Lonk Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Knowledge Firestar - Tianji Level 4 FIRE Beast-Warrior/Effect ATK/1700 DEF/1200 Once per turn: When a "Firestar" monster is Summoned; You can set 1 "Firedance" Trap Card from your Deck. Once per turn: select 1 "Firestar" monster and 1 "Firedance" card in your Graveyard; shuffle the "Firedance" card to your Deck and add the "Firestar" monster to your hand. Leisure Firestar - Tianwen Level 4 FIRE Beast-Warrior/Effect ATK/1700 DEF/800 When a "Firestar" monster is sent to the Graveyard; You can set 1 "Firedance" Spell Card from your Deck. When this card destroys a monster by battle; you can shuffle up to 3 "Firedance" cards in your Graveyard and draw 1 card. Firedance - Persei Continuous Spell Card When this card is activated and there is a Beast-Warrior-type monster on the field or in your Graveyard; draw 1 card. Beast-Warrior-type monsters you control gain 100 ATK. Only 1 "Firedance - Persei" can be activated per turn. Firedance - Maffei Continuous Trap Card When this card is activated; all non-Beast-Warrior-type monsters lose 1000 ATK. Beast-Warrior-type monsters you control gain 300 ATK. Did I do a good job? Link to comment
Agro Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Okay, I'm going to level with you. Firestars are my favorite archetype because they're all balanced and good. What you've made isn't as balanced, and I REALLY don't like that. Tianji will +1 with Tenji and allows free +1s for the Firestar you may want to summon. Tianwen can set a card whenever something's sent to the Graveyard... in any way. I don't like the feel of that card. The second effect is fine. I have serious issues with Persei, since it will, more than likely, just be a Pot of Greed or better whenever you use it. Maffei does too much, you should not have given it that last part of the effect, that doesn't fall in line with the other Firedance traps. Link to comment
Lonk Posted September 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Fair enough. Will fix. Though Agro, one thing: Tianwen is "When" and "You can", so it doesn't work by any method of sending to Grave. Link to comment
Toffee. Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 [quote name='Agro' timestamp='1349041598' post='6035313'] I have serious issues with Persei, since it will, more than likely, just be a Pot of Greed or better whenever you use it.[/quote] Rabbit -> 2x Warwolf -> Persei to +1 -> Overlay for Firestar King -> Firestar King searches another Persei ???????????????? Link to comment
Agro Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 [quote name='Tentalus Therapist' timestamp='1349041824' post='6035317'] Tianwen is "When" and "You can", so it doesn't work by any method of sending to Grave. [/quote]Tianwen is probably fine, but I don't like the option to foolish it. Link to comment
Lonk Posted September 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 [quote name='Agro' timestamp='1349043342' post='6035333'] Tianwen is probably fine, but I don't like the option to foolish it. [/quote] Wouldn't the Foolish mostly end up dead in situations if you have it just for Tianwen? Link to comment
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