Sunshine Jesse Posted September 17, 2012 Report Share Posted September 17, 2012 Decided to catch up on this This fic is making me miss RPing here a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted September 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2012 Sorry I haven't been posting chapters lately though. It's getting kinda...tiring, I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted September 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted September 29, 2012 Chapter 9 and 10 added~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderately_Friendly Posted October 18, 2013 Report Share Posted October 18, 2013 Omg i have just Necrobumped the daylights out of this but like omg the feels. Dayum its been a long time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted October 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2013 Omg i have just Necrobumped the daylights out of this but like omg the feels. Dayum its been a long time. Â TPOPOLI!!!! And yeah, it has been a long time xD ...so do you want me to post the rest of the chapters? It's already finished. What do you think the way I wrote your characters? Hope I didn't go too far or anything~ Â Oh, by the way, Mods, don't lock this. I think I might continue it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moderately_Friendly Posted October 18, 2013 Report Share Posted October 18, 2013 Yes i would love to read the whole thing. Yea and I have no problem with how you handled DJ. You probably fixed a little but of my disorganization with his character as i was like a kid when i roleplayed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted October 18, 2013 Report Share Posted October 18, 2013 We were all new back then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted October 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 18, 2013 Well, to be honest, I think it'd be easier if you just read the PDF novel version (in my signature) ^_^ It would save me a lot of trouble. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Merci Posted July 11, 2014 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2014 ...So it's been, what, three years since I originally wrote this thing? After looking over it once again, it actually isn't that great. The plot, things. Plenty of cliches that are bound to arise within a RP, especially one that took place before the Advanced Clause got really implemented. Even after the efforts my past version of myself took to clean it up, it could still use a LOT of improvement.I've updated with Chapter 11 (with the rest of the chapters still lying around in my laptop), but after all this time, I may rework and improve upon all the chapters, since it's kinda embarrassing to have a story with such poor content under my name. Y-tak has agreed to step in and edit a few things too, which'll help with things. Ambiguous themes, rushed plotlines and tons of things that just don't make sense are scattered all throughout the story.All of that needs to be cleaned up, and RotAM needs to be shaped into something truly comprehensible. Possibly. Maybe.Or maybe I'll just fall into another bout of laziness and instead focus on other, more immediately important things. When it comes to fanfics, after all, this isn't exactly at the top of the list for me. I'm focusing more on the things I'm doing at SpaceBattles and FF.net, after all.Well, YCM's Creative Writing section seems to be dead nowadays, but still it's the effort that you put into your own stories that count~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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