Lonk Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 Blue Armored Barracuda Rank 3 WATER Fish/Xyz/Effect ATK/1900 DEF/2400 2 Level 3 WATER Monsters Cannot be Special Summoned from your Graveyard. When this card is Special Summoned (except by Xyz Summon): Return 1 card on the field to the top of the owner's Deck. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and either discard 1 WATER monster or tribute 1 WATER monster; banish 1 card your opponent controls. Shellshocked Crustacean Rank 2 WATER Aqua/Xyz/Effect ATK/1000 DEF/1000 2 Level 2 WATER Monsters Once per turn; Detach 1 Xyz Material from a WATER Xyz monster you control. Neither player can activate card effects until your opponent's End Phase. During the End Phase where this card has no Xyz Materials: Banish this card. Mist of Rejuvenation Rank 1 WATER Fairy/Xyz/Effect ATK/700 DEF/300 2 Level 1 Monsters Once per turn; you can detach 1 Xyz Material from 1 Xyz Monster on the field: attach 2 monsters from your Graveyard onto an Xyz Monster you control. While this card has Xyz Materials: This card cannot be selected as an attack target and cannot be targeted by card effects. Link to comment
Lonk Posted July 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 YCM, y u no comment? Link to comment
newhat Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 Advanced Clause scurred errybody away. EDIT: I just realized I had Barracuda's first effect backwards. That effect is fine. The second effect is like a better version of Scrap Dragon's effect, although since you need a WATER monster you can't shoot Fiendish Chains at stuff like Scrap Dragon can. Shellshocked Crustacean should have a colon...somewhere. I'm not sure how much of it is a cost and how much is an effect. Presumably it's meant for Atlantean Armsman, so detaching should be a cost. It also needs an activation timing since it's Mandatory (unless you meant to make it Optional, in which case "You can" should lead the cost). Mist of Rejuvenation should have a "Once per turn" clause. Otherwise you produce loops with cards that activate when they hit the Graveyard, like Dandylion and Hanged Man of Prophecy. Link to comment
Lonk Posted July 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 I forgot the Once per turn clause on Rejuvenation. Thanks. Barracuda was made thinking of Bahamut Shark (What it says on the tag) while being Xyz Summoned properly gives it even more use in Atlantean Mermails. I actually had Gishkis on my mind for Shellshock, considering that it gives disruption without being bad about it. Mist, we need a good Rank 1 2 Material Xyz monster. That is all. Link to comment
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