Durandamon Posted July 29, 2012 Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Well, I've been wanting to do some more GFX'ing and I found a nice quality render, so I gave it a shot. Behold my awfulness: [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/29yl5qu.png[/IMG] [font=times new roman,times,serif][size=5][color=#ff0000]CnC![/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Alpha Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Not bad but you you need to work on your lighting(I should be last to talk), that ball of light looks a bit unatural, but still not bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 You have got the depth well done however I feel if more was added behind the render, the depth would have been even better Top right feels empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 Honestly not bad. Truthfully, if you actually made at least a tag every two days you would excel rather quickly. I think your main problem is finding things to incorporate into a piece, your atmo is amazing at such a low level. I'd say if you don't have anything to add, don't be afraid to c4d spam (if done right, the BG becomes interesting). Also lighting wise, a simple stroke with a larger white circle fuzzy brush set to about 30% opacity would do the trick. Would love to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted July 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 [quote name='.Alpha' timestamp='1343624097' post='5992546'] Not bad but you you need to work on your lighting(I should be last to talk), that ball of light looks a bit unatural, but still not bad. [b]lol that's what kills me, freaking lightning. I never get it right [/b] [/quote] [quote name='Serenade' timestamp='1343643575' post='5992636'] You have got the depth well done however I feel if more was added behind the render, the depth would have been even better Top right feels empty. [b]Improving the background? I think I get it. Also, on the top right I had some stuff going on, but it felt too distracting from the focal, so I took it off.[/b] [/quote] [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1343663665' post='5992738'] Honestly not bad. Truthfully, if you actually made at least a tag every two days you would excel rather quickly. [b] [/b] I think your main problem is finding things to incorporate into a piece, your atmo is amazing at such a low level. [b]Thanks a lot! I actually don't have much c4d's, and I can't find good ones, so that's why I don't use much[/b] I'd say if you don't have anything to add, don't be afraid to c4d spam (if done right, the BG becomes interesting). Also lighting wise, a simple stroke with a larger white circle fuzzy brush set to about 30% opacity would do the trick. [b]I see what you mean with it. I'll try to take this into account from now on.[/b] Would love to see more. [b]Actually making another one right now :3[/b] [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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