Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 6, 2012 Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 Ok here are some Toon of my very own that I am working on. The set is called Toon Mayham Pegasus Sympom.I would like some original image ideals from you artist out there. EDIT: Toon Fox Archer Galaxy [img]http://i.imgur.com/NRWxw.jpg[/img] This card cannot be speical summoned. When this card is normal summoned your opponate loses 300 life points for each toon-type monster on the feild. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. During the end phase this card was normal summoned you lose 500 for each monster on your opponent's side of the field. EDIT: When "Toon World" is on the field you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. This card cannot attack the turn it was Summoned. When this card is Normal Summoned inflict 1000 point of Damage to your opponent's Life Points. Then inflict 600 points of Damage to your Life Points. [img]http://i.imgur.com/PHqEs.jpg[/img] All Toon monsters gain 300 ATK/DEF. If a face-up "Toon World" card on your field would be destroyed by an opponent's card effect destroy this card instead. If this card is destroyed by its effect then you may play field spell "Toon Town of Darkness" from your hand or deck face-up in the field spell zone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/t7uDj.jpg[/img] This card cannot be set. When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. All face-up Toon monster on your side of the field cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. EDIT: This card cannot be set. When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect it cannot attack that turn. All face-up Toon monster on your side of the field cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. [img]http://i.imgur.com/L1xVW.jpg[/img] All Toon monsters gain 400 ATK and lose 200 DEF. While This Card is Face-Up on the Field, You Can Pay 500 Life Ponits Activate this Effect Instead of Conducting a Normal Draw During Your Draw Phase. Choose 5 "Toon" or "Manga Ryu Ran" Cards From Your Deck and Have Your Opponent Pick 1 of Them at Random to Add to Your Hand. Shuffle the Rest Back into Your Deck. When a face-up "Toon World" card on your field would be destroyed by an opponent's card effect destroy this card instead. If this card is destroyed by its effect then you may play field spell "Toon. City Chaos" from your hand or deck face-up in the field spell zone. EDIT: All Toon monsters gain 400 ATK and lose 200 DEF. While This Card is Face-Up on the Field, You Can Pay 500 Life Ponits Activate this Effect Instead of Conducting a Normal Draw During Your Draw Phase. Choose 5 "Toon" or "Manga" Cards From Your Deck and Have Your Opponent Pick 1 of Them at Random to Add to Your Hand. Shuffle the Rest Back into Your Deck. When a face-up "Toon World" card on your field would be destroyed by an opponent's card effect destroy this card instead. If this card is destroyed by its effect then you may play field spell "Toon. City Chaos" from your hand or deck face-up in the field spell zone. [img]http://i.imgur.com/TGzrn.jpg[/img] You can only activate this trap during your opponent's battle phase. Monsters on your opponent side of the field can only attack the Toon monster with the highest ATK. (If it's a tie, you get to choose.) During your stand-by phase you must pay 500 life points or destroy this card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/kxWMg.jpg[/img] Select 1 face-up Toon monster you control to activate this card. Banish 1 Toon monster from your graveyard. The selected Toon monster gain half the ATK of the Toon monster that was banished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Donvermicelli Posted November 6, 2012 Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 Ok, I encourge the idea of new Toon cards, however I suggest then you also try to find images to use for them ( or draw them) Aside from that there are numerous OCG errors in your cards. Read them carefully you should be able to spot them. If not, look at the yugiohwikia or compare to other cards. One thing of particular is of interest: why give toon Defender 3000 Def when he can't be in Defense position? (shield and sword?) In any case 3000 Def is really high for a level 4 monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 He is ment to have a big shield in the image that other Toons hide behind while this little warrior Toon stands in front ready to fight. This also make it where you can't defend with him unless you take his effect away. In addition these toon monster have new effect due to the fact that they are not Toon copies of other monsters. So if they are normal summon they can attack and with the option of specail summon at the cost of attack lost. So Toon Archer not being able to be special summoned and Toon defender not being able to be set is how I truly want them but I will make Toon defender level 5. Now as far as "no image" goes I state I would like some original image ideals. Mostly meaning I can't draw and need help. Finally I try to keep it close to tcg North America version. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teaching dragon Posted November 6, 2012 Report Share Posted November 6, 2012 You do realize that toon world is a field spell so if you play another field spell then you can't use the toon monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2012 [quote name='Teaching dragon' timestamp='1352245852' post='6062557'] You do realize that toon world is a field spell so if you play another field spell then you can't use the toon monsters [/quote] Toon world is a continuous spell card [IMG]http://i1137.photobucket.com/albums/n516/devineavenger66/img322.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teaching dragon Posted November 7, 2012 Report Share Posted November 7, 2012 Whoops sorry bout that. Thought it was a field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 7, 2012 Well don't study toon monster as much as I do then you get things mixed up... I still need some official art for my cards though. My Toon are not going to be copy cats like the first generation of Toon monster but a new kind that are evolved and different. They will be the new toons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 I will constantly update any card so I may find the proper balance. And my toons are "c" class and a bit "b" class so I guess that makes them a new "d" class I welcome any art suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pokezekrom77 Posted November 8, 2012 Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 toon cards suck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 Regardless I like them. [img]http://i.imgur.com/5Pe95.jpg[/img] When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. All face-up Toon monster on your side of the field cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When a Toon monster successfully attacks directly you gain life points equal to have the damage delt. EDIT: When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect it cannont attack that turn. When a Toon monster successfully attacks your opponent directly you gain Life Points equal to half of the total Life Points your opponent lost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/pJt0o.jpg[/img] Both players can Normal Summon or Specail Summn Toon monsters without Tributing, by paying 500 Life Points x the number of monsters needed for the Tribute Summon. "Toon World" cannon be affected by your opponent's card effects. Pay 500 life points during your end phase or destroy this card. EDIT: Both players may pay 500 Life Points each monsters needed for the Tribute Summon of a Toon monster. "Toon World" cannot be affected by your opponent's card effects. Pay 500 life points during your end phase or destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/TY9Ci.jpg[/img] You can only control 1 face-up "Toon of Faith". When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. All face-up Toon monster on your side of the field cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When a Toon monster is target by an opponent's card effect you can tribute "Toon of Faith" to negate and destroy that card. EDIT: You can only control 1 face-up "Toon of Faith". When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. All face-up Toon monster on your side of the field cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. When a Toon monster is target by an opponent's card effect you can tribute "Toon of Faith" to negate and destroy that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2012 Toon fans I'm sorry until the card maker is back up I will not be releasing anymore Toon cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2012 Two new Toon cards are now being released. A Page from Toon World (Normal Spell) EDIT: Instant Toon World (Normal Spell) [img]http://i.imgur.com/oWbku.jpg[/img] When this card is activated it acts as "Toon World". This remains face-up on the field until end of the turn. (When this card resolves it dose not count as being destroyed.) Living Toon Factory Level 8 (Earth) Machine/Toon ATK/2850 DEF/3100 [img]http://i.imgur.com/GjfNk.jpg[/img] When "Toon World" is on the field you can special summon this card from your hand, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. Once per turn you may special summon 1 Cyber Toon token to your side of the field in attack mode. Level 4, EARTH, 1200ATK / 1200DEF Machine/Toon type monster ( When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. This token can only be tribtued for tribute summon of a Toon monster.) EDIT: When "Toon World" is on the field your can special summon this card from your hand, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect it cannot attack that turn. Once per turn you may special summon 1 Cyber Toon token to your side of the field in attack mode. Level 4, EARTH, 1200ATK / 1200DEF Machine/Toon type monster ( When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. This token can only be tribtued for tribute summon of a Toon monster.) It seems there are still problems with the card maker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2012 Due to the wonderful fact that the card maker isn't functioning properly I had some time to edit my Toon monster's effect and a spell card. I really would like some feedback people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted November 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2012 I need some help with ocg card wording and not on the Toon's summoning effect the effect after the Toon monsters summoning conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodcent Posted December 4, 2012 Report Share Posted December 4, 2012 I think they are pretty awesome, however you should make a trap that acts like toon world but saves your toons you know, also you shouldn't make them real powerful if they can attack directly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted December 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2012 [quote name='rodcent' timestamp='1354652897' post='6085236'] I think they are pretty awesome, however you should make a trap that acts like toon world but saves your toons you know, also you shouldn't make them real powerful if they can attack directly [/quote] I have made a trap like that called "Toon World Nexus" but until the card maker image is repaired I won't be posting anymore cards including my Zodiac Toon Cards. In addition I do make my Toons weak if they have strong ATK they are of higher levels. Please note that these Toon monsters don't need Toon World to be normal monster/ effect monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodcent Posted December 4, 2012 Report Share Posted December 4, 2012 Also toon country side looks too normal to be a toon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted December 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 4, 2012 If you find a better picture let me know Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted December 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 I have updated the fallowing effect for all level 4 or lower Toon monsters (except Toon Archer Fox, Galaxy) When "Toon World" is on the field you must Special Summon this card from your hand. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card cannot attack the same turn it was Special Summoned. I have updated the fallowing effect for all level 5 or higher Toon monsters When "Toon World" is on the field you can only Special Summon or Set this card from your hand, but Tributes are required for monsters Level 5 or more. When "Toon World" on the field is destroyed, this card is also destroyed. If your opponent doesn't control a Toon Monster, this card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly. If a face-up Toon Monster is on your opponent's side of the field, you must select the Toon Monster as an attack target. When this card cannot attack the turn it was Special Summoned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pravus Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 I love the idea of new toons... love the fact that someone thought of finally giving the toons a Field spell. And i do believe that you need better art for your pictures, for example, haveing Maxamillion Pegasus as the art for three of your cards isnt a good thing, it makes it harder to see differences. But overall good ideas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RoaringSilence0 Posted December 11, 2012 Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 Dude, I hope you realize that work in the current meta... That, and the fact that a few are broken, really make them bad. 1. New Pictures 2. Fix your OCGDude, I hope you realize that work in the current meta... That, and the fact that a few are broken, really make them bad. 1. New Pictures 2. Fix your OCG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasus_Maxamillion Posted December 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted December 11, 2012 [quote name='Pravus' timestamp='1355196260' post='6090395'] I love the idea of new toons... love the fact that someone thought of finally giving the toons a Field spell. And i do believe that you need better art for your pictures, for example, haveing Maxamillion Pegasus as the art for three of your cards isnt a good thing, it makes it harder to see differences. But overall good ideas [/quote] Well those with the same picture of Maxamillon Pegasus you can see each say "No Image" [quote name='GLaDiaTe' timestamp='1355196291' post='6090396'] Dude, I hope you realize that work in the current meta... That, and the fact that a few are broken, really make them bad. 1. New Pictures 2. Fix your OCG Dude, I hope you realize that work in the current meta... That, and the fact that a few are broken, really make them bad. 1. New Pictures 2. Fix your OCG [/quote] if you have read my other sections that aren't with my cards. I state five things 1 I am not an artist and need help finding pictures or someone willing to do the art work for the cards, 2 I am always trying to refine my cards so I will be updating them when I do, 3 My Toons are a new breed, 4 the imager is down so I can't post new cards, 5 I wouldn't mind some help with the wording.(Except for the Toon effect) I am creating a new spell card and I need a name for it. Here is its effect. Once per turn you may selcet 1 Toon monster level 5 or higher. Pay 500 Life Points to tribute 1 level 4 or lower Toon monster on your side of the feild: Add half the original ATK of that monster to the ATK of them selected monster, until end of turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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