Thar Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 [s]After several years, my blood is flowing for competitive card making again. So if anyone is interested, post here saying so, then PM me whatever criteria you wish. [u][b]The catch:[/b][/u] -You must have a decent reputation in CC. -No Fusions, Rituals, Synchros, Xyz's, etc. -No God cards or any "one time use" monsters. Try to keep it uncommon at most. Once an opponent is chosen (if there is more than one), I will post the cards and the match will begin.[/s] [i][size=6][color=#FF0000][b]THIS MATCH HAS ENDED. THOR WINS 4-0. LOCK THIS THREAD.[/b][/color][/size][/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 I am so up for this. Okay, I have an idea for criteria, thematically. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 [img]http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7047/6861665259_55b341be24_z.jpg[/img] That is all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Alright, Thor. Let's do this~ [spoiler=Thor's card] [img]http://i.imgur.com/uhMCv.jpg[/img] [quote=Lore][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 4 DARK Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned in any other ways. You can only control 1 face-up "Despair King Zyx". When this card attacks or is attacked by an Xyz Monster: Destroy that monster before damage calculation. Once per turn: You can target 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard; Attach it to this card, and treat is as an Xyz Material (Max.5). Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, or the Special Summon of a Monster; Destroy it, then inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent.[/quote][/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][spoiler=Loki'[/size][/font][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]s card][/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][img]http://i.imgur.com/zcO2a.jpg[/img][/size][/font] [b]Cannot be targeted for an attack except by another Fiend-type monster. During your opponent's Standby phase: Look at your opponent's hand and select a monster card from it; this card becomes a copy of that monster until your opponent's next End phase. During your opponent's next End Phase: Your opponent shuffles the monster discarded this way into their deck; Destroy this card unless you pay 100 life points for each level star on that monster.[/b] [/spoiler] The cards are up. Let this voting begin~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Loki's card cannot be seen. Maybe because I don't have a ____.com acount? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 [quote name='newhat' timestamp='1349629314' post='6039664'] Loki's card cannot be seen. Maybe because I don't have a ____.com acount? [/quote] You should at least be able to see the effect >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Look, Loki, if you're going to make a card, make sure that the effect actually [i]makes sense[/i]. [i]During your opponent's next End Phase: Your opponent shuffles the monster discarded this way into their deck. [/i]Yeah, and the effect of your card didn't tell you to select a monster from your opponents hand and[i] discard it. [/i]Also,you really need to clarify what "becoming a copy" actually means, as the term "copy" doesn't exist in YuGiOh. Look at Phantom of Chaos for example. Other than that, your card isn't actually worth a deck slot. I mean, what does this card give you? The off chance of revealing a boss monster, and discarding it (I have to assume the effect makes you to discard that card, as I stated earlier) and bumping this this up to a beater? So long story short, voting for Thor, as his card actually does something and doesn't rely on your opponent for having a strong monster in hand and isn't just some off chance random beater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saynt Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 I really like Despair King Zyx, image, name, effect, and overall theme. I do have a few points to nitpick though: 1. Every monster that has had a non-standard divisible-by-fifty ATK and DEF have been Fiend-Type, so if it wouldn't fit completely with that series, then why have those values? 2. "[font=tahoma,helvetica,arial,sans-serif]When this card attacks or is attacked by an Xyz Monster: Destroy that monster before damage calculation."[/font] There's no particular reason to have damage calculation, since the destruction is not by battle but by card effect anyway, and usually such effects don't involve damage calculation. 3. [font=tahoma,helvetica,arial,sans-serif]"Once per turn: You can target 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard; Attach it to this card, and treat is as an Xyz Material (Max.5).[/font]" Probably better to have it attach monsters that are destroyed by battle or by its effect as an Xyz Material rather than targeting any monster in the Graveyard. 1 free negation and instant Xyz destruction for it is a bit too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2012 Okay, so it's 2-0. Zanda, thanks for the feedback and I'll be sure to keep that in mind. Keep the votes coming. First to 5 votes wins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Knight Posted October 8, 2012 Report Share Posted October 8, 2012 [size=3][i]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by banishing 4 DARK Monsters in your Graveyard, and cannot be Summoned in any other ways. You can only control 1 face-up "Despair King Zyx". When this card attacks or is attacked by an Xyz Monster: Destroy that monster before damage calculation. Once per turn: You can target 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard; Attach it to this card, and treat is as an Xyz Material (Max.5). Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card, or the Special Summon of a Monster; Destroy it, then inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent.[/i][/size] Pretty basic anti-XYZ. Easy to summon but with that (obscure) ATK I can see enough things running over it. Its last effect could be slightly overpowered but it is pretty easy to get around. As you might be able to tell, I really like it. [size=3][i]Cannot be targeted for an attack except by another Fiend-type monster. During your opponent's Standby phase: Look at your opponent's hand and select a monster card from it; this card becomes a copy of that monster until your opponent's next End phase. During your opponent's next End Phase: Your opponent shuffles the monster discarded this way into their deck; Destroy this card unless you pay 100 life points for each level star on that monster.[/i][/size] First effect is meh. Good defense but easy to get around it. I’m not a huge fan of getting to poke around the opponent’s hand and potentially copy something like a JD or a BLS, particularly when it lasts through your turn. The last bit is what gets me…when did it mention discarding? There was nothing indicating a discard. Both are sort of borderline overpowered in my opinion but my vote goes to Thor for having a card that (and I believe this was already mentioned) makes sense and is far more consistent with its purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted October 8, 2012 Report Share Posted October 8, 2012 The idea of Thor's card being somewhat "anti-Xyz" makes it so racist that I actually like it. It's decently powerful, decent to bring out, and quite lulzy with ti's strange stats XD Loki's...ummm so how am I supposed to use this exactly? I can understand that it can be easily searched, summoned, etc, but frankly it looks so...unplayable. My vote: Thor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2012 4-0. One more vote for Thor and he wins. Thanks for the feedback, guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted October 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2012 Bump for lock. Thor is the better [s]brother [/s]man. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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