My new Totem set.

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

[b][u]Quaking Totem Spirit[/u][/b]
EARTH/Level 2
Rock/Effect
[u]Lore:[/u]
When this card is Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Totem" monster from your hand, except "Totem Dragon" or "Quaking Totem Spirit". During your Main Phase 1, if this card is in your Graveyard, by sending 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.
ATK: 100 DEF: 100

[u][b]Tidal Totem Spirit[/b][/u]
WATER/Level 2
Aqua/Effect
[u]Lore:[/u]
During your Main Phase 1, if this card is in your Graveyard, by sending 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, select 1 monster your opponent controls and destroy it.
ATK: 100 DEF: 100

[b][u]Burning Totem Spirit[/u][/b]
FIRE/Level 2
Pyro/Effect
[u]Lore:[/u]
When this card is Summoned, you can inflict 500 damage to your opponent. During your Main Phase 1, if this card is in your Graveyard, by sending 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.
ATK: 100 DEF: 100

[u][b]Raging Totem Spirit[/b][/u]
WIND/Level 2
Winged-Beast/Effect
[u]Lore:[/u]
When this card is Summoned while you control 2 or more "Totem" monsters, except "Totem Dragon" or "Raging Totem Spirit", you can return up to 2 set Spell or Trap cards on your opponent's field to his/her hand. During your Main Phase 1, if this card is in your Graveyard, by sending 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.
ATK: 100 DEF: 100

[u][b]Sinister Totem Spirit[/b][/u]
DARK/Level 2
Fiend/Effect
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 "Spiritual Awakening" to your hand from your Deck, or Graveyard. During your Main Phase 1, if this card is in your Graveyard, by sending 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.
ATK: 100 DEF: 100

[u][b]Shining Totem Spirit[/b][/u]
LIGHT/Level 2
Fairy/Effect
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
When this card is Summoned, increase your Life Points by 500. During your Main Phase 1, if this card is in your Graveyard, by sending 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard, Special Summon it.
ATK: 100 DEF: 100

[u][b]Spiritual Awakening[/b][/u]
Spell
Quick-play
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
You can activate this card when you control 4 or more "Totem" monsters with different names, except "Totem Dragon". Return these monsters back to the Deck and Special Summon 1 "Toityem, Bountiful Spirit Dragon" from your Deck, hand, or Graveyard.

[u][b]Toityem, Bountiful Spirit Dragon[/b][/u]
LIGHT/Level 7
Dragon/Effect
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned by the effect of "Spiritual Awakening" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. When this card is Summoned, destroy 1 monster your opponent controls and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the destroyed monster's ATK. The ATK and DEF of this card becomes the number of "Totem" monsters, except "Totem Dragon", used in the Special Summoning of this card x 700. When this card is destroyed by battle, Special Summon 1 "Totem" monster from your hand.
ATK: ? DEF: ?

[u][b]Spirit Changer[/b][/u]
Spell
Normal
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
Send 1 card in your hand to the graveyard, add 1 "Totem" monster to your hand, from your deck, except "Totem Dragon".

[u][b]Totem Guard[/b][/u]
Trap
Counter
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
When a "Totem" monster you control is selected as an attack target by your opponent, you can negate the attack and destroy the attacking monster. You can also send 1 card in your hand to the Graveyard.

[u][b]Spirit's Tactics[/b][/u]
Trap
Counter
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
When your opponent declares a direct attack, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon as many "Totem" monsters, except "Totem Dragon", from your hand as possible. These monsters cannot be destroyed by battle this turn, and are destroyed during the End Phase.

[u][b]Totem Doll[/b][/u]
DARK/Level 2
Fiend/Effect
[u][b]Lore:[/b][/u]
Tribute this face-up card you control to Special Summon 2 "Totem" monster(s), except "Totem Dragon", from your Deck. These monsters are destroyed during the End Phase of the turn.
ATK: 0 DEF: 0

[u][b]Spiritwalker[/b][/u]
WIND/Level 4
Spellcaster/Effect
[u]Lore:[/u]
FLIP: Send 1 "Totem" monster from the Deck to your Graveyard, except "Totem Dragon".
ATK: 1700 DEF: 1000

[u][b]Universal Spirit[/b][/u]
Spell
[u]Equip[/u]
Select 1 "Totem" monster you control. It gains 200 ATK for every "Totem" monster in your Graveyard, except "Totem Dragon", until the End Phase. When the equipped monster is destroyed by battle, send this card to the Graveyard.

[DrunkenSage69]

First off, I want to thank you for commenting on my Solitari set that is in progress .

Ok now for your cards: I like the idea behind your cards a lot. Swarming the field with the little guys, triggering great effects when the hit the field, and then you have your quick-play for the huge boss monster to cause chaos for your opponent. However, I do have some suggestions:[list=1]
[*]For Quaking, I would allow him to Special Summon the totem as long as it is not "Quaking Totem Spirirt" otherwise it will be a big swarm with 1 card. Other than that, really good .
[*]Tidal seems a little broken to just pop a card when it is summoned. Maybe having it when it is revived by its won effect? Good card other than that, just make it less OPed.
[*]Raging is like a mini Giant Trunade. I would suggest to make his effect go off only when it is summoned when you control 2 or more Totems just to keep things less broken on field control (even though it is easy to swarm, but you lose cards so it won't be too easy).
[*]Toityem is such a great boss monster. But, I would just reduce the stat increase a little because even though you need 4 totems, a random 4000 beater is a little to much of a surprise (even though we all really like surprises).
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Other than those changes, I have huge OCD and I like being up-to-date with the Problem-Solving Card text using colons and semi-colens. Great cards overall, I really would like to see these get some extra support (just a little ).
[size=5][color=#FF0000][u][i][b]Overall: 9/10[/b][/i][/u][/color][/size]

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

Changed them. How about this?

[DrunkenSage69]

I like the changes man, great cards .
Now [size=5][color=#FF0000][i][b]10/10[/b][/i][/color][/size] XD

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

You're so cool!

[DrunkenSage69]

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You're so cool!
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Lol thanks man I try my best. Message me if you need any kind of help with cool cards like these .

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

Well, come to think of it, I am in pre-production of wanting to make a new set. Calling it the "Shattered Soul" set.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Here's what I think:

[b][u]Quaking Totem Spirit[/u][/b] - Okay card. Nothing all that bad about it.

[u][b]Tidal Totem Spirit[/b][/u] - I can see this being used in Frogs and destroying everything in sight. The destruction effect is just too much. This is easily the most powerful of the Totems.

[b][u]Burning Totem Spirit[/u][/b] - Very weak effect compared to the others, and not really worth Summoning. Can be used with Volcanics, though.

[u][b]Raging Totem Spirit[/b][/u] - An okay effect, nothing wrong with it.

[u][b]Sinister Totem Spirit[/b][/u] - A bit odd that the "sinister" one would be the one to "summon the dragon", unless it's supposed to be an evil dragon.

[u][b]Shining Totem Spirit[/b][/u] - See Burning Totem.

[u][b]Toityem, Bountiful Spirit Dragon[/b][/u] - You don't need to say "Except Totem Dragon", because the Spell Card already says as much.

[u][b]Spirit Changer[/b][/u] - If anything it's underpowered, but I guess it has its combos.

[u][b]Totem Guard[/b][/u] - A little underhwlming, but okay. Not sure why you would want to discard unless you REALLY needed a way to Special Summon instead of Normal Summon.

[u][b]Spirit's Tactics[/b][/u] - A little weird, and kind of useless. Only one combo for it, and that doesn't really help.

[u][b]Totem Doll[/b][/u] - Oh boy. I can see a lot of potential abuse.

[u][b]Spiritwalker[/b][/u] - An okay addition to the theme.

[u][b]Celestial Spirit Mistress[/b][/u] - Eh... Not all that useful, but I guess it lets you do something...Maybe give it a real effect?

[u][b]Universal Spirit[/b][/u] - You don't need to say "and equip it with this card". Just say "Can only be equipped to a "Totem" monster. I also assume you mean "send this card to the Graveyard instead"?

A bit of your OCG is messed up, but that's okay. It doesn't really matter all that much.

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

Thanks for your feedback. I always welcome it. I know that some may look pointless or stupid or whatever, but I don't know, I just had a sort of vision of these cards, and I also like writing cards because I think they'd look cool or mysterious, and there would always be a way to turn the tide of a duel when all used in a certain way. I have always found the weak, oddly effected cards the most interesting. Even if they lose, I can visualise someone playing these out in a duel and I like that. It makes me feel good to get my ideas and stuff onto a screen/paper, even though they could be a proper disaster.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

Well, there's definitely nothing wrong with that. I'm just giving suggestions on how to design more balanced cards. That might not be everyone's intent, but most people like to see cards that are both useable and also not extremely overpowered. You can do what it is you want, it's just some friendly tips.

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

Well, thank you so much. I have changed some of them using your tips too.

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

Anyone know how to move this into the 'Finished Sets' subforum. I accidentally put it here.

[DrunkenSage69]

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Anyone know how to move this into the 'Finished Sets' subforum. I accidentally put it here.
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In order for this to go into finished sets, you have to have pictures of the cards with images otherwise they will lock your topic (or at least I think they will).

[Ambrogirmint705]

Awesome sets, great cards combination and if played right; all of the combination's could devastate your opponent greatly

[DarkTunerMiseryKing]

Thanks guys!