Agro Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 For this being only the second time I've drawn in manga style, I think I did pretty well. Sorry about the lighting guys, my room is terrible about that. [img]http://i.imgur.com/q29DZ.jpg?6042[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 Your lines seem really short and a little dark. Other than that, the mouth is awkwardly low. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapidfire Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 I like it. It's pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='sicknastyKakashi' timestamp='1351481755' post='6056114'] Your lines seem really short and a little dark. Other than that, the mouth is awkwardly low. [/quote]Got any specific spots on the piece to use as an example of that? It's not supposed to be uber-realistic after all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='Agro' timestamp='1351482081' post='6056117'] Got any specific spots on the piece to use as an example of that? It's not supposed to be uber-realistic after all. [/quote] It looks like you pressed in short, hard lines all over the place. Like, almost everywhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='sicknastyKakashi' timestamp='1351482940' post='6056122'] It looks like you pressed in short, hard lines all over the place. Like, almost everywhere. [/quote]Yeah, I tend to do that.Is that... bad? Or something? If it is, what SHOULD I be doing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 The general idea is that you should use light flowing lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 I agree with Kaka. The standard is that the mouth should run along a horizontal line between the earlobes. Other than that...damn, man. The detail in the shading is just phenomenal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='Stone Cold Loki' timestamp='1351485307' post='6056155'] I agree with Kaka. The standard is that the mouth should run along a horizontal line between the earlobes. [/quote]Depending on the style and angles. This one, the mouth is actually where it's supposed to be., though maybe just a little bit too low. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='Stone Cold Loki' timestamp='1351485307' post='6056155'] I agree with Kaka. The standard is that the mouth should run along a horizontal line between the earlobes. [/quote] Yeah... nobody's mouth is that high. That's nose high, yo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 29, 2012 Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='sicknastyKakashi' timestamp='1351486600' post='6056180'] Yeah... nobody's mouth is that high. That's nose high, yo. [/quote] Oh yeah, duh. I got them mixed up. Mouth is half way down from the nose to the chin. :/ I guess that explains the sarcastic comment you made on my status. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2012 [quote name='Stone Cold Loki' timestamp='1351488480' post='6056189'] Oh yeah, duh. I got them mixed up. Mouth is half way down from the nose to the chin. :/ I guess that explains the sarcastic comment you made on my status. [/quote] [quote name='sicknastyKakashi' timestamp='1351486600' post='6056180'] Yeah... nobody's mouth is that high. That's nose high, yo. [/quote]If you look close enough, you can see a line where his mouth used to be before I changed his chin. Would you say I should put it in the middle of where the old and new mouth are? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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