CarnEvil Cards - Preview

[mrpr1993]

I'm actually planning on making these type of cards, which will be based on the game "CarnEvil"!

I started with the Ritual Monster "CarnEvil Leader - Ludwig Von Tokkentakker", who is, in fact, the villain of the game.

However, the card's extremely risky; the upside, once summoned, he can summon 2 "CarnEvil" monsters to the field, and the player can add 5 "CarnEvil" type of cards (Monster, Magic or Trap) to their hand, and he cannot be attacked until all of the CarnEvil monsters are out, but the downside is that he neither CAN attack until all monsters that are defending him are gone, and if he gets destroyed, the player who was using him... LOSES! Risky, no?

The strategy involves using as many monsters as you can to defend Von Tokkentaker sd you attack the opponent.

There will also be an effect where the player can summon a Level 5 or more monster on the field without tribute if there's a magic card on the field. For example: The miniboss Hambone, who might be a Level 6 card, can be summoned without tribute if there's a Haunted Mansion magic card on the field. If not, you'll have to Tribute Summon him normally.

All of the monsters will be based on the enemies that appears in the game. Here are all I managed to compile so far:

So far, I was only able to get the ones from the Haunted House level.

-Monsters
(The main)
CarnEvil Leader - Ludwig Von Tokkentakker
CarnEvil Minon - Umlaut the Jester Head

(The enemies from the Haunted House)
--ENEMIES
CarnEvil Minon - The Walking Undead
CarnEvil Minon - Swooping Bat
CarnEvil Minon - Speeding Ghoul
CarnEvil Minon - Crawling Spider
CarnEvil Minon - Brawling Spider (the bigger version of the spider)
CarnEvil Minon - Sticking Hand
--BOSSES
CarnEvil Minion - Hambone
CarnEvil Minon - Evil Marie

-Magic & Traps

Zombie in the Closet (Based on the surprise attack from one of the zombie enemies)
Creeping Break (Based on the kitchen area of the Haunted House level)
Rest in Pieces (Based on the gravestone's description after the player falls off the Haunted House rooftop)

CarnEvil's Haunted House

[b]PLEASE REVIEW; NOTE THAT I'VE BEEN OUT FROM YU-GI-OH FOR TOO LONG, SO I MAY HAVE GOTTEN RUSTY, SO POINT ME OUT IF THERE'S SOMETHING WRONG[/b]

[Ambrogirmint705]

First of all, it's not Magic Card anymore; it's Spell Cards. Nice concept, The Boss monster cannot be attacked by your opponent's monster until your other "CarnEvil" monsters on the field are destroyed or been removed from the field (Banished based on newer TCG). But the problem I have with the boss is it's good effects is kinda OP'ed. You change it to add 3 "CarnEvil" cards instead of 5, and you need to specify from where you will be special summoning the "CarnEvil" monsters (Hand, Deck or Graveyard), but it would be rather wise to allow the boss to special summon the monsters just from your hand, otherwise the effect could be considered broken; and only the level 4 or lower monsters to balance it out. This is to further shows the power of "CarnEvil Leader - Ludwig von Tokkentakker" as the boss for this archetype. From my point of view, to change this card's vulnerability when there's no other "CarnEvil" monsters; you should just put the effect as follows:

[center]CarnEvil Leader - Ludwig von Tokkentakker[/center]
[center]LV(?) Attribute:(?) Type:(?) ATK: (?)/ DEF: (?)[/center]
[center]"This card can only be Ritual Summoned by Ritual Spell Card,"(your chosen name)". During your Standby Phase, you may choose up to 3 "CarnEvil" cards from your Deck and add those card(s) to your Hand. Once per turn, you may Special Summon 2 level 4 or lower "CarnEvil" monsters from your hand to your side of the field. As long you control another "CarnEvil" monster(s), your opponent cannot select this card as Attack target. This card cannot attack if you control at least 1 "CarnEvil" monsters except this card. When this is the only card you control during End Phase, send this card to Graveyard and inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points."[/center]

[center]CarnEvil (?) - Hambone[/center]
[center]LV6 Attribute:(?) Type:(?) ATK:(?) /DEF:(?)[/center]
[center]When you control 1 face-up "Haunted Mansion", you can Normal Summon this card without Tribute[/center]

For me, it would be quite a long and confusing effect; yet somewhat interesting. And another thing, what type will it be if this "CarnEvil" archetype monsters will be? Will it be mostly composed of Zombie-type monsters? Judging from the names, this archetype will be most likely to be Zombies in my opinion.

Hope you like my reviews on your cards, and sorry if I have changed your card's effect.

[mrpr1993]

Thanks for the critic.

And the effect for Tokkentaker ism uch better than the one I made:

"This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Rise of CarnEvil". Once Summoned, Special Summon 2 "CarnEvil Minion" Monsters, and add up to 5 "CarnEvil" cards from your deck to your hand. This monster cannot be destroyed if there are more than 1 "CarnEvil" monster in the field. If this card is destroyed, the game ends."

[Ambrogirmint705]

:cool:Your welcome, I'm looking forward for your other cards.