sense of humor, and doesnt get most jokes. She dislikes most boys, and goes out of her way to avoid contact with a lot of them. She also likes to climb to the tippy-top of some trees, and just sway in the breeze. Bio: Ariel grew up normally in Viridian City, spending most of her time in the forest. But when she was 14, these evil people known as Team Rocket entered her home and murdered her mother, who was pregnant with a son. Ariel was in the forest when it happened, but when she found out, she wouldnt come out of her room for days. She recieved a visit from a very elderly Professer Oak about a week after the incident, as Oak was living with his grandson, Blue, Viridian Cities Gym Leader. He died 2 weeks later. Ariel was convinced it was Team Rocket, although the general consensus was that of a heart attack. Ariel has sworn to destroy Team Rocket, although many laugh at her for having such an ambitious dream for such a shy girl...but they dont know what she knows. She has strength. She...can fly. Current Pokemon: Staraptor, Pidgeot, Crobat, Fearow, Musharna, Empoleon Other: Ariel can fly a few feet off the ground for about 20 minutes at a time, and can reach speeds of 40 mph. [/quote] Guess who finished!Waiting on you Chaos. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Super Chaos Sonic Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 You mean other than the fact that Hayato is already getting into the battle? XD Done ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted November 27, 2012 Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 Nice. I'll have Sisiori and Eki bring out their pokemanz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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