.Rai Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 [center][IMG]http://i47.tinypic.com/35heb02.jpg[/IMG][/center] Generally experimenting with the types of render I use. Kinda happy with this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 You're getting better at lighting, it's starting to become instinctive and make sense both conceptual and in your execution. My main problem is that the twinkles of light are a bit distracting, especially the farthest to the left, I like however how you made that one not as bright, more proof you're starting to instinctively get it. That and all of the negative space and really the parts of the piece that have nothing productive going on, just feeling a bit bland. However improvement comes before how aesthetically pleasing it is, well done friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted July 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1343492562' post='5991018'] You're getting better at lighting, it's starting to become instinctive and make sense both conceptual and in your execution. My main problem is that the twinkles of light are a bit distracting, especially the farthest to the left, I like however how you made that one not as bright, more proof you're starting to instinctively get it. That and all of the negative space and really the parts of the piece that have nothing productive going on, just feeling a bit bland. However improvement comes before how aesthetically pleasing it is, well done friend. [/quote] Thanks for the critique. Nice to know I'm improving C: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Speaking of. [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/286950-battle-of-the-elites/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/286950-battle-of-the-elites/[/url] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Alpha Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Im not liking the C4d over on the left seems distracting and dosent blend with the rest of the tag also it seem a bit messy IMO, but other than that its a good tag. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted July 28, 2012 Report Share Posted July 28, 2012 Meh the C4D doesn't seem to flow well at all, it's like it's standing out way too much, then we have the ugly transition between light and dark, imo it would have been better if you kind of slowly smoked them into each other, if you know what I mean, also the light sources are placed in kind of a random positing, I've seen you do way better Tags, however as Night mentioned your lighting is improving, no one is perfect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted July 30, 2012 Report Share Posted July 30, 2012 I love it. This style is awesome. Make more like this. Keep working on your execution in terms of colors and quality and you'll be in business. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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