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[Kakashi} Swords ‘n’ Bunnies Tag


Kakashi Hatake

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Not bad actually, one of your bests.
Looks more like a wip tbh, a bit too bland and unfinished as is.
You've improved though, which is always a plus.

You're also getting your lighting up to par, could use a lesson in atmo though.

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The lighting right of the chick is fine, but on its own it looks as if it's the dominant source, when it isn't.
From the shading on the render, the dominant source should be somewhere to the left only slightly under her face.

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Really like the look of it atm, but it does really feel like a wip.
The lighting is pretty much allright imo, except on the sword. It's way too light there.
If you'd blend the focal more in the tag and add some mood to it with some effects (space stocks or something), it would be a pretty fine piece.

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[quote name='Seta' timestamp='1342218550' post='5976913']
Really like the look of it atm, but it does really feel like a wip.
The lighting is pretty much allright imo, except on the sword. It's way too light there.
If you'd blend the focal more in the tag and add some mood to it with some effects (space stocks or something), it would be a pretty fine piece.
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Basically my cnc +10.

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[quote name='Seta' timestamp='1342218816' post='5976924']
Yeah copied your's off to still look like I know this stuff.
Sorry bro
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Haha, nahh I meant you basically complemented my cnc, in the sense that you said everything I didn't include.

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[quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342218967' post='5976930']
Haha, nahh I meant you basically complemented my cnc, in the sense that you said everything I didn't include.
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Yeah I got it, let's quit the spam here tho'

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