Turtles are Messy (FIN)

[LC]

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CnC, [s]still in the early stages of creating the smudge. Might replace render later on.[/s]

[Night]

You're developing a good smudge style here, starting to resemble pochy, just a tad.

[url="http://i388.photobucket.com/albums/oo329/eddy_photo/Tag/fullstylevSv9.png"]Pochy's work[/url]

I'd like to see some more outgoing strokes, with a multitude of colours.
Clearly that's just something to think about moving forward, but I think you've got the potential to produce some pretty dope smudges.
Can't wait to see the rest.

[LC]

[quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342204498' post='5976685']
You're developing a good smudge style here, starting to resemble pochy, just a tad.
[url="http://i388.photobucket.com/albums/oo329/eddy_photo/Tag/fullstylevSv9.png"]Pochy's work[/url]
I'd like to see some more outgoing strokes, with a multitude of colours.
Clearly that's just something to think about moving forward, but I think you've got the potential to produce some pretty dope smudges.
Can't wait to see the rest.
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Thanks bro. ^^

Main problem I have is adding colors into it. There are other problems but this is the biggest one.

[Night]

End result? Going to assume you're done, looks dope as all hell.
Adding colors is quite simple actually, you just make a new layer and start with a simple colored circle and then smudge as you would anything else.
I'd love to collab with you actually, my smudge isn't the best, but I could add some depth, lighting and atmo to your smudge, something that is much needed.
You've definitely got a great hand for smudging, but you lack everything else that makes a piece.

[Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh]

That smudge is really nice. See if you can start incorporating colors into it too.

[.Rai]

A little messsy round the edges, but could end up so great. Liking the way you smudge.

[LC]

[quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342217109' post='5976875']
End result? Going to assume you're done, looks dope as all hell.
Adding colors is quite simple actually, you just make a new layer and start with a simple colored circle and then smudge as you would anything else.
I'd love to collab with you actually, my smudge isn't the best, but I could add some depth, lighting and atmo to your smudge, something that is much needed.
You've definitely got a great hand for smudging, but you lack everything else that makes a piece.
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Thanks, it's not done yet though. Still got some things I wanna add.

Sounds great. I'd love to collab with you bro.

[quote name='Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh' timestamp='1342217150' post='5976876']
That smudge is really nice. See if you can start incorporating colors into it too.
[/quote]

Thanks. yeah I was hoping to try to add color. Execution is still a matter though.

[quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1342217219' post='5976878']
A little messsy round the edges, but could end up so great. Liking the way you smudge.
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I'll try and clean 'em up. Thanks mate.

[Night]

The second is too dope, you really need to develop your smudge style because as of now it's looking good.
Don't really like the darkened edges, they draw too much attention away from the focal and don't look good in general.
I'd love to see more.

Also, for the collab just send me a pm whenever you're ready and I'll drop you a render to use.

[Seta]

You managed to turn it from a really incomplete piece to a pretty dope one.
Love the simple yet effective fx on it.
Not really too much bad imo in this one except the lighting. Like Night too said, the shading in the sides is too obvious, make it look more natural.

[LC]

[quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342230052' post='5977121']
The second is too dope, you really need to develop your smudge style because as of now it's looking good.
Don't really like the darkened edges, they draw too much attention away from the focal and don't look good in general.
I'd love to see more.
Also, for the collab just send me a pm whenever you're ready and I'll drop you a render to use.
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[quote name='Seta' timestamp='1342257416' post='5977613']
You managed to turn it from a really incomplete piece to a pretty dope one.
Love the simple yet effective fx on it.
Not really too much bad imo in this one except the lighting. Like Night too said, the shading in the sides is too obvious, make it look more natural.
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Deleted the darkened edges and tried to incorporate the shadows into the separate strokes a bit more.

[.Rai]

Seriously very, very cool. The non-vignetted versions are probably better as Nw said about the darkened edges. Loving how simple the effects are on this.

[LC]

[quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1342274559' post='5977746']
Seriously very, very cool. The non-vignetted versions are probably better as Nw said about the darkened edges. Loving how simple the effects are on this.
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Thanks Rai.