KingNEMESIS.de Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 this is my first card.well i think it isn´t that good so i would appreciate it if you could help me....... Card Lore:This card cannot be Normal summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 2 LIGHT and 2 DARK monster in your Graveyard.The ATK and DEF of this Card is increased by 1000 for every Card that is Removed from Play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingDeadsand Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 dude tht things cool better than anything i can do Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Is this picture stolen from an actual card? =/On the card ATK & DEF what is X000?Please do not cap most of the letters in the card name. Overall not a bad effort though. ^_^6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Buffer Posted March 6, 2008 Report Share Posted March 6, 2008 Nice dude I've got three stars and my cards are not that good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingNEMESIS.de Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 Is this picture stolen from an actual card? =/On the card ATK & DEF what is X000?Please do not cap most of the letters in the card name. Overall not a bad effort though. ^_^6/10 I found the Picture on Google while Searching for a Cyber Dragon.and with the ATK and DEF.i change that to ? but is the efect (for the ATK and DEF) too unrealistic? I dont know a good name....how abaout "Archangel of War"By the way,thaks for the Ratings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Black Fang Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 yes, unforutnatly, that is the card art for "King mist" but i say, very nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingNEMESIS.de Posted March 7, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 hmmmm then i better search another picture........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BurmysRUs Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 That is a very good card for your first. All I sugest is that you make the attack and defense 0, then the effect will make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natedog2001 Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 picture goodOCG 8.5/10but way too overpoweredafter awhile you will get the hang of it. dont worry man ill give you a handif you add me to your buddy list ill talk to you over PM's and stuff and then i can give you tips on cards and stuffbecause, once, i was in the same position you were ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugito Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 cool that's nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Master Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 not bad for frist card so 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mad Hopz Posted March 7, 2008 Report Share Posted March 7, 2008 change pic and name. nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Is this picture stolen from an actual card? =/On the card ATK & DEF what is X000?Please do not cap most of the letters in the card name. Overall not a bad effort though. ^_^6/10 Yes, it actually is. And good card! :) 9/10 for you my friend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darvaldian Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 NICE! =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjigger Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 how od u put cards on to your posts or sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 The X000 is a bit annoying, and the pic's been used before, but good effort! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tomjigger Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 this is my first card is it good? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingNEMESIS.de Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 I changed the Card a little bit now Name:KingNEMESIS --> The Forbidden WarriorAttribute:Light --> DarkATK/DEF: X000 --> ?Picture Changed too (i hope that this hasn´t been used yet) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mushi the Holy Dark Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 nice card BTW but its the pic of King Mist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingNEMESIS.de Posted March 9, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 nice card BTW but its the pic of King Mist i know and i already changed that,just look above your post ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mariojo2 Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Fix OCG, There are rarely any cards that are removed from play, so the attack/def would be underpowered by 11 stars. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
music Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 i think it doesnt need changesi give it a 9.2/10 maybe it will look good if it was secret rare Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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