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Well I finished reading your page and only have two problems with it. 1-The wall of text you have to go through in order to really understand everything, no one piece is really large so it is actually pretty easy to get through but it still takes a lot of time. 2-You made a super big world but then you constrict people to a single ship in episodes you control, I feel that it would be better as one of two things because of this either you write it yourself instead of making it an RP which it seems solid enough that you might get it published some day, or you go the Table Top Role Play route in which case you might want to contact Onyx Path Publishing or White Wolf, this would be the hardest of all of them maybe an video game. Again getting any of this published would be very difficult but I have seen worse things get made so you do have a shot if you work at it but as far as an RP it is to constrictive as is to work, half way through reading it was excited to make a space pirate only to find out it doesn't work with the plot.

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Well I finished reading your page and only have two problems with it. 1-The wall of text you have to go through in order to really understand everything, no one piece is really large so it is actually pretty easy to get through but it still takes a lot of time. 2-You made a super big world but then you constrict people to a single ship in episodes you control, I feel that it would be better as one of two things because of this either you write it yourself instead of making it an RP which it seems solid enough that you might get it published some day, or you go the Table Top Role Play route in which case you might want to contact Onyx Path Publishing or White Wolf, this would be the hardest of all of them maybe an video game. Again getting any of this published would be very difficult but I have seen worse things get made so you do have a shot if you work at it but as far as an RP it is to constrictive as is to work, half way through reading it was excited to make a space pirate only to find out it doesn't work with the plot.

I tend to text wall, its my tragic flaw. And, while a space pirate doesn't quite work with the plot as-is, an ex-pirate would make quite the interesting addition to the pilot roster. If you still have any interest i'd be more than happy to work with you on that.

 

and get it published? 0.0 I didn't think i was nearly that creative.

 

In any case, still noting interest in a build fighters rp.

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Well instead of a pirate another idea I had for someone that would work better with the crew was a test pilot and an experimental machine known as Achilles but I'll give you the details on those on your page later. Or maybe I'll just make an unknown machine that just randomly attacks people and is constantly heckling your ship for no reason, maybe its what messed it up and took out most the crew in the first place.

 

About it getting published unless you ripped a lot of stuff from another source I could definitely see this as a table top RP or maybe a video game if enough was put into it, the world you made is interesting, not Mass Effect 1 and 2 interesting but maybe Mass Effect 3 interesting.

 

I had another Gundam Idea based on AGE but with some major changes but I thought it was to similar to yours to be fair, but a Build fighter RP would give people plenty of opportunity to fight and for a plot I figured the first Arc would be everyone being gathered in order for won of us to become the new Meijin Kawaguchi

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Well instead of a pirate another idea I had for someone that would work better with the crew was a test pilot and an experimental machine known as Achilles but I'll give you the details on those on your page later.

 

About it getting published unless you ripped a lot of stuff from another source I could definitely see this as a table top RP or maybe a video game if enough was put into it, the world you made is interesting, not Mass Effect 1 and 2 interesting but maybe Mass Effect 3 interesting.

Well I'll be looking foreward to seeing what you've come up with. keep me posted.

 

And i'll take being as interesting as mass effect 3. XD

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Basic concept is that, before recorded history, there was a war between a duel monster empire and an alliance of humans and duel monsters that almost resulted in the extinction of the human race. The war ended when the alliance cast a spell that exiled the duel monsters to an alternate dimension. However, the spell cost millions of lives as well as the human race's innate ability to use magic. In the alternate dimension, the war raged on, with the empire ultimately defeating the now outnumbered alliance monsters.  In this universe, The game of Duel monsters is based on human racial memories of that war, rather than perceptions of the spirit world.

 

In the present day, the duel monster empire finds a way to partially bypass the spell's barrier by sending agents to posses duelists through their cards. The possessed duelists are to become the first wave of the empires renewed offensive, with the duel monster controlling them being able to freely roam earth whenever their card is in play.

 

To combat this, the remnants of the alliance, now an underground resistance force futilely struggling against the empire, send their own operatives to earth via the same method. These alliance monsters hope to enlist the aid of the duelists they come in contact with in thwarting the empire.

 

The rp is going to focus on a combination of dueling and more traditional rp combat, with the protagonists trying to root out and stop the empire's agents before their force becomes too large and a war that humanity can't win breaks out.

 

 

Though a classic Signer/Dark Signer RP would be fine.

I wouldn't mind that either. Might reboot an old rp of mine along those lines if i can't flesh out this one fully. Its been giving me a bit of trouble.

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Basic concept is that, before recorded history, there was a war between a duel monster empire and an alliance of humans and duel monsters that almost resulted in the extinction of the human race. The war ended when the alliance cast a spell that exiled the duel monsters to an alternate dimension. However, the spell cost millions of lives as well as the human race's innate ability to use magic. In the alternate dimension, the war raged on, with the empire ultimately defeating the now outnumbered alliance monsters.  In this universe, The game of Duel monsters is based on human racial memories of that war, rather than perceptions of the spirit world.

 

In the present day, the duel monster empire finds a way to partially bypass the spell's barrier by sending agents to posses duelists through their cards. The possessed duelists are to become the first wave of the empires renewed offensive, with the duel monster controlling them being able to freely roam earth whenever their card is in play.

 

To combat this, the remnants of the alliance, now an underground resistance force futilely struggling against the empire, send their own operatives to earth via the same method. These alliance monsters hope to enlist the aid of the duelists they come in contact with in thwarting the empire.

 

The rp is going to focus on a combination of dueling and more traditional rp combat, with the protagonists trying to root out and stop the empire's agents before their force becomes too large and a war that humanity can't win breaks out.

 

 

I wouldn't mind that either. Might reboot an old rp of mine along those lines if i can't flesh out this one fully. Its been giving me a bit of trouble.

 

Question: Would Custom Cards that are balanced be allowed as choices for cards in a duelist's deck? It would have to go through you, of course, but I'm wondering if that would be okay. It would change the feel of this story so that the same cards aren't used over and over. I'm slightly liberal about this, so I'm suggesting a way to make this more unique. Just a suggestion.

 

Also, I'm making a life RP. But it will have a main focus. Hopefully you all don't mind an RP with a focus on a specific religion, or ANY religion for that matter.

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Question: Would Custom Cards that are balanced be allowed as choices for cards in a duelist's deck? It would have to go through you, of course, but I'm wondering if that would be okay. It would change the feel of this story so that the same cards aren't used over and over. I'm slightly liberal about this, so I'm suggesting a way to make this more unique. Just a suggestion.

Custom cards are usually ok in my rps, i just like to approve all of them individually.

 

Anyways, should have my rp up either today or tomorrow.

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Okay, so this idea of mine is a life RP as I've said before. But it's different. You'd have to swallow the fact that it's more or less based on how Christianity effects the lives of certain characters (Those characters being my characters and the ones you make). More specifically, how one Christian man can help bring change to the lives of others who are reaching their lowest point.

 

But there is a story:

 

Bruce Creign (Pronounced "Crane") had just experienced the worst thing ever. His best friend since Kindergarten and possible girlfriend Sarah Louke had pushed him away to giver her time to figure out what her life is for. Bruce then enters a state of depression and psychosis. Next thing he knows, he's knocked out and brought to what appears to be an abandoned warehouse filled with lesser known criminals, who constantly beat him within an inch of his life over the course of a few days. With each day, he reflects over a large portion of his life, preferably the majority of his Senior Year where these events had happened. And as he reflects, he slowly begins to receive a revelation.

 

Every character in this RP made by others are either friends, or know Bruce . This is basically a flashback-styled RP. Everything that you do will effect what happens to you and what happens to Bruce in the present time, or at least how he acts in the present as what happens to him is already decided). Now you have multiple options for characters: You can be a true man of God, you can struggle with your faith, you can choose to not believe it but stay open-minded, you can choose to completely disregard it without truly understanding it, or anything and everything in between. You can even be the criminals beating him up. That would add a lot to the story.

 

The less characters the better, but I'm okay with having extras in case some people wish to have their characters killed off, as doing so will effect those around their characters in certain ways. Who's interested?

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God, I feel so out of the RPing game right now, only active in one RP right now, and that is nearing its ending stages(knock on wood, we have to finish, lol). So I got to thinking about an RP that I could do. I would love to bring back one of my older RPs, but it seems like that is all I do. So instead, I thought of creating one of the many ideas that I have discussed with various members but were never brought to life. The lead of this is an Avatar: The Last Airbender/ Legend of Korra RP.

 

Taking place in an alternate universe, we find ourselves in a 1920's-esque Republic City(for those of you who watch Legend of Korra, you know what I'm talking about). The Avatar is off on adventures and, at the moment, has no place in the story. But, with a hustling and bustling place like Republic City there is always some sort of action to take part in and some kind of mischief to managed. The bending triads are getting antsy, and it seems that a turf war is brewing. The tension that sweeps across the city is so thick you can cut with a knife. One wrong move, and all out war is released upon EVERYONE in Republic City. So who are you? Are you a gang member? A citizen forced to protect your home and family? A member of the police force way in over your head? Or are you the person that is going to save us all. The 100 Years War is behind us, don't let another one start. 

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How about a very vague force which is responsible for shitty rewrites?

Oh, I would love that. Given that trend, I've been waiting for the inevitable Cinderella film along those lines, so I would happily send everyone into a stupid as all hell "darker and edgier" version of the story.


Okay, formulating some more ideas for this. I know what I'd like the "very vague force" to be, but since it's supposed to be vague, I'll keep that to myself. If I'm sticking with the whole "turn the worlds into darker and edgier versions" idea, my plan would be that it's more like the worlds have been torn apart. Something that made the worlds what they were has been taken away, and it's up to Balthazar, his apprentices, and survivors of the ruined worlds to restore them. Meanwhile, the Organization, led by Kreix, who is desperate to follow in the footsteps of Organization, is taking this opportunity to spread out his armies of Nobodies and Heartless across the worlds, believing that, with the worlds in pieces, any resistance is split up.
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Alright...idea came to my mind after watching the newest episode of CF!!V...and before you turn me off about suggesting a CF!!V RP...I believe this one may peek interests some.

 

Take into consideration in the openings of late, where Aichi actually becomes Blaster Blade Liberator. With that in mind...I'll tell you what I have in mind.

 

[spoiler=The Basic Idea]

Link Joker fully takes over the world...and begins to rule over our world and Cray.

 

Cardfights haven't been able to be enjoyable, ever since the Link Joker invasion...as well as the multitude of Joker units roaming the world. However, a few Cardfighters have banded together, discovering a technology in which that was left as a insurance policy by Tatsunagi Takuto years prior. This technology is like that of the holo-projections used in Cardfights, however, it allows the fighters to become their units (what the appearance of said technology is still unworked out in my head). With this, the Cardfighters decide to use these in their rebellion against the Link Joker...to take back their world and Cray.

[/spoiler]

 

Soooo, with the current outcome of Vanguard now...would anyone still be interested in this?

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