Elƒie Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [IMG]http://i382.photobucket.com/albums/oo261/AisuGhost/Try4-2.png[/IMG] CnC please. I learned a lot from my last thread, Fail or not to Fail and I'd like to keep the learning rolling~! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 To be honest, that text is complete murder. Other than that, though, it's improvement. The real issue at the moment is quality, the image itself looks blurred and unnatural. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 This is really decent however as already stated the text does not flow well at all with the overall image a couple of more things you could work on is a: making all the colors more similar to the render or the tags i.e if your working with a redish render, try and use red or similar colors with the tag also, the render feels kind of left out if you no what I mean, i.e it's rather empty in the top right corner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [quote name=''raiN' timestamp='1343972011' post='5996064'] To be honest, that text is complete murder. [color=#008080]Thanks for the honesty.[/color] Other than that, though, it's improvement.[color=#008080] [/color]The real issue at the moment is quality, the image itself looks blurred and unnatural. [color=#008080]Hmm.. Now that ya pointed it out, I see it. xD[/color] [/quote] [quote name='Serenade' timestamp='1344007087' post='5996271'] This is really decent however as already stated the text does not flow well at all with the overall image a couple of more things you could work on is a: making all the colors more similar to the render or the tags i.e if your working with a redish render, try and use red or similar colors with the tag also, the render feels kind of left out if you know what I mean, i.e it's rather empty in the top right corner. [/quote] Hmm.. What font would you guys have used for the text? Or is how it's used in the picture that's wrong with it? Font seems like it's going to be one of my bigger issues I might have with Also, it seems like I did a good good with blending in the C4Ds if no one's said anything about it. Lol. I used a second C4D to add some more depth to the picture but putting it above the render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 I've always had the principle of avoiding text until you're comfortable with the other major GFX skills: lighting, depth, flow, color scheme, composition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 I didn't say you didn't blend well, I was just saying the top-right feels empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1344014031' post='5996375'] I've always had the principle of avoiding text until you're comfortable with the other major GFX skills: lighting, depth, flow, color scheme, composition. [/quote] I just might have to do that for now. Lol. [quote name='Serenade' timestamp='1344015779' post='5996409'] I didn't say you didn't blend well, I was just saying the top-right feels empty. [/quote] I didn't say you didn't. Lol. Now does the top right feel empty because other then the chair being there, there's not much else behind it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 Yes it now kind of has a story of a Knight whom is looking upon his destroyed kingdom, a tag having a story is always a good thing. AS for the blending I misread it as if you were telling me that you thought you blended it well :L Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [quote name='Serenade' timestamp='1344017686' post='5996431'] Yes it now kind of has a story of a Knight whom is looking upon his destroyed kingdom, a tag having a story is always a good thing. [color=#008080]That's a very good idea. [/color] AS for the blending I misread it as if you were telling me that you thought you blended it well :L [color=#008080]Oh, no. Lol. It was just a little side note I wanted to make. xD Sorry for confusing you. [/color][color=#008080] [font=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(247, 247, 247)](╯︵╰,)[/background][/size][/font][/color] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 It's more than alright my dear friend, also I recommend that you download Rain's .psd in the tutorial section, it is a very good thing to learn from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 I'll be sure to do that once my data limit refreshes in a few days. I'm already pushing it with all these pictures. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 Alas, as far as I know I don't have a Data Limit, so me be lucky, but as far as I know the Thread also goes through all the layers so make sure you read every last bit XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elƒie Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 Not a lot of internet providers do. Its usually the satellite internet or phone companies. I have a Verizon Hotspot card with a 5 GB/month plan.. And don't worry, I'll be sure to read every last word. [font=Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(247, 247, 247)](｀・ω・´)[/background][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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