Seta Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 [IMG]http://i557.photobucket.com/albums/ss20/ARTseta/swag.png[/IMG] kinda wip still Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted August 8, 2012 Report Share Posted August 8, 2012 Work on your depth and lighting. I feel as if the area around the focal is far too illuminated. The depth is also wonky because ideally an object that is that far away would not be as visible. The color and contrast could use a bit of work as well. Regardless however, I quite like the concept and the piece is quite interesting as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted August 11, 2012 Report Share Posted August 11, 2012 just to add on to what Night said, I feel you sharpened too much. It looks LQ to me where the focal is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted August 11, 2012 Report Share Posted August 11, 2012 I'd like to see the orb removed+texture spam. Also seems slightly lq and blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted August 16, 2012 Report Share Posted August 16, 2012 boring bland and washed out. no. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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