Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 11, 2012 Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 [center]i have not draw people per say in quite a few years and these are some rough draft of an idea thing in my head. yes it was done only in pen. no pencil. i have made many mistakes that i can not undo (white out yeah but its hard to draw on that). so im showcasing this anyways maybe re-do it and take it a tad more seriously next time instead of a rought draft it will most likely be a final draft.[/center] [center]HERE WE GO[/center] [center][Spoiler=?][/center] [center][Spoiler=1][/center] [center][img]http://i47.tinypic.com/10f10ua.jpg[/img] [/Spoiler][/center] [center][Spoiler=2][/center] [center][img]http://i48.tinypic.com/b714pd.jpg[/img][/Spoiler][/center] [center][/Spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2012 fix the errors and bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted October 14, 2012 Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 Let's just say you'd feel tremendously better If I didn't provide any cnc. [u]Showcase[/u]: scaring newbies off since 2007. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cin Posted October 14, 2012 Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 NW please refrain from spamming in showcase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 [center][quote name='Yin' timestamp='1350206298' post='6044136'] NW please refrain from spamming in showcase. [/quote][/center] [center]Technically Spam Yin LOLZ[/center] [center]Will no one comment on the actual thread itself LOLZ?[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 1. Scan your drawings or photograph properly (without the blur and in proper lighting) 2. The above a trillion times. 3. "Technically Spam Yin LOLZ". Seriously? I'm trying not to dislike you, but it's an apparently hard process. 4. Please save as .png. It's such bad quality otherwise. What do want us to comment on? I could just say everything's wrong but Night's done that already :3 Albeit more subtly. From what I can see, you're trying some sort of cartoon style. For the general benefit of those reading this thread wanting to do cartoon styles, I'll just go over the basics. Big thick lines and clean lineart is important. I can't tell because you can't photograph. Hands seem to be missing in the drawing. You should, you know, add hands. Don't corrupt drawings with speech bubbles when the bubble is uneven and the writing is wrong. It's rather flat and anatomy needs some serious work. If you want more on anatomy, just reply. I feel better writing out advice when I know someone's taking it in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted October 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 [quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1350324760' post='6045010'] 1. Scan your drawings or photograph properly (without the blur and in proper lighting) 2. The above a trillion times. 3. "Technically Spam Yin LOLZ". Seriously? I'm trying not to dislike you, but it's an apparently hard process. 4. Please save as .png. It's such bad quality otherwise. What do want us to comment on? I could just say everything's wrong but Night's done that already :3 Albeit more subtly. From what I can see, you're trying some sort of cartoon style. For the general benefit of those reading this thread wanting to do cartoon styles, I'll just go over the basics. Big thick lines and clean lineart is important. I can't tell because you can't photograph. Hands seem to be missing in the drawing. You should, you know, add hands. Don't corrupt drawings with speech bubbles when the bubble is uneven and the writing is wrong. It's rather flat and anatomy needs some serious work. If you want more on anatomy, just reply. I feel better writing out advice when I know someone's taking it in. [/quote] trying to mix japanese anime style with american cartoon style (it's a process) i was half a sleep trying to photograph it with a cheap camera hands are the hardest part his hairstyle makes him look like horns then "i will make a deal with you" go together but GOT IT its a rough draft i'm real good with portions it's a rought draft and it's been years since i drew a human' working it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
?someone? Posted October 25, 2012 Report Share Posted October 25, 2012 #1 fix target: Camerawork out of a ghost sighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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