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Okay, welcome contestants. The audition round is over, and the first round has begun.

Number of contestants: 7

Number of contestants that will be disqualified this round: 3

Round 1 card limitations:
Must be a level 3 or lower normal monster card. No effect, no xyz, no ritual. Normal monster only.

Good luck =)

Deadline: 9/21
(contestants who fail to make the deadline will be automatically disqualified)

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I've had a similar delay, but I'll produce a card sometime tonight and post it here.

EDIT: Here it is, for what it's worth.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/16qlf.jpg[/img]
[spoiler=Lore]A small, mostly unknown creature, he never speaks except to those who wish to dispose of a body, never to be seen. They can never speak of what he sounds like, because he takes more than one body when he leaves.[/spoiler]

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[quote name='Heimdall The Watcher' timestamp='1348282866' post='6029487']
Thanks, posted.
[/quote]

Great :)

[spoiler='Round1 Scores:'] [spoiler='Archbaron Thor the Just'] 93/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 50/50
Graphic: 23/30
Balance: 20/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] Definitely an original piece, especially for a Fiend-type card. Very well done :) [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Chance Furlong'] 94/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 45/50
Graphic: 29/30
Balance: 20/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] Great card, very dark, and gives off a creepy vibe. Well done, sir :) [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Lethal Phoenix'] 85/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 50/50
Graphic: 15/30
Balance: 20/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] To see a clown mixed with a bug was very interesting, seeing as how they're two very common phobias. The graphic, however, could've been much creepier than it was, but in all, a VERY good job well done :) [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Hellion083'] 80/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 35/50
Graphic: 25/30
Balance: 20/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] The whole 'two-headed-dog' thing is a bit over-used, but that aside, this is a great card, a bit weak for a half-angel-half-demon, though. But still very nice :) [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Heimdall The Watcher'] 92/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 50/50
Graphic: 25/30
Balance: 17/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] A very interesting concept. However, the name is 'Netherworld Merchant', yet it says people come to him to dispose of bodies. That's a bit confusing, in my opinion. But like I said, it's a very interesting concept, and very neat. Great work :) [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='newhat'] 0/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 0/50
Graphic: 0/30
Balance: 0/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] Did not meet the deadline [/spoiler] [/spoiler]


[spoiler='NiteVerse'] 0/100
[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: 0/50
Graphic: 0/30
Balance: 0/20 [/spoiler]
[spoiler='Notes'] Did not meet the deadline [/spoiler] [/spoiler][/spoiler]

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[quote name='trevorw3i' timestamp='1348287917' post='6029495']
A very interesting concept. However, the name is 'Netherworld Merchant', yet it says people come to him to dispose of bodies. That's a bit confusing, in my opinion. But like I said, it's a very interesting concept, and very neat. Great work :)
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Thanks, and guess I should've elaborated a bit more; he's a demon that people bargain with to take the bodies back with him to the 'Netherworld', but he never mentions that his price is the body of the one who summoned him. he just spreads his 'offer' among mortals and lets them come to him.

Also just a curiosity, on the Balance score, so I know for future; what was imbalanced about him?

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[quote name='Heimdall The Watcher' timestamp='1348289429' post='6029518']
Also just a curiosity, on the Balance score, so I know for future; what was imbalanced about him?
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Well, seeing as how balance is hard to grade on a vanilla card, because they have no effects, I took the level, compared it to the ATK/DEF, which was fine for all of them, but also how well the lore works with the name, because that's really what vanilla cards are all about. So that's why took off 3 points for balance.

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Results:

[s]newhat[/s]

[s]NiteVerse[/s]

[s]Hellion083[/s]


Congratulations To:

Heimdall the Watcher

Archbaron Thor the Just

Chance Furlong

Lethal Phoenix


Round1 is officially over




[quote name='Heimdall The Watcher' timestamp='1348325459' post='6029642']
Alright, that makes sense, thanks for answering.
[/quote]

Not a problem. Glad you understand :)

Round2

Number of contestants: 4

Number of contestants that will be disqualified this round: 2

For this round, I'll shake things up a bit. I'll put you guys in 2 teams. You must work together to create 2 cards that support each other very well, though they don't have to be specifically designed for one another.

One person on each team must make one of the cards.

Round2 card limitations:
Any type of card. FIRE or DARK attribute for monsters (forgot to add this one in the last round. Oops). No xyz, no ritual. Spell/Trap/Effect Monster cards only.

Good luck =)

Deadline: 9/30
(contestants who fail to make the deadline will be automatically disqualified)

[spoiler='Examples'] [spoiler='Effect Monsters'] [img]http://i.imgur.com/uWqTX.jpg[/img]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/E63RS.jpg[/img] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Non-Monster'] [img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120225211148/yugioh/images/a/a1/InsectBarrier-DL13-EN-R-UE-Blue.jpg[/img]

[img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20070602191709/yugioh/images/d/d5/DNASurgeryDB1-EN-C-UE.jpg[/img] [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Teams'] Team 1:
Archbaron Thor the Just
Lethal Phoenix

Team 2:
Heimdall The Watcher
Chance Furong [/spoiler]

Because of the dependency the cards will have on one another, the score cards for this round will look like this:

[spoiler='Score Card'] Originality: ?/25
Compatibility: ?/25
Graphic: ?/30
Balance: ?/20 [/spoiler]

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[img]http://i.imgur.com/Fqtap.jpg[/img]
[quote]If you control no monsters and your opponent controls at least 1: You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). If this card is sent to the Graveyard for a Synchro Summon: You can send 1 DARK monster from your deck to the Graveyard.[/quote]

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[center]Well we got our cards finished up. Posting my half right now :3[/center]

[center][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/116106.jpg[/img][/center]
[center][b]Lore:[/b][/center]
[center]This card's attribute is also treated as DARK. Once per turn, you can equip this card (from your hand, field or Graveyard) to a "Blademaster of the Apocalypse" you control, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card. Only 1 "Seer of Armageddon" can be face-up on the field. Once per turn, while this card has "Blademaster of the Apocalypse" equipped to it: You can destroy 1 Spell/Trap card on the field. If this card leaves the field: Destroy all cards you control; Special Summon 1 "Blademaster of the Apocalypse" from your hand or Graveyard. It cannot attack directly during your next turn.[/center]

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I'll edit this post as soon as I get back to my computer, since I'm currently on my phone.

EDIT: Here it is.

[img]http://i.imgur.com/fMDzw.jpg[/img]

[spoiler=Lore] This card's attribute is also treated as DARK. Once per turn, you can equip this card (from your hand, field or Graveyard) to a "Seer of Armageddon" you control, OR unequip it to Special Summon this card. Only 1 "Blademaster of the Apocalypse" can be face-up on the field. Once per turn, while this card has "Seer of Armageddon" equipped to it: You can destroy 1 monster on the field. If this card leaves the field: Destroy all cards you control; Special Summon 1 "Seer of Armageddon" from your hand or Graveyard. It cannot attack directly during your next turn.[/spoiler]

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Great, the scoring shall begin :)

[spoiler='Results:'] [spoiler='Team 1']Archbaron Thor the Just
Lethal Phoenix

89/100
[spoiler='Score'] Originality: 25/25
Compatibility: 17/25
Graphic: 27/30
Balance: 20/20 [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Notes'] These cards were very interesting, and a job well done :) However, they don't really support one another, other than the fact that they are Synchro and Tuner monsters. [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Team 2']Heimdall The Watcher
Chance Furlong

95/100
[spoiler='Score'] Originality: 25/25
Compatibility: 25/25
Graphic: 30/30
Balance: 15/20 [/spoiler]

[spoiler='Notes'] This is very well done :) The names, effects, and even the graphics compliment each other. The only problem is they seemed to be a tad-bit op, but overall very nice :) Well done. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [/spoiler]

Congratulations to our two finalists: Heimdall The Watcher and Chance Furlong :)

It shouldn't take long for the final round to begin, so stay tuned :)

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