Yu-Gi-Oh! Gates of Despair (Started/Accepting/PG-16/OOC)

[Aqua Girl]

I mean I reviewed your character he seems the Emoish type, but also very inteligent, Prometheus dosent realy fit him well, and well your character has no real conection to the Titan. Croeis Is the Titan god of intelect and one of the 4 that conspired to go against the Gods. or Pemimitheus, he was the one that created animals and was the one to create the first woman.

[Spirit of DMG]

[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1346891250' post='6019898']
The damage part isn't the problem...its a ten star synchro that requires only archetype based tuning material and unless there is some beastia spam that I most likely don't know of then 9 times out of ten once you drop this monster its the only one on the field. So giving it the Sanctuary in the Sky effect for beast monsters is not a problem. The problem is being able to go in the deck and drop a level five or lower beast, winged-beast, or beast-warrior. While I can't think of any right now that would be t0o problematic that's just a little too much. So say just say from the hand or graveyard in my opinion.
I have no intention of using divine I personally feel its some form of cop out when it comes to effects but your preference is your preference.
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Well, I guess we just wait and see what Echo says. He is the RP Master here, after all.
Also, Onee-Sama has a point here, Your character does seem to have more compatibility with Croeis. He is more the intellectual type.

[Aqua Girl]

Yeah, You inplisitly stated your character is Dark and cold. If not for Zus' spite Prometheus wouldent be stuck in Tartarus with the others Prometheus was benevolant. Also Joseph(JZ) Reserves Gaia/Leadership of the cult. I suport this, out of bipartison, Becaous hes a very experienced roleplayer and can keep us as cultists on a good path and not leave us in a Rut.

[Love of Ghibli]

Ugh I suck at this new card grammar any who here is my Titan

[spoiler:Iapetus] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Mf5Rm.jpg[/img]

[spoiler:Lore] You can special summon this card (from your hand) by returning 4 of your banished Machine-type monsters with different names to your deck. When this monster is special summoned by its own effect reveal the top five cards of your deck; special summon as many level 4 or lower Machine type monsters revealed by this effect as you can. All other cards revealed by this effect are returned to the deck. [/spoiler]

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So I may need help on Card Grammar but I guess I can go to RC or WC for something like that lol

[ListenToLife]

[quote name='KneeSocks' timestamp='1346891691' post='6019905']
I mean I reviewed your character he seems the Emoish type, but also very inteligent, Prometheus dosent realy fit him well, and well your character has no real conection to the Titan. Croeis Is the Titan god of intelect and one of the 4 that conspired to go against the Gods. or Pemimitheus, he was the one that created animals and was the one to create the first woman.
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Not Emo. He has no problem with life what-so-ever (Where did you get Emo from?)
He's an indifferent and over confident know-it-all who will probably end up rather sadistic, given my track record with Villains. XD
*Coeus. Croeis doesn't exist, whatever that is. And Coeus wasn't the god of Intellect. He was the God of Wisdom, and the North. It would probably fit a little better, but I personally dont like the idea of him. Prometheus was more reknowned for his Intellect at any rate. (Coming from a self professed 'semi-expert' on Greek Mythology, by the way.)

And forming an App around a character that has already been claimed is rather obnoxious, dont'cha think? ¬_¬

This would be the point where I would try to be mean, but I'm not a mean-natured person, so fine. But if I RP with you again, this isn't happening again. ¬_¬
I'll have to make another card, which I personally detest doing, but I shall make one for Selene, the Moon Titan. That sorta relates more to the deck type and such.

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EDIT: I think Echo is having leadership of the cult, plus is going to be the Kronos guy. Also, Gaia isn't a titan. She was one of the Primordial Deities, before the existance of Mankind or a Pantheon, the the old days.

[Love of Ghibli]

Oh and here I thought we were grabbing the 12 original titans lol

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Are we just waiting for JZ then, plus Gaia was Kronos's mother, not a Titan(I'm actually Greek so I know a few things about this subject), but enough of my over inflated ego, and irrelevant comments, we should just wait for Echo's verdict on the subject.
@Beginning that's what I thought to lol

[Aqua Girl]

1 Thank you very much for understanding, 2 My offer still stands, you can see my card making skills. I've been here since 2008 and using card maker long before that, I'd be glad to make a card for you to show my thanks. also, if thats not acceptable, please allow me to find a pic for you. Also. Yes, But think of it the owner said his plans are indefinate, Jaine can be the vilian hiding behind the sceens, I detest using mainstream ideas but, something of a tobi hiding behind the false vilian of nagato, IE Chronos and Gaia Respectivly. It add more of an interesting story over 1 vilian then days of inactivity thinking of a vilian or droping the RP over no good ideas.

1 Thank you very much for understanding, 2 My offer still stands, you can see my card making skills. I've been here since 2008 and using card maker long before that, I'd be glad to make a card for you to show my thanks. also, if thats not acceptable, please allow me to find a pic for you. Also. Yes, But think of it the owner said his plans are indefinate, Jaine can be the vilian hiding behind the sceens, I detest using mainstream ideas but, something of a tobi hiding behind the false vilian of nagato, IE Chronos and Gaia Respectivly. It add more of an interesting story over 1 vilian then days of inactivity thinking of a vilian or droping the RP over no good ideas.

[Spirit of DMG]

[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1346893000' post='6019924']
You can special summon this card (from your hand) by returning 4 of your banished Machine-type monsters with different names to your deck. When this monster is [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned by its own effect reveal the top five cards of your deck; special summon as many level 4 or lower Machine[b]-[/b]type monsters revealed by this effect as you can. All other cards revealed by this effect are returned to the deck.
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Corrections I found are in bold

[Aqua Girl]

I think what I posted to him is sufficent to respond to you aswell clear.

[ListenToLife]

Oh no. They original 12 are boring.
Besides, what would we do with Crius? No-one knows what he actually does.
The most interesting Titans are the younger ones. Prometheus, Atlas(Who I'm surprised hasn't been snapped up yet), Helios and the one I'm going to use now (¬_¬ Still not particularly happy about it), Selene.

[spoiler=Speaking of which]
[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/RPQHc.jpg[/img]
Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Once in a Blue Moon". When this card is Special Summoned, all monsters on the field are changed to Defense position. When this card is placed in defense position, remove from play all trap cards in your graveyard, and return Spell cards equal to the number of Trap cards removed from play from your graveyard to your deck. By paying life points equal to half the monster's ATK, a defense position Spellcaster-type monster may declare an attack.[/center]
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I prefer my Prometheus card, but this does suit my deck a little better.

If anyone can think of a Good title for Selene, it would be much appreciated.

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Oh, I have decent enough Card-making skills, and created a full deck of cards from scratch (Rather OPed deck, but meh). I just dont like doing it.
I just prefer to RP & write stories; hence why I'm in the RP section. It's definitely one of my strong points; though if you ever need to know anything at all about Space or Physics (and a hell of a lot about the other sciences), I'm your man. I'm a walking block of trivia.

[Aqua Girl]

Soooo Basicaly, she hip checks them? x3 yu know with all the monsters that attack with defense ans swithing pos and attacks. pollus would fit you well lol.

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@WeirdGuy Selene is pretty balanced, maybe her direct attack effect can only effect Level 4 or lower monsters, then again she is a Level 10, other than that your card is creative, beautiful and balanced. Selene also seems to have solved your deck's Aphrodite problem. Not sure about Selene and Helios, but I'm pretty sure Atlas, and Prometheus were part of the original 12.

[Love of Ghibli]

[quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1346894436' post='6019943']
Oh no. They original 12 are boring. [b]Iapteus gave birth to Prometheus and Atlas so by default my dude isn't boring lol[/b]
Besides, what would we do with Crius? No-one knows what he actually does.
The most interesting Titans are the younger ones. Prometheus, Atlas(Who I'm surprised hasn't been snapped up yet), Helios and the one I'm going to use now (¬_¬ Still not particularly happy about it), Selene.

[spoiler=Speaking of which]
[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/F7hSr.jpg[/img]
Lore:
This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Once in a Blue Moon". When this card is Special Summoned, all monsters on the field are changed to Defense position. When this card is placed in defense position, remove from play all trap cards in your graveyard, and return all Spell cards from your graveyard to your deck and shuffle. By paying life points equal to half the monster's ATK, a defense position Spellcaster-type monster may declare an attack.[/center]
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I prefer my Prometheus card, but this does suit my deck a little better.
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The paying lifepoints thing sounds funny kinda like why do it, but I guess if it supports the sent then go for it. As an RC/WC commentator I find problem with being able to banish 1 trap and subsequently being able to return 10+ spells to the deck lol. That my friend is broken I would suggest adding some sort of one-for-one clause so for every trap you banish you can return a spell. Also you don't need to mention the shuffling part if a card says return to the and nothing else then the shuffling is implied.

[ListenToLife]

Selene fits my deck best. The moon is often related to Illusions and the mind.
And the Ability is similar to what the entire Illusion deck will be like. Surrounding spell cards (Like generic spellcaster decks) but also about attempting to chip away at the opponent's life points while staying defensive. The effect of Prometheus was similar.

[True Silent Echo]

Well, I was going to say that DaWeirdGuy, being the first to reserve Prometheus, should be able to make the call himself. However, I see that he has already graciously settled the matter. Thank you, WeirdGuy, for doing so peacefully ^^
Also, DaWeirdGuy's right. I had intended to make the Director (the leader of the Cult) an NPC character of sorts, taking control of him only when it's necessary for the story. He's supposed to be the (and bear with me on this) 'Final Boss' of this roleplay. When the Immortals start causing trouble for the Cultists later on, I had planned for the Director to show up himself and provide an even bigger challenge for the Immortals to overcome. Until then, he was to be a mysterious figure, operating from the shadows and throwing 'curve balls' for the Immortals.
Really though, I don't have that much of an issue with another person taking on this roll, so long this person is [b]willing to cooperate [/b]with me and [b]will keep in mind that the Director is meant to be mysterious largely unknown. [/b]As in, they aren't to go announcing their true identity to the Immortals until later on.

[ListenToLife]

[quote name='ClearAngel' timestamp='1346894847' post='6019951']
@WeirdGuy Selene is pretty balanced, maybe her direct attack effect can only effect Level 4 or lower monsters, then again she is a Level 10, other than that your card is creative, beautiful and balanced. Selene also seems to have solved your deck's Aphrodite problem. Not sure about Selene and Helios, but I'm pretty sure Atlas, and Prometheus were part of the original 12.
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Atlas and Prometheus are two of the four sons of Iapetus, while Helios and Selene were the children of Hyperion.

And beginning, I put the life point paying thing in because for a defense position monster to attack generally requires some sort of sacrifice.
And I agree, I should probably put in a one-for-one clause. >.<'

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So if my servant minor character is ok to use can I have her use Photons(just running this by, to make sure I'm not stepping on any toes).

[Love of Ghibli]

[quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1346895144' post='6019958']
Atlas and Prometheus are two of the four sons of Iapetus, while Helios and Selene were the children of Hyperion.

And beginning, I put the life point paying thing in because for a defense position monster to attack generally requires some sort of [b]sacrifice.[/b]
And I agree, I should probably put in a one-for-one clause. >.<'
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So is that coming from Total Defense Shogun being a 1 sac creature and Rampart Blaster is a fusion so technically something was offered in both instances? I guess I can see that logic.

[ListenToLife]

Rampart Blaster can only do a direct attack, and the damage is halved.

[Aqua Girl]

Hello echo, its nice to talk to the owner directly. A couple things. 1: Can I ask if I'm accepted or not? 2:That actualy fits well with joseph's character., He was planning to have his character have a sort of split personality of sorts. and she goes out and in disgise acts as a normal person , while when dueling she looks different and is Quiet malevolent. That can be changed easily to a nice Cultist who is the Director in Disguise. Whats a beter identity than hiding in plain sight?

[sup]Clear I have no problem with it, and does any body have a problem with my cards?[/sup]

[Spirit of DMG]

[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1346895355' post='6019962']
So is that coming from Total Defense Shogun being a 1 sac creature and Rampart Blaster is a fusion so technically something was offered in both instances? I guess I can see that logic.
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Let's also not forget that Total Defense Shogun can only use his original ATK when he attacks from Defense. Just thought I'd remind everyone of that.

[ListenToLife]

You need to change his level (All the immortals are LV10) and the picture doesn't suit the Tale of Prometheus at all.

However, The main problem is that it's very over-powered. You cant stop its summoning, and it clears the opponent's field as soon as it is summoned, as well as dealing damage to the opponent for that clearance. It's a OTK, broken card, especially if your opponent has 3 cards on the field. Summon Prometheus, clear opponent's field, deal 1500 damage, then attack and OTK. That's much too broken.

PS: I'll be going now. It's 3 in the morning, and I've got school tomorrow/today. I've got to at least try to get some sleep.

[Love of Ghibli]

[quote name='KneeSocks' timestamp='1346896237' post='6019969']
[sup]Clear I have no problem with it, and does any body have a problem with my cards?[/sup]
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Prometheus is hilariously overpowered, he's a non negatable field nuke that cane deal excessive damage and in an RP where we have 4000 k lifepoints he is just an instant win.

[quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1346896560' post='6019986']
You need to change his level (All the immortals are LV10) and the picture doesn't suit the Tale of Prometheus at all.

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I didn't think the pictures had to relate to the actual tale of the Titans they have manifested themselves into our decks therefore they can take whatever shape is most suited for us. Clearly I say this because my Titan is a machine now lol.

[True Silent Echo]

[quote name='KneeSocks' timestamp='1346896237' post='6019969'][/quote]
*Facepalms* That's the second time I've missed something right in front of me... My apologies, KneeSocks; I'm still trying to adjust to hosting a role play and having all of these questions directed at me. Unfortunately, I have no time at the moment to look through all of your cards, though you're accepted in terms of character (so long as you don't god-mod with that pyrokenisis of yours ^^").
That's fine then. One question, though; who exactly [i]is[/i] Joseph? ^^" No offense to him, I'm sure, but I'm totally new to YCM and am not at all familiar with the forum regulars.
[quote name='ClearAngel' timestamp='1346895284' post='6019961'][/quote]
Photons are actually the cards that Simdoggy reserved, so I'm not sure that would go over too well ^^"