Kakashi Hatake Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 [center][img]http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/3268/linesy.png[/img][/center] [center][spoiler=Less Eye-Aching Version][/center] [center][img]http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/811/lesscolor.png[/img][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][spoiler=Original Doodle with colors][/center] [center][img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/3268/linesy.png[/img][/center] [center][/spoiler][/center] [center][quote][/center] [center][b]I've just been playing around with the Pen-Tool a lot lately and decided to make another lineart. This is just another character I made up for the shits and giggles. I like her.[/b][/center] [center][b]Anyway, tell me what you think and CnC and stuff, y'know![/b][/center] [center][/quote][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 [color=#000066][b]Is it weird the first thing I noticed is where the handprint things on her body are located? xD[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]OT: The eye, I think that is, looks a bit too big for my liking. Also, the hood up makes the head a bit too round, and I honestly would've preferred it to be down, letting the hair have fun. Also, the hood pocket looks a bit weird in my opinion, and her right pocket side makes it look as if the stitching came lose and the pocket's drooping down. Because of this, I'm not really sure if her right hand's in her hood or pants pocket. But still, overall, it's a lot better than anything I could've done. The coloring is kind of meh though. Still good Kaka~ [/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted July 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 [quote name='Dusk Neph' timestamp='1341977825' post='5973662'] [color=#000066][b]Is it weird the first thing I noticed is where the handprint things on her body are located? xD[/b][/color] [color=#008000][b]Yeah, it's supposed to be like that. xD[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]OT: The eye, I think that is, looks a bit too big for my liking. [/b][/color][color=#008000][b]I'm not changing it...[/b][/color][color=#000066][b] Also, the hood up makes the head a bit too round, and I honestly would've preferred it to be down, letting the hair have fun. [/b][/color][color=#008000][b]Well, she's emo so her hood is up and her hood is round because her hair has... volume. xD[/b][/color][color=#000066][b] Also, the hood pocket looks a bit weird in my opinion, and her right pocket side makes it look as if the stitching came lose and the pocket's drooping down. Because of this, I'm not really sure if her right hand's in her hood or pants pocket. [/b][/color][color=#008000][b]Yeah, I can agree. I should hav put more attention into the pocket. Both of her hands are in her pocket, btw.[/b][/color][color=#000066][b] But still, overall, it's a lot better than anything I could've done. The coloring is kind of meh though. Still good Kaka~ [/b][/color] [/quote] Thanks for the critique, man. It helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 I'm not even gonna critique this, because frankly this is the most awesome stylistic piece I've seen for a while in Showcase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 Those colors make my eyes cringe. As for everything else, it's simplistic but rather appealing, would love to see something like this in large scale (a proper LP perhaps?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted July 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 [quote name='.Rai' timestamp='1342003512' post='5973956'] I'm not even gonna critique this, because frankly this is the most awesome stylistic piece I've seen for a while in Showcase. [/quote] Thanks, it's awesome to hear that! [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342008327' post='5973973'] Those colors make my eyes cringe. As for everything else, it's simplistic but rather appealing, would love to see something like this in large scale (a proper LP perhaps?) [/quote] Yeah, I'll upload a less color...y version. What do you mean, "LP"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted July 11, 2012 Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 [quote name='Kakashi Hatake' timestamp='1342025380' post='5974184'] Thanks, it's awesome to hear that! Yeah, I'll upload a less color...y version. What do you mean, "LP"? [/quote] Large Piece. 500 x 300 + Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kakashi Hatake Posted July 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2012 [quote name=''Night' timestamp='1342025902' post='5974193'] Large Piece. 500 x 300 + [/quote] Oh, yeah. I might, but probably not any time soon. About to add the original doodle version of this piece with color. It has it's own little charm. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 I've never understood how you pull of pentool. It looks pretty good. Make Moar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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