new deck thing old concept i guess help ?

[Garthfunkle Vii Backwards]

[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/olmuY.jpg[/IMG]

deck recipe (yes you gotta put the deck recipe down sides and extra too now im hungery)

main deck 40 total

monsters 17 total
1 morphing jar
3 marauding captain
1 stratos
3 abyss soldier
3 reg. bubbleman
3 ocean
3 heats

spells 22 total
1 foolish burial
1 monster reborn
1 heavy storm
1 reforcement of the army
1 pot of avarice
1 mind control
1 hand destrction
3 the warrior returning alive
3 double summons
3 mst
3 fake heros
3 back to square one

traps 1 total
the transmirgation prophecy

side deck 15 total
1 sangan
2 malicious
2 trag
1 dark hole
1 burial from a differnet dimension
3 cheerfull coffin
2 ult offerings
3 compullsory dev

extra deck 15 total (all xyz)
2 awaken hero
2 emeral
2 gaga gunman
2 chain
2 39
2 ninja
2 excalibur
1.00 superdreadnought rail cannon gustav max

any improements ?

hint im using a strategy that this deck focuses on using so if you start saying fusion this and etc its spam
i want to make this deck that uses this strategy better by using cards that would work well together that use this startegy

so help