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Hey, it's that guy with infinite ATK and DEF...whose effect prevents him from being killed in battle.

On the subject of things that refuse to die in combat:

[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Hollow_Spirit"][img]http://i.imgur.com/cS0EO.jpg[/img][/url][size=1]<(Click me!)[/size]
By Summoning this and attacking with it, you create an unusual wall.
As written, it won't respond to its own effect unless an ATK or DEF change happened before that. Come at meh Hornet

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[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/Wlox1.jpg[/IMG]

[quote]You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by removing 2 Ice Counters from anywhere on the field. When this card is Special Summoned: You can target any number of cards on the field; distribute Ice Counters among the targeted cards equal to the this card's Level. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each Ice Counter on the field. Once per turn, when a card(s) with an Ice Counter(s) on it is destroyed: You can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower WATER monster from your Deck.[/quote]

[i]Armored White Bear [/i]from Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's.

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[quote name='Dr. Cakey Arclight' timestamp='1352401147' post='6063925']
Okay, round one is over, and the grading begins. This will also be the time I arbitrarily decide how many rounds we'll have and how people will be dropped. Because I'm so organized.

[spoiler='D.A._Siegrfried']
[img]https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/550288_263239723799388_334781245_n.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]
I can see the name in the effect, so why not.

[b]Grammar: 1/3[/b]
Missing word (same what?), missing space, a misspelled word, and "Spell/Traps" instead of "Spell/Trap Cards". When I said "grammar" I meant card grammar, not English grammar, but /ok.

[b]Strength and Balance: 2/3[/b]
It's a -1, which counteracts the fact that it makes the target 99% invincible to anything, so it might actually be useful. The price isn't hefty, but it is present and a bit interesting.

[b]Context: 3/4[/b]
I don't see anything particular useful about it in the current format, but nothing very [i]un[/i]useful about.

[b]Creativity: 4/5:[/b]
I particularly like the cost. And the world doesn't have enough Quick-plays.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 15/20[/b]
[/spoiler]

[b]Removing From The Field![/b]
"Removing from the field" is really weird. This is why actual cards may say "cannot be targeted or destroyed" or "is unaffected by card effects" but not "cannot be removed from the field". The original awkwardness came from the fact that cards like Reborn Tengu don't have their effects activated when they're returned to the deck, because shuffling and deck and resetting and stuff. But the monster is still obviously no longer on the field (one might say it was on the field, but got "removed"). So a card that says "When [i]x[/i] leaves the field, do [i]y[/i]" would still activate in such a case. Now we have Xyz Materials, which may or may not be on the field and may or may not be cards depending on the rule in question, who you ask, and the phase of the moon. So avoid these words when possible.


[/quote]

Dam, those grammar fails/lacks really hurt me. Oh well.
Missing word:name

Anyways
[b]Post Reserved for Card Submission [/b]

Heres my entry
[spoiler=Plasmectron]
[center][img]https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/14154_264275967029097_1991962303_n.jpg[/img][/center]
[center][/spoiler][/center]
Image is from [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Plasma_Warrior_Eitom"]Plasma Warrior Eitom[/url] from Yu-gi-oh GX. The name really isn't original but oh well.

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[img]http://i.imgur.com/WOReB.jpg[/img]

Effect:
This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Dimensionclaw Ripper". This card cannot be Set. When this card is Summoned: Banish 1 card in your Graveyard. Once per turn, when an opponent's card effect that would send a card to the Graveyard activates: Banish this face-up card and 1 other card on your side of the field; Negate the effect, and Special Summon 1 of your banished cards OR 1 "Dimensionclaw Ripper" from your Deck, then banish 1 card from your Graveyard. This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each of your banished cards. When this card leaves the field (except by the effect of Dimensionclaw Ripper*): Banish all copies of it in your Deck, hand, field and Graveyard. (yes I know it's long)
EDIT: *It doesn't say that on the card, but that's because for whatever reason all of my cards got deleted and I can't be bothered to re-do the entire card.
Card picture is from [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Archfiend_Matador"]Archfiend Matador[/url].

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Ooh, I'm late! Let's get this started.

[spoiler='DeathSDelano']
[img]http://i.imgur.com/Gj741.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 1/2[/b]
It's possible to find good quality images of anime card-art itself. Actually, now that I poked around for a minute or two, it's harder than I thought it was...well, whatever, it's only 1 point.

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]
That sure is a shining knight.

[b]Grammar: 2/3[/b]
Everything's fine, and then suddenly you hit this one point and everything goes wrong at once. 1) "your side of the field" is unnecessary. 2) effect(s), not effect. 3) I've never seen a monster's effect [s]used for Synchro or Xyz material[/s] used for a Synchro Summon or Xyz Summon. Monsters are commonly used, but not their effects.

[b]Strength and Balance: 2/3[/b]
This is a bit tricky. In terms of cons, it's a Synchro Monster, which are incredibly slow compared to Xyz Monsters, and its level + summoning conditions make it a bit tricky to summon, I think. It's too much of a bother with Agents, so probably the only deck to summon it would be some kind of dedicated Warrior/Chaos deck. But it's not good enough to put all that effort into summoning it. All it can revive are beatsticks, since their effects are negated and they can't be used as material for anything. And since I've dedicated my deck to summoning this, I probably won't be able to pull up something very useful, anyway.

[b]Context: 1/4[/b]
No particular point to summoning it except as a beatstick, and there are other Synchro beaters. Hey, by the way, why can I only control 1 Amatan?

[b]Creativity: 3/5[/b]
It's a relatively straightforward effect, but we don't see many Synchro Monsters with it.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 12/20[/b][/spoiler]

[spoiler='newhat']
[img]http://i.imgur.com/cS0EO.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]
I dunno what a Holliwillow is, but that's probably what one looks like.

[b]Grammar: 2/3[/b]
You're half in new OCG, half in a bad, old OCG. Here's your second effect, free of charge: "When this card is targeted by a card effect: Target 1 [b][other][/b] face-up monster with ATK or DEF different from its original ATK/DEF; Destroy that target."

[b]Strength and Balance: 1/3[/b]
Did you just accidentally make a 2000 ATK Level 3 monster with no drawbacks and a powerful effect? Er...wait. Okay, so if I attack with Holliwillow and switch its own ATK, its own effect activates, and it'll have to destroy itself unless there happens to be another target already in play (unlikely). Except, wait, no that won't happen, because its ATK hasn't changed yet, like you said...so it really is a 2000 ATK Level 3 monster with no drawbacks and a powerful effect. /ok

[b]Context: 3/4[/b]
People say ATK means nothing. This is a misconception. ATK is hugely important. But it's not worth expending large numbers of cards on because it's so fragile. So giving ATK-adjustment effects to a low-level monster makes sense. The downside is that it's a WIND Fairy, which doesn't have much to do with anything.

[b]Creativity: 4/5[/b]
A little too much creativity, maybe.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 15/20[/b][/spoiler]

[spoiler='- Neo -']
[img]http://i.imgur.com/Wlox1.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 3/3[/b]
Are there really no grammar problems????

[b]Strength and Balance: 2/3[/b]
On the one hand, this is Ice Counter support - you could make a monster with the effect "You can pay 500 Life Points to Special Summon this card from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. Once per turn: You can remove 1 Ice Counter from a card on the field; Inflict 4000 damage to your opponent" and it still wouldn't be OP'd. But you really should get rid of one of the effects (probably the ATK-gain, in my personal opinion). And maybe make it not able to be Normal Summoned, just for fun.

[b]Context: 4/4[/b]
How can you say no to Ice Counters? And of course WATER basically has best support.

[b]Creativity: 4/5[/b]
If you can't pick an effect, why not include all of them?

[b][u]Total:[/u] 18/20[/b][/spoiler]

[spoiler='D.A._Siegfried']
[img]https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-prn1/14154_264275967029097_1991962303_n.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 1/3[/b]
"Succsesfully"? I count more than ten errors on this card. It's neither new nor old OCG, but it seems to be a combination of new OCG and the grammar used on the old Pokemon cards I still have somewhere in my house.

[b]Strength and Balance: 1/3[/b]
A +1 every turn that can Special Summon itself?

[b]Context: 2/4[/b]
Despite being ridiculous, it doesn't work with much, either. Geargias, I suppose. Then you could add a searcher to Geargias so you can search while you search while you tutor.

[b]Creativity: 2/5[/b]
Special Summon from hand? Check. Add friend from deck to hand? Check. Do it once per turn? Check. Here's a tip: "If [i]x[/i], you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, you can add [i]y [/i]from your Deck to your hand" is basically every card ever.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 11/20[/b][/spoiler]

[spoiler='Vinyl']
[img]http://i.imgur.com/WOReB.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 2/3[/b]
Claws, yes. Dimensions, yes. But it's not ripping anything. Kind of the opposite, actually.

[b]Grammar: 2/3[/b]
Okay, I don't exactly get this card, but we'll deal with that later. You start out with old OCG and move to new OCG.

[b]Strength and Balance: 1/3[/b]
Good news: This card is not OP! Bad news: It's not very good. I can't Special Summon it, for one. It'll probably gain 500-800 ATK most of the time, so it's still pretty weak. Its effect seems pretty unhelpful to me - it's just a -1 that your opponent gets to choose when to trigger. Also (and this is important), this card doesn't work together with Macro Cosmos (it works 50/50 with Dimensional Fissure), because it requires the target to be [i]sent to the Graveyard[/i]. And, to top it all off, I have to Tribute Summon this dumb thing.

[b]Context: 2/4[/b]
Here's where you lose points for this card's effect being long and dumb.

[b]Creativity: 4/5[/b]
You do have that.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 13/20[/b][/spoiler]
tl;dr I'm biased towards people with lots of posts. Because post count is [i]important[/i].

[b][u]Round Three Rules:[/u][/b]
Here's how it'll go down in the final round: your image [b]must[/b] come from a Synchro Monster (it can be an anime-only Synchro). Then, with that image, you must make an [b]Xyz Monster[/b][b] with the [i]same Rank[/i] as the Synchro Monster's Level[/b]. Why so specific? Hell if I know.

So, you may have noticed, but YCM cannot make Xyz Monsters. If you don't already know, there's a site called [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-card-creator"]YugiCo[/url] that can produce Xyz Monsters. So basically, there's no point to even be on YCM anymore. You might as well leave now.

[b]Round three ends on Tuesday, November 13 at 3:35 PM EST.[/b]

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Well, I wonder if I can win with a bias against me from the only judge [/sarcasm]. I wasn't going to win anyway. Probably. Whatever, I ain't giving up, so here's my card:
[img]http://i.imgur.com/xDOCZ.jpg[/img]

2 Level 6 Monsters
When your opponent Special Summons a monster: This card gains 500 ATK. If this card's ATK changes (by any effect): You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy 1 card on your opponent's side of the field.

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Actually submitting early. :)

[spoiler=Mechite Claw]
[center][URL=http://yugico.com/user/34625-RealSight/card/33872-CGD/134552-Mechite_Claw][IMG]http://yugico.com/customcard/134552.jpg[/IMG][/URL] [/center]
[center][spoiler=Effect][/center]

2 Level 4 monsters
Once per turn, during either players turn: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 monster you control: Return it to your hand. Then if there is a monster of the same name in your Graveyard; This monster gains 1000 ATK until the End Phase of this turn. If this card as Xyz Materials; You can send this card to the Graveyard: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your Graveyard to your opponents side of the field and Special Summon 2 level 4 or lower monsters (From the Deck).
[/spoiler][/spoiler]

Image is of course Armory Arm. If your wondering about the effect, it's suppose to represent a claw machine.

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[img]http://i50.tinypic.com/5ken4h.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Text][color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 7 monsters[/size][/font][/color]
[color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle; banish that monster instead of sending it to the Graveyard then increase this card's ATK by 200. Once per turn, You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; banish 1 monster your opponent controls. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.[/spoiler][/size][/font][/color]
Its Dark Highlander /obv

basic of his effect; The banishing is him collecting souls, and the more soul he reaps with his scythe the stronger he becomes.

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[quote name='- Neo -' timestamp='1352682091' post='6067057']
Wait what? Where does it say that? O.o that and its not really archetype support outside of the name lmao
[/quote]
[quote name='Dr. Cakey Arclight'][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]You may not make a card that is support for an archetype or series.[/background][/size][/font][/color][/quote]

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[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/ZO9YH.jpg[/IMG]

[quote]2 Level 6 monsters
During the turn this card is Xyz Summoned, it is unaffected by the effects of Spell/Trap Cards. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 1 Level 5 or lower monster from your Graveyard; Special Summon that target in face-up Defense Position. If this card with no Xyz Material leaves the field by your opponent's card (by battle or by a card effect): Inflict damage to your opponent equal to its original ATK.[/quote]

EDIT: Here it is then.

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Got warned for a bit. Maybe I'm late and maybe I'll learn not to post "Core" as my entire evaluation of an OCG monster.

[img]http://yugico.com/customcard/135982.jpg[/img]
[spoiler="Lore:"]2 Level 10 monsters
Cannot be destroyed by battle. Any Battle Damage a player would take is also inflicted to the other player. Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up monster, except this card; gain Life Points equal to that target's ATK, then attach it to this card as an Xyz Material. During your End Phase: Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card or destroy it.[/spoiler]

Killing your opponent with this out is nigh-impossible if you don't attach something large (yours or your opponent's), since you'll both be taking the same damage. So this is more for card advantage 'n stuff.

On a belated note, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Machina_Fortress"]for ye who doubted my grammar[/url].

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[color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Since people were late (including me...) and had reasonably good reasons for it, you're all okay. No late penalties etc. Moving on.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[quote][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]On a belated note, [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Machina_Fortress"]for ye who doubted my grammar[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)].[/background][/size][/font][/color][/quote]
1. Konami's grammar sucks. Well, no, actually they're just doing something weird with the wording.
2. +1 point to you.

Now, let's begin!

[spoiler='Vinyl']
[img]http://i.imgur.com/xDOCZ.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 3/3[/b]
"Opponent's side of the field"? What is this, 2001? I can't really take off points for just one mistake, though.

[b]Strength and Balance: 2/3[/b]
Well, it's pretty strong. No concern about it being underpowered. It's both slower in effect and weaker in ATK than other Rank 6's, but its ATK could theoretically climb high. In practice, though, it won't, because your opponent won't Special Summon. If I were to pick out a thing I don't like about, it's that the card-destroying effect has no limitations on what activates it or how many times per turn it can be used.

[b]Context: 4/4[/b]
Too tired to talk about this more...er, what I meant to say was: it fits the era well.

[b]Creativity: 4/5[/b]
Unique placement of effects, interesting, sure.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 18/20[/b]
Ha! Bet you weren't expecting [i]that[/i].
[/spoiler]

[spoiler='D.A._Siegrfried']
[img]http://yugico.com/customcard/134552.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 1/3[/b]
You've done...what you always do to card grammar. I count ten errors on this card. That is a big number. It is not a small number.

[b]Strength and Balance: 1/3[/b]
"Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower monster from your Deck"

All I needed to know.

[b]Context: 2/4[/b]
So I've gradually realized the "Context" category is mostly the "me whining about stuff" category. The contents of the category itself are covered in Strength and Balance. Seriously, though, does summoning 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from your Deck (read as "Summoning any two monsters from your deck") not seem maybe a tad excessive?

[b]Creativity:[/b][b] 4/5[/b]
I don't hate the concept, though.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 13/20[/b]
You also win the [b]Most Overpowered Card of the Contest Award[/b]. Congratulations![/spoiler]

[spoiler='DeathSDelano']
[img]http://i50.tinypic.com/5ken4h.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness:3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 3/3[/b]
Although it's usually considered polite to only banish face-up monsters.

[b]Strength and Balance: 2/3[/b]
Honestly, for a monster that requires two Level 7's...maybe a little bit weak. The only really good Rank 7 is Big Eye, and this card is probably better than all the rest, but really, two Level 7's ain't cheap.

[b]Context: 4/4[/b]
200 is a pretty small number. Can I honestly take off points for something like that? [s]Yes[/s] No.

[b]Creativity: 3/5[/b]
The banishing concept is fine, but...I hate you, is basically what I'm saying. Wait, what?

[b][u]Total: [/u]17/20[/b][/spoiler]

[spoiler='- Neo -']
[img]http://i.imgur.com/ZO9YH.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 1/2[/b]
You chose the picture on purpose, but still...

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 0/3[/b]
YOU SAID LEAVE THE FIE*shot*
[b]3/3[/b]

[b]Strength and Balance: 3/3[/b]
Strong effect, limited by battle-destruction clause. Unaffected by Spell/Trap Cards on the turn it's summoned because reasons. And leaving the field doom punishment. Cool.

[b]Context: 3/4[/b]
I don't exactly see what these three effects have to do with one another. And the last effect could probably be abused pretty easily...

[b]Creativity: 3/5[/b]
Each effect is individually fairly interesting, but they have no unity that I can see.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 16/20[/b][/spoiler]

[spoiler='newhat']
[img]http://yugico.com/customcard/135982.jpg[/img]
[b]Image Quality: 2/2[/b]

[b]Image Appropriateness: 3/3[/b]

[b]Grammar: 3/3[/b]

[b]Strength and Balance: 3/3[/b]
Rating this card is going to be very tricky. It's strong, but it [i]is[/i] a Rank 10 after all. It's weird because it's ultimately going to shake up the entire game and change the way everyone plays (or be killed immediately). I was originally going to call overpowered, but after thinking about it...

[b]Context: 4/4[/b]
Incidentally, was this inspired by Heart-eartH Dragon? Anyway, after I thought this was OP'd, I wondered if maybe it was underpowered. But it can nom on monsters as well, [i]and[/i] they have to be face-up.

[b]Creativity: 4/5[/b]
Because perfection is a myth.

[b][u]Total:[/u] 19/20[/b][/spoiler]

[center][size=5]The Final Leaderboard[/size][/center]
[center][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eT66hSonZ-M[/media][/center]

[center][b]Leaderboard (as of Round Two):[/b][/center]
[center]D.A._Siegfried (26pts)[/center]
[center]DeathSDelano (26pts)[/center]
[center]Vinyl (27pts) (+1 from grading error)[/center]
[center]newhat (28pts)[/center]
[center]- Neo - (34 pts)[/center]

Last round, Neo had a strong lead on newhat, who was in second place, who in turn barely scraped out a lead from a three-way tie of complete failures. Er, I mean, a three-way tie for third place. Now, let's see how people did this round!

[center][b]Points Earned (Round Three):[/b][/center]
[center]newhat (19pts)[/center]
[center]Vinyl (18pts)[/center]
[center]DeathSDelano (17pts)[/center]
[center]- Neo - (16pts)[/center]
[center]D.A._Siegfried (13pts)[/center]

A surprising shake-up of the regular order. Now, let's award Bonus Stars. First is the Coin Star, which goes to the person who collected the most coins. Huh? What? No Bonus Stars? Uh...okay. Here they are, your final scores!

[center][b]Final Leaderboard:[/b][/center]
[center]D.A._Siegfried (39pts)[/center]
[center]DeathSDelano (43pts)[/center]
[center]Vinyl (44pts)[/center]
[center]newhat (48pts)[/center]
[center]- Neo - (50pts)[/center]

[center][media]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-YCN-a0NsNk[/media][/center]

Points for the first and second-place winners will be distributed shortly: first place will receive 50 points and second place will get 25. Hang on, what's this? There's a letter here. It seems to be addressed to Vinyl. Let's see what it says. *ahem*

[quote]Dear Vinyl,

Good job, you got third place.

Sincerely,
Dr. Cakey[/quote]

As promised, the third-place participant has also received their prize. Let me take this opportunity to congratulate all of you for your hard work card-making. I'm sure you all did your best. Except for [i]you[/i], Andrew.

[size=2]The probability that anyone here is actually named "Andrew" is pretty close to zero...[/size]

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[quote name='♥ D.A._Siegfried ♥' timestamp='1352915056' post='6069462']
You know............Cakey, the card gives your opp. a monster to..............also it's not new that I suck at card grammer.
[/quote]
Giving your opponent a monster might actually make it even worse, but that's a complex discussion for another place and time.

And, no, it isn't new that you suck at card grammar. That doesn't change the fact that you lose points based on that. But, whatever, you're not really bad, for the most part. You just need...something. Yeah, get...that...and then you'll be great.

[quote name='Vinyl' timestamp='1352915253' post='6069471']
Woot, I guess? Welp, congrats to - Neo - and newhat. I'm just happy I didn't lose. You've been a great host, Cakey (as far as I know). You should think about doing more of these.
[/quote]
I probably will, but not until November's over. Got a bit too much on my plate this month. Mmmm...plate...food...
[quote name='- Neo -' timestamp='1352916871' post='6069494']
Y u no like ultimate hyunlei :(

Anyway, congrats to everyone and what not! I'd like to thank my family and friends...([i]if I had any[/i]).
[/quote]
You don't have any family?

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[quote name='Dr. Cakey Arclight' timestamp='1352923759' post='6069560']
Giving your opponent a monster might actually make it even worse, but that's a complex discussion for another place and time.

And, no, it isn't new that you suck at card grammar. That doesn't change the fact that you lose points based on that. But, whatever, you're not really bad, for the most part. You just need...something. Yeah, get...that...and then you'll be great.

[/quote]

I wasn't implying that I shouldn't have had points taken off for grammar........just that my grammar sucks

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