The Dark Knight Posted October 10, 2012 Report Share Posted October 10, 2012 [center][img]http://cdn0.hark.com/images/000/000/515/515/original.jpg[/img][/center] [center]- First come first serve.[/center] [center]- First to 3 votes wins.[/center] [center]- The loser has to write 100+ word reviews to 2 of the winner's CC threads, chosen by the winner.[/center] [center]- The goal is to design a card that acts as a "boss" monster.[/center] [center]- Deadline for entry and card submission is 10/13.[/center] [center]The Dark Knight: 0[/center] [center][spoiler=Penumbra - The Chaos][img]http://i48.tinypic.com/2j4o8jo.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by its own effect. You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by banishing 2 LIGHT and 2 DARK-attribute monsters from your Graveyard. Once per turn you can select 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. Send it to the Graveyard. This card's Level, ATK, DEF and effect become the same as the sent card. If this card is removed from the field by the effect of an opponent's card, banish it instead. If this card was banished by its own effect; if your opponent banishes 2 monsters with different attributes from their Graveyard, you can Special Summon this banished card and negate the Summon of an opponent's monster. If this card was Special Summoned from the banished pile, when it leaves the field, add this card to the Extra Deck. If there are 15 cards in the Extra Deck, banish all cards in the Extra Deck; they cannot be targeted by the effects of cards you control. During your Draw Phase, if you draw this card, you can reveal it; target 1 banished LIGHT or DARK-attribute monster and return it and this card to the deck.[/spoiler][/center] [center]Kvn523: 3[/center] [center][spoiler=Cloudian - Maelstrom][img]http://i.imgur.com/maBzY.jpg[/img][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is in face-up Defense Position, destroy it. You can Special Summon this card from your hand by removing 4 Fog Counters from the field. Once per turn, you can put 1 Cloud Counter on all "Cloudian" monsters you control. All "Cloudian" monsters gain 100 ATK points for each Fog Counter on it.[/spoiler][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 11, 2012 Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 Wow, prize is very similar to sora's contest. Anyway, i'm interested but what do you mean b boss monster. A boss monster for an existing archetype (like Neo-Daedalus or Judgement Dragon) or just a general boss monster (like bls or quasar). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted October 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1349913853' post='6041868'] Wow, prize is very similar to sora's contest. Anyway, i'm interested but what do you mean b boss monster. A boss monster for an existing archetype (like Neo-Daedalus or Judgement Dragon) or just a general boss monster (like bls or quasar). [/quote] Yeah I "borrowed" it from his contest because I love the idea behind it. Helps stimulate reviews for CC no matter who wins. And it just has to be a "boss" monster. It doesn't matter if it's archetype specific or splashable; just has to be considered a "boss." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted October 11, 2012 Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 Hmm....If you are counting kvn's comment then I guess I'm out of luck but if not I'll be your opponent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted October 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 [quote name='♥ D.A._Siegfried ♥' timestamp='1349917195' post='6041908'] Hmm....If you are counting kvn's comment then I guess I'm out of luck but if not I'll be your opponent. [/quote] I was planning on counting it since he said he was interested. It's all up to him on that one. If he doesn't want to, you'll be next in line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 11, 2012 Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 Awesome, i'm in. I'll post card by tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted October 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1349933259' post='6042019'] Awesome, i'm in. I'll post card by tomorrow. [/quote] Sweet. I'll have mine up tomorrow as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted October 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 Cards have been posted and voting is up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted October 14, 2012 Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 Penumbra has way too many effects. It's reasonably good if a little slow, but aesthetically it's excessive. It looks like a check to Chaos Dragons, which could have been done far more simply. Maelstrom uses the word "Cloud Counter". Shame on you. It's also a bit slow, but Cloudians are too so it's appropriate. The ATK boost is more or less irrelevant since you'll wanna be deleting those Fog Counters as often as you can. The chief issue is that you can do so much with 4 Fog Counters that his effect is barely worth it. Favor to Cloudian - Maelstrom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted October 14, 2012 Report Share Posted October 14, 2012 [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][font=courier new,courier,monospace]Kv's:[/font] Cloudian - Maelstrom[/background][/b][/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] gets my vote.[/background][/size][/font][/color] [background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]Penumbra - The Chaos does way to much and is absolutely confusing. It's clearly a chaos monster but as stated it does to much. The length of its effect is also not very realistic.......So yeah pretty much following with Newhat.[/size][/color][/font][/background] Not much I have to say about Cloudian - Maelstrom that Newhat has already said. Well, only bad thing is the image but thats not really that important. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 15, 2012 Report Share Posted October 15, 2012 NOOOO, i thought i put fog counter.... oh well >.<. Still 2 points ^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 20, 2012 Report Share Posted October 20, 2012 So one has to many effects and the other doesn't have enough relevant effects.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Dark Knight's is too damn long and unrealistic. Vote goes to Kvn Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted October 30, 2012 Report Share Posted October 30, 2012 I win, WOOT! Thx sora. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted November 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 2, 2012 [quote name='AznKvn' timestamp='1351569599' post='6056963'] I win, WOOT! Thx sora. [/quote] Thanks for helping me with my experiment Now that my power's back on send me a PM with the 2 topics you want reviewed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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