LC Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [spoiler=No.1 Buntrea][img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/215/6/f/fakemon___buntrea___new_design_by_lastingcarnage-d59odcj.png[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=No.4 Pupool][img]http://i.imgur.com/atNv9.png[/img][/spoiler] Re-designed my grass starter. Going to keep all my fakemon in this thread from now on. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 Lol nice. If I were any good at shading, I'd post mine lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LC Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [quote name='Toot.' timestamp='1343937251' post='5995531'] Lol nice. If I were any good at shading, I'd post mine lol. [/quote]Thanks Tooty. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 The eyes are the worst part of both pieces. The first set of eyes don't look like pokemon eyes in the slightest, and both look copied and pasted. Thus far I have yet to see anything unique incorporated into your pokemon, they seem to bland. I understand they are supposed to be first stage starter pokemon, but make some sort of strange creature with 20 hands or something of the sort. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LC Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1343955279' post='5995820'] The eyes are the worst part of both pieces. The first set of eyes don't look like pokemon eyes in the slightest, and both look copied and pasted. Thus far I have yet to see anything unique incorporated into your pokemon, they seem to bland. I understand they are supposed to be first stage starter pokemon, but make some sort of strange creature with 20 hands or something of the sort. [/quote] kk, I'll work on it some more. I'll also try and some more details to these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LC Posted August 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 5, 2012 [spoiler=lolConcept][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/zb7m8.png[/IMG][/spoiler] It's a tooth with a crown on it. Yup. Concept. Still WIPish though. Might add some more stuff before coloring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Madsen Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 work on more detail. they look plain and boring. add more features and they could pass. they just look too much like a stupid little dogpony, tho. make them more menacing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 [quote name='blacklustersoldier76' timestamp='1344243458' post='5998634'] work on more detail. they look plain and boring. add more features and they could pass. they just look too much like a stupid little dogpony, tho. make them more menacing. [/quote] Starter pokemon = menacing? Boy has the game changed since Johto. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelfore Posted August 6, 2012 Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 It's the actual figure that's the problem with the starters. For Buntrea, the main problem are the [b]KawaiiDesu~[/b] eyes, and the rounded head. The eyes need more feature, like an expression that shows how real they are, instead of looking like buttons. It's head on the other hand, I'd recommend styling after a real rabbits. Tepig has the snout. Snivy has the pointed nose. And Oshawott - though looking flat at first - has the nose, the freckles, and the shading under its mouth. It just needs more depth, and less balloon art. Also when you decide to make its evolution, try giving it spreadable fingers. It works for the first evo, but the second probably shouldn't be the same. either that or point them... or replace them altogether with leaves or something, I don't know! Pupool... needs work. It's whole body looks like the previously mentioned "balloon art" thing, it just looks drawn on. I'd actually believe this was a concept to a balloon if you said it was. Try looking at some of the other puppy pokemon in the series. Houndour, Growlithe, Poochyena, etc. Also, make it more slick like an actually sea creature. I like the tooth, very believable fakemon so far. I'd train it! (And its shiny form would be yellow! ...With decay!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LC Posted August 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2012 [quote name='blacklustersoldier76' timestamp='1344243458' post='5998634'] work on more detail. they look plain and boring. add more features and they could pass. they just look too much like a stupid little dogpony, tho. make them more menacing. [/quote]Yeah, I'm still working on adding more features. 3rd stage will most likely look more menacing but these guys will stay small and harmless. :3 [quote name='Zelfore' timestamp='1344248928' post='5998652'] It's the actual figure that's the problem with the starters. For Buntrea, the main problem are the [b]KawaiiDesu~[/b] eyes, and the rounded head. The eyes need more feature, like an expression that shows how real they are, instead of looking like buttons. It's head on the other hand, I'd recommend styling after a real rabbits. Tepig has the snout. Snivy has the pointed nose. And Oshawott - though looking flat at first - has the nose, the freckles, and the shading under its mouth. It just needs more depth, and less balloon art. Also when you decide to make its evolution, try giving it spreadable fingers. It works for the first evo, but the second probably shouldn't be the same. either that or point them... or replace them altogether with leaves or something, I don't know! Pupool... needs work. It's whole body looks like the previously mentioned "balloon art" thing, it just looks drawn on. I'd actually believe this was a concept to a balloon if you said it was. Try looking at some of the other puppy pokemon in the series. Houndour, Growlither, Poochyena, etc. Also, make it more slick like an actually sea creature. I like the tooth, very believable fakemon so far. I'd train it! (And its shiny form would be yellow! ...With decay!) [/quote] D*mn bro. Thanks for the feedback. ;D I'll take this all into account. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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