Starter Deck: Xyz Unity

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Includes 5 new cards and many reprints!

[color=#ffd700]YS13-EN001 – Cyber Falcon[/color]
[color=#ffd700]YS13-EN002 – Inpachi[/color]
[color=#ffd700]YS13-EN003 – Millenium Shield[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN004 – Helping Robo for Combat[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN005 – Milla the Temporal Magician[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN006 – Blue Thunder T-45[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN007 – Cybernetic Magician[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN008 – Warrior Lady of the Wasteland[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN009 – Goblindbergh[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN010 – Feedback Warrior[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN011 – Shine Knight[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN012 – Achacha Archer[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN013 – Ganbara Knight[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN014 – Marauding Captain[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN015 – Shining Angel[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN016 – Jumbo Drill[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN017 – Ancient Dragon[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN018 – Zaborg the Thunder Monarch[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN019 – Cyber Dragon[/color]
[color=#ff8c00]YS13-EN020 – Sangan[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN021 – Harmony Storm (NEW!)[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN022 – Star Changer[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN023 – Blustering Winds[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN024 – Xyz Energy[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN025 – Pot of Duality[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN026 – Fighting Spirit[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN027 – Forbidden Chalice[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN028 – Reinforcement of the Army[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN029 – Night Beam[/color]
[color=#008080]YS13-EN030 – Iron Call[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN031 – Heartfelt Appeal[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN032 – Xyz Effect[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN033 – Dimensional Prison[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN034 – Draining Shield[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN035 – Dust Tornado[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN036 – Call of the Haunted[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN037 – Bottomless Trap Hole[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN038 – Michizure[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN039 – Metalmorph[/color]
[color=#800080]YS13-EN040 – Solemn Wishes[/color]

Extra Deck:
[color=#000000]YS13-EN041 – Number 39: Utopia (Ultra Rare)
YS13-EN042 – Number 17: Leviathan Dragon (Super Rare)
YS13-EN043 – Beast King Kemon-Oh (NEW!) (Super Rare)
YS13-EN044 – Darkray Spearfish (NEW!) (Super Rare)[/color]

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New Cards:
[color=#000000]Beast King Kemon-Oh:
EARTH/Beast/Xyz/Effect/*****/ATK: 2600/DEF: 1300
2 Level 5 monsters
Once per turn, you can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card: Negate the Summon of a monster and destroy this card. While this card is in the Graveyard, if it was sent there by a card effect: You can attach this card to an Xyz Monster you control as an Xyz Material. You can only use this effect once per Duel.

Darkray Spearfish:
WATER/Fish/Xyz/Effect/****/ATK: 2100/DEF: 1100
2 Level 4 monsters
Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 monster on the field; place 1 Ray Counter on it. Destroy this face-up card if it has no Xyz Materials. When this card is destroyed by this effect: Destroy all cards with a Ray Counter.[/color]

[color=#008080]Harmony Storm[/color]
[color=#008080]Quick Spell Card[/color]
[color=#008080]Target 1 face-up monster on the field; it becomes Level 5 until the End Phase.[/color]


I would like your opinion, do you like it, would you buy it? Comment, plz. Also, many thanks for OCG fixes (if any).

[Blake]

Dear Lord, what am I reading.

First off, Kemon-Oh is a hand killer. These are pretty much NEVER well designed, as something will always find a way to loop them. And, even if it doesn't, it's still a +0 after effect, that then becomes a free Xyz material if it dies. At least it discards, I guess. The explosion seems kinda random, though.

Spearfish is horrible and you should feel horrible. It's a generic R4 with 2700 attack. You know there's a reason that Pearl has no effect, right? Because you should pair a good effect with really good stats. Lower the attack, now. As for the effect, it's rather lack luster. I mean, sure, you're guaranteed a kill sorta, but if they use the target as material or w/e it fizzles. However, paired with the body it has, it's stupid. lower the attack.

For Sunfish, I don't have a clue as to why the level increase is a cost. It doesn't make sense, at all. That said, the card is meh. It's too slow, even for use with Spearfish. It's also rather weak.

Shining Mantis is terrible design. It's not really broken, but there is NOTHING good about being able to pull any 1000 or less ATK monster from your deck. Sangan's a reason alone to prove it's a bad idea. Restrict it to one or more types or something.

Storm is... interesting. Can disrupt Xyz plays, but that's about it. You wouldn't really WANT to use it on yourself, so eh... 50/50

[.Exa]

Thank you for your feedback. I didn't make cards in a long period of time, so I'm a little bit rusty on what's broken and what's not.

Edited the Xyz monsters, Kemon-Oh feels a bit more balanced to me, however to Laggia-ish, and Spearfish has way less ATK now, replaced Mantis with Sangan, and Sunfish with Cyber Dragon.

Again, thanks for your feedback.

Any comments on the decklist?