.Rai Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 [center][img]http://i49.tinypic.com/2mpiq1v.jpg[/img][/center] Done as a request. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simping For Hina Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 "You have gotten a lot better with text, and your execution looks really good too<3 " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted September 30, 2012 Report Share Posted September 30, 2012 Feels depthy and fluid. Lighting is harsh and far too focused only in certain areas. Again, the depth is all that's going for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted October 2, 2012 Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 Centered focal syndrome imo. I feel like some different colors could've also worked better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted October 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 Central focal was a thing requested that had to stay in the already highly modified request. I'll take in mind everything else though. Definitely agree with everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted October 3, 2012 Report Share Posted October 3, 2012 Not bad. The shiny effect and colors are quite appealing. You need to work on your compo (mainly not centering) and incorporate more effects though. Right now, it's not holding my interest for long enough. Perhaps try adding some more fractal/c4d/anything light effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted October 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2012 [quote name='Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh' timestamp='1349297876' post='6037229'] Not bad. The shiny effect and colors are quite appealing. You need to work on your compo (mainly not centering) and incorporate more effects though. Right now, it's not holding my interest for long enough. Perhaps try adding some more fractal/c4d/anything light effects. [/quote] I definitely would have used rules of proportion, but I felt bad for changing the request so much. This reminds me that I need more resources. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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