.Rai Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Ended up being really busy, which I'm annoyed about, because I didn't do this as well as I wanted ;-; It's mostly because of the random clipping mask. The layers are fairly flexible, so obviously CnC and suggest changes :3 [IMG]http://i48.tinypic.com/2ur3ya8.jpg[/IMG] V2 [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/f06wbq.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Definitely your best yet. Flow and lighting are rather solid, your atmo and depth could be better though, the BG doesn't do the rest of the piece justice. A proper galaxy stock with space ships and s*** of that sort would have been better. Crop out the left side where that blue light is, or add more and use them for proper lighting around the piece. And did you g-map? Doesn't look like it. Feels more wippish than done. Overall, much improvement, quite like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342290473' post='5977932'] Definitely your best yet. Flow and lighting are rather solid, your atmo and depth could be better though, the BG doesn't do the rest of the piece justice. A proper galaxy stock with space ships and s*** of that sort would have been better. Crop out the left side where that blue light is, or add more and use them for proper lighting around the piece. And did you g-map? Doesn't look like it. Feels more wippish than done. Overall, much improvement, quite like it. [/quote] Yeah, I'll crop. It's annoying me now you've mentioned it I was so tempted to use a galaxy stock, but my history with them hasn't always been great :3 I g-mapped, but probably not enough. A couple of luminosity maps and a purple-orange map. More? Thanks, I'll change a bit. Edit: Added a V2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 It's pretty good. Work on your blending though. Particularly with her hair. It should have a little more purple to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote name='Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh' timestamp='1342292197' post='5977965'] It's pretty good. Work on your blending though. Particularly with her hair. It should have a little more purple to it. [/quote] Thanks. That makes sense with the hair, I'll fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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