Surprise Attack

[Nu-Mou Knight]

Surprise Attack

Normal Trap Card

Effect: Activate this card only when an opponent's card effect resolves or your opponent successfully Summons a monster during their Main Phase 1. Proceed immediately to your opponent's Battle Phase. You can then pay 1000 Life Points to select 1 monster you control. The selected monster can declare an attack against 1 monster your opponent controls during this Battle Phase, and it must attack first during this Battle Phase.

Essentially, after your opponent's first move, you can strike. It would make your opponent think harder about what to start their plays with if such a card existed. I have no idea if the "attack during your opponent's Battle Phase" bit is any sort of correct, so if you do, go ahead and say so.

[Bahamut - Envoy of the End]

Reminds me of Offside Trap for some odd reason.

First bit seems reasonable actually.

However the part about you attacking them seems generally strange. The concept I understand given the name, but maybe just one attack would be enough.

LORE: [b]When your opponent summons a monster or activates a card effect successfully; proceed immediately to the Battle Phase and Target 1 monster on each side of the field. Those two monsters battle immediately (considering your monster as attacking your opponents monster).[/b]

Hope that does from OCG; it's all new to me.

Would be hilarious tech against Rabbit. "I summon Rescue Rabbit and..." "This, Zenmaister attack Rabbit!"

[Nu-Mou Knight]

[quote name='Majestic Star Bahamut' timestamp='1342972042' post='5985523']
Reminds me of Offside Trap for some odd reason.
First bit seems reasonable actually.
However the part about you attacking them seems generally strange. The concept I understand given the name, but maybe just one attack would be enough.
LORE: [b]When your opponent summons a monster or activates a card effect successfully; proceed immediately to the Battle Phase and Target 1 monster on each side of the field. Those two monsters battle immediately (considering your monster as attacking your opponents monster).[/b]
Hope that does from OCG; it's all new to me.
Would be hilarious tech against Rabbit. "I summon Rescue Rabbit and..." "This, Zenmaister attack Rabbit!"
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Yeah, that's why I said I had no idea about the OCG. I would have to agree that one attack would be enough; it wouldn't exactly be fair if your opponent used Reinforcement or something, then your whole field attacked. The way you wrote it feels way too wordy to me, though, and the targeting could just be implied by attacking. I do see what you're trying to say, though, and the effect is being fixed up. Thanks for the comment!