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[quote name='DaWeirdGuy' timestamp='1354905843' post='6087644']
Healing Adrian. XD What an Idiot. He's gonna die.

And I wasn't aiming for Feredir to control the entire forest, Merciful. I mentioned in the post that that was madness. But since you have put that apparently all but the giant tree is now green, we could say he was healing/cleansing it or something? I'll just make him very tired after it because of it.

And you've captured Adrian exceptionally well, beginning. While I had planned for a little more insanity, the seriousness comes off quite well and kinda shows his position of authority; he is a higher up among vampires after all. Your post has made me kinda regret letting control go of Adrian. XD I really liked him; much more than I like Feredir. Feredir's just more important to the plot.
Ah, meh. If I want more stuff with Adrian, I'll write some fics about him.

One thing I didn't like was his apparent giving up. Yes, he was in a bit of a hopeless situation, but Adrian isn't the kinda guy that gives up. He'd just scream at the world, perhaps swing a fist to meet that blade at the end to hopelessly attempt to block her.
But meh, it is up to the writer to write, and you did a marvelous job with that fight. I commend you; you're a great writer.
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Yeah that's why I don't really enjoy taking over other people's characters because I don't really know what to do in certain situations. I didn't make them so I couldn't really figure out how they would respond. The insanity plea I couldn't figure out how to make him seem insane in a one-on-one fight so I had he jump into a crowd of innocent bystanders and use them a meat shields. With Clarice it was easy seeing as I had litany of previous post of just her doing all types random awfulness Adrian not so much. As for the giving...keep it 100 with you...pure butthurt on my part lol. I just knew from the very beginning that Clarice was going to lose a fight so it just hurt me to keep on writing epic knowing the outcome. So yeah I admit I knew it was a little out of character, but I put a lot of effort into Clarice to let her fall off a cliff lol.

if you want you can take control of Adrian again the fight with Clarice is over and the fight with Ed should be more...tame by comparison. I know that if I control him in this upcoming fight I'll just pour all of my insane thoughts that would go into Clarice into Adrian. Not sure if that is a good or bad thing.

yay glad you like the fight though.

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Oh, but by the way, even though the Alexi/Alsa/Feredir/Luis battle against the tree is absolutely epic, this isn't the final-final battle.
[color=white]I mean what's a final boss battle without a gigantic final form?[/color]
So...yeah, it might be a better idea to keep as many people as alive as possible for the next five minutes.

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Keep control of Adrian; you're a great writer and will do better than I would if I took control of him now; I'll be too busy to write a great post for him.

And we were kinda guessing that - or at least, I was. Which is why I'm making Feredir seem powerful now, so he can seem a lot less powerful/OPed when the big boss battle comes.

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You think you're lazy, I said before that I'd definitely post within 24 hours when I was finally back from my holiday away from internet, and then didn't end up posting until 2 days had past instead. Not because of any particular reason, just cause I got lazy and couldn't get inspired enough to post.

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[quote name='Merciful Idiot' timestamp='1355401780' post='6091998']
Guys, I understand you're all lazy...but can at least one person post every few days, to keep things running?
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Wow that's a depressing statement to make. Ugh people should not be comfortable saying I'm lazy so I don't feel like doing anything. Anywho I guess I'll just derail my Adrian and Clarice reunion to have her join the fight against a tree.

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[quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1355449406' post='6092490']
Wow that's a depressing statement to make. Ugh people should not be comfortable saying I'm lazy so I don't feel like doing anything. Anywho I guess I'll just derail my Adrian and Clarice reunion to have her join the fight against a tree.
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No need. Just keep your reunion thing, the tree fight's over anyway~ ^_^

[color=white]And the final boss battle will begin, wherein you'll be able to join.[/color]

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No need to oppose each other. Work together! Feredir's magic may end up being the catalyst for your plan concerning John to work. It [i]does[/i] solve the problem of 'being dead too long' after all, by slightly prolonging his life. ^_^ Just a suggestion.

But in any case, sorry DWG, the Phoenix won't be revived just yet. I mean, he did have a tree thrusted into his chest like an arrow.

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I honestly didn't expect it to fully work; and neither did Feredir. My idea was more of a Feredir giving the Phoenix some honour, and a last ditch attempt to revive him.

So no prob. XD It gives Feredir an excuse to be angry and a bit more violent. No hesitation or holding back when treenear comes back.

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[b][spoiler=App][/b]
[b]Username: [/b][size=3]The_Riddler[/size]
[b]Name: [/b][size=3]Bane Elnaer [/size]
[b]Gender: [/b][size=3]Male[/size]
[b]Race:[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Vampire (although this is unknown to most vampires and all humans)[/size][/font][/color]
[b]Age:[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] 240 ish (If I read all the information correctly) [/size][/font][/color]
[b]Appearance:[/b][font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3] Cloaked in pitch-Black Armor, physical appearance of the Warrior known as The Sentinel is unknown. Other than the blue eyes that appear behind his helmet when he's his weakest, Bane has kept his pale, cold skin kept armored for a long, long time. [/size][/color][/font]
[spoiler=Pic] [img]http://api.ning.com/files/Yvo5w9SMnFzbwnMGyDTgQ8D07OtYj0RsWJPn9KuLPkgnPsXJpFkMbEf0R9-SzZfsyq98bxtI1IHmlyL6S5Pd0iRKSSiuUt-B/main.jpg[/img] [/spoiler]
[b]Bio:[/b][font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3] [/size][/color][/font]
[font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3]Born at the end of the first War, Born was a king-to-be. His parents were the rulers of the Vampires at the time and took a great love of the outdoors and the feeling the chill weather of Lath. As soon as he was able, Bane took up swordsmanship as well as magics. Favoring ice spells (reflecting his love for the cold) the prince soon become an expert warrior of the physical, but lacked proficient mental skills. That isn't to say he was stupid, he was a prince after all, but all the time outside on the training court didn't leave a lot of time for libraries and books[/size][/color][/font]

[font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif"][color="#696969"][size=3]His brother however, was a different story. Younger and much more charismatic than he began to work his way up the political chain of command and it was 1 decade before Lord Elnaer enact his plan that he told it to Bane. A world where humans where enslaved or dead and vampires ruled all of Lath. Bane was horrified He had never seen the humans as equals, but never as property for forced labor. The Prince tried to tell the others of his plan, but he was to late. Lord Elnaer had convinced everyone it was a great plan and, unable to believe anything, Bane took his armor, sword, and knowledge of magics and froze himself in a frenzy of snow and ice about half a mile from where the human encampment that would wage war with his brother years later. [/size][/color][/font]

[color=#696969][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif][size=3]Now thawed, and hungry to claim his rightful place as King (or at least see his brother dead), Bane fights with the Humans, his identity unknown to them as he fights with a Phoenix. The man of Fire and the creature of Ice. [/size][/font][/color]


[b]Personality: [/b][font="arial, helvetica, sans-serif"][color="#696969"][size=3]Stern but compassionate. Bane does what needs to get done efficiently, but understands complications occur. [/size][/color][/font]
[b]Faction:[/b][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] Humans. [/size][/font][/color]
[b]Abilities:[/b][font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3] Magic, mainly Ice and water, but a little others. Combining that with his mastery of sword and shield, impressive things can occur. [/size][/color][/font]
[font="tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif"][color="#5a5a5a"][size=3][/spoiler][/size][/color][/font]

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