I MAED ZE CUSTOM (I've got rusty fingers)

[Tormented]

So after my computers factory reset only just got Photoshop back, so here is my attempt, whilst being rusty, at a Custom Image.
ffffeeeeelllll freeeee to use it if you want.
[img]http://i1119.photobucket.com/albums/k626/awfarrow/All%20My%20Custom%20Images/17.png[/img]

[Simping For Hina]

Oh, so this is it.
It is kind of monotone. Nice sense of depth, I'd say. It kind of feels unfocused and pieces randomly scattered with no flow.
I look at one thing, but something else catches my eye.

[Tormented]

Good to hear I got the depth sorted.

As for monotoneness, I was going to add more color, but at the same time, I felt I'd rather have it montone than rainbowtone.

[Night]

Not really so much monotone as it is the hue that isn't right.
It's becoming far too apparent that you aren't using g-maps, that or not using them correctly.
When g-mapping, the illuminating color becomes a single color, simply put, if you were g-mappping correctly you wouldn't have a white light source (the white behind the focal) as well as yellow sources (around the focal).
As for the depth, non-apparent to my eye, the light source issue doesn't help at all really.
The flow problem that was pointed out is true.

You're getting better, but you need to begin to organize and strengthen your fundamentals.

[Tormented]

Orginization, that is something I am terrible at, but I will give it a go.