Auralady Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 Four years have gone by sents the village hidden in the leaf and the village hiden in the steam had fought. Now the two villages live in peace together, but their troubles are not nearly over. The long lost akatsuki as emerged from the darkness with knew goals. Their leader Mitako has set their sights on destroying the leaf village and taking the life of the hokage. Their well known group has been called the Espada, for the name akatsuki doesn't amuse them. The dangers have grown even bigger than before. Will you survive? About the Village Hidden in the Steam and their Shinobi~ The Village hiden in the steam is a small village that is surrounded by dangerous gorges and high mountains. The village is known for their beautiful hotsprings, and crystal caves. The village could be found in the Countrey of earth in the land of needles. After learning about the Jinchuuriki and the tailed beast, the leader of Steam village became intrigued in the idea of shinobi, beast hybrids. His Obsession led him to creating just that. He created Hybrids by Completely sealing an everyday animal into a childs body using the power of chakra crystals the village had created. Only the most Gifted steam shinobi were chosen. The leader had named his creations Konketsu Demons. Rules~*Advanced Clause and other YCM rules apply*Keep romance as clean as possible, and cussing to a minimum*Put as much detail in your forms as possible Steam Shinobi Application~Name: Age:Konketsu Demon or not?:Animal Mixed with(If is):Rank:Gender:Tools:Abilities:Looks:Demon Form Picture?:Bf/Gf:Other: Espada Application~Name:Age:Village from:Gender:Tools:Abilites:Looks:Partner Request:Bf/Gf:History:Other: Normal Ninja Application~Name: Age:Rank:Gender:Tools:Abilities:Looks:Bf/Gf:Other: Normal Ninja~Academy Students: Genin: Chunin: Jonin: Hokage: Anbu: Espada Ranks~Leader:Second in Command: Ruki Netomi - female - Raven Konketsu Demon - Chunin - former Steam ShinobiMembers: Teams:Ruki + Steam Village Shinobi~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 Please read the minimum requirements for applications and edit yours thusly. You have 24 hours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ListenToLife Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 Kinda need to work on the Grammar and stuff as well.Also, there already exists the Village of Hot water/Yugakure, which is where Hidan originates from. You should probably change the name from steam to avoid misunderstandings.Also, the Espada? Couldn't you think of something more original?Spoilers would be helpful to organise your post. It'd be nice if you could use the original names for stuff alongside the Viz version aswell (Such as Bijuu and Konoha.) Bf/Gf is also kinda pointless in an app. Any app really, especially for something like Naruto. You also made a bit of a contradiction in how the Konketsu Demons were formed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auralady Posted July 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 There goes that. Alright... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted August 1, 2012 Report Share Posted August 1, 2012 APPLICATION CONTENTSAll RP application forms require at minimum a field each for name, gender and age, as well as a space for appearance (either a picture and/or 1+ paragraph of description, at the GM’s discretion) and personality (1+ paragraph). Additional fields are of course up to the GM to add, but this is a basic skeleton. Other structures for applications, such as freeform or diary-style, must indicate that this information or the equivalent is somehow expressed. Please note the bolded section. You failed to do so. LOCKED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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