DrunkenSage69 Posted July 4, 2012 Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 Hey everyone, I have made an original archetype called [b][u][i]Dethpich[/i][/u][/b]. They are based around swarming for really quick Xyz Summons and searching to set them up. The effect monsters are based off of the musical alphabet (A-G), each name starting with one of those letters. The Xyz Monsters [u][i][b](Dethpich Khords)[/b][/i][/u] are coined from the names of chords (based off how many notes are needed to make that chord). [spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=[color=#ff8c00]Effect Monsters[/color]][color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Akinyele[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 1700 / DEF: 1000 Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 "Dethpich" monster from your Deck. If you control face-up "Dethpich" monster other than "Dethpich - Akinyele": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). [color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Blasé[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 1300 / DEF: 1400 Lore: When this card is Normal Summoned: You can add 1 Dethpich" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If you control a face-up "Dethpich" monster other than "Dethpich - Blasé": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). [color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Casanova[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 2100 / DEF: 800 Lore: This card cannot be Normal Summoned. If this card declares an attack: Increase the ATK of this card by 100 for each face-up "Dethpich" monster you control during the Damage Step only and switch this card to Defense Mode after the Damage Step. This card can be Special Summoned (from your hand) if you control 2 face-up "Dethpich" monsters other than "Dethpich - Casanova". [color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Damien[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 1800 / DEF: 1000 Lore: Activate this card only when you control a face-up "Dethpich" monster and when your opponent activates a card effect that targets a card on the field. Negate the card and destroy it. Also, you can Special Summon 1 "Dethpich" monster from your hand. [color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Eurythmics[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 1000 / DEF: 2000 Lore : During the Battle Phase when a face-up "Dethpich" monster would be destroyed as a result of battle: You can discard this card to the Graveyard instead. If you control a face-up "Dethpich" monster other than "Dethpich - Eurythmics": You can Special Summon this card (from your hand). [color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Franz[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 1500 / DEF: 1500 Lore: When this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can add 1 Spell or Trap card from your Deck that contains "Dethpich" in its card effect. If you control 2 face-up "Dethpich" monsters other than "Dethpich - Franz": You can Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard). [color=#ff8c00][b]Dethpich - Gnarls[/b][/color] DARK / Level 4 / Psychic / ATK: 0 / DEF: 0 Lore: If this card is added to your hand by the effect of a "Dethpich" monster: You can Special Summon this card. You can only activate the effect of "Dethpich - Gnarls" once per turn.[/spoiler][spoiler=[color=#000000]Xyz Monsters[/color]][color=#000000][b]Dethpich Khord - Dyadus[/b][/color] DARK / Rank 4 / Psychic / ATK: 2300 / DEF: 2000 Lore: 2 Level 4 "Dethpich" Monsters Once per turn, during either players' turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Increase the ATK of all face-up "Dethpich" monsters you control by 100 for each "Dethpich" monster you control until the End Phase. If a "Dethpich" monster would be destroyed: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead. [color=#000000][b]Dethpich Khord - Tryadd[/b][/color] DARK / Rank 4 / Psychic / ATK: 2700 / DEF: 2200 Lore: 3 Level 4 "Dethpich" Monsters Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Add 1 "Dethpich" monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand. If a "Dethpich" monster is destroyed: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from any "Dethpich Khord" Xyz Monster you control to pecial Summon it during the End Phase. [color=#000000][b]Dethpich Khord - Tetraldyl[/b][/color] DARK / Rank 4 / Psychic / ATK:2600 / DEF: 2400 Lore: 4 Level 4 "Dethpich" Monsters Once per turn, you can detach 2 Xyz Material from this card: Special Summon 1 "Dethpich" monster from your Deck. During the End Phase if this card is in your Graveyard: Special Summon this card and attach 2 face-up "Dethpich" monsters that you control to this card as its Xyz Materials. You can only activate the effect of "Dethpich Khord - Tetraldyl" once per turn. [color=#000000][b]Dethpich Khord - Pentax[/b][/color] DARK / Rank 4 / Psychic / ATK:3000 / DEF: 2500 Lore: 5 Level 5 "Dethpich" Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: You can detach all the Xyz Materials on this card: Return all cards on the field to their owner's hand (except this card) and increase this card's ATK by 100 and inflict 300 points to your opponent for each card returned to its owner's hand by this effect. [color=#000000][b]Dethpich Khord - Palios[/b][/color] DARK / Rank 4 / Psychic / ATK: 3500 / DEF: 1500 Lore: This card can only be Xyz Summoned by using 2 Xyz monsters you control (Xyz Materials attached to those monsters also become Xyz Materials on this card). If this card has no Xyz Materials: Destroy this card. During each of your End Phases, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler][spoiler=[color=#008000]Spells Cards[/color]][color=#008000]Khord Builder[/color] Continuous Lore: You can only activate this card when you control no monsters. Special Summon 3 "Dethpich" monsters with different names from your Graveyard. These monsters' effects are negated and cannot declare an attack or change their battle position, except by a card effect. If this card is removed from the field: Destroy all the monsters Special Summoned by this card. If one of the monsters Special Summoned monsters is removed from the field: Destroy this card. [color=#008000]Change in Pich[/color] Quick-Play Lore: Target 1 face-up "Dethpich" monster. Return it to its owner's hand and draw 1 card. [color=#008000]Tone Deph[/color] Quick-Play Lore: Target 1 "Dethpich" monster you control: Return it back to it's owner's hand and Special Summon 1 "Dethpich" monster from your Deck with a different name than the monster returned. You can only activate this card during your opponent's turn.[/spoiler][spoiler=[color=#800080]Trap Cards[/color]][color=#800080]Grace Note[/color] Counter Lore: Activate this card only when you control a face-up "Dethpich" monster and when your opponent activates a card effect that targets a card on the field. Negate the card and destroy it. Also, you can Special Summon 1 "Dethpich" monster from your hand. [color=#800080]Accidental[/color] Normal Lore: Special Summon 1 "Dethpich" monster from your Graveyard. During the End Phase, destroy the monster Special Summoned by this effect.[/spoiler] Link to comment
Northern Sage Posted July 4, 2012 Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 There is so much about this I like. You've got most of the OCG down correctly. "Pentax" is the most problematic, as right now it returns itself as well, making the ATK increase obsolete. "Tone Deph", well, you just cannot "send" a monster to the hand. Use "Return" instead. Overall, I love that it is a Psychic Archetype. Well done. Link to comment
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2012 [quote name='∂materasu' timestamp='1341397532' post='5967045'] There is so much about this I like. You've got most of the OCG down correctly. "Pentax" is the most problematic, as right now it returns itself as well, making the ATK increase obsolete. "Tone Deph", well, you just cannot "send" a monster to the hand. Use "Return" instead. Overall, I love that it is a Psychic Archetype. Well done. [/quote]Thank you man I really appreciate it...I fixed the OCG errors that you pointed out. Link to comment
TaintedXNeko Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 I love psychics, so immediately you got me squealing like a girl, and I like the Xyzs and my gods! spam-able level 4 psychics all over the place! I almost thought I could shove psychic wizards, panda borgs clerics and witches into this archetype. well (some could work) kinda but some of the more generic psychic support cards will go Deliciously in this archetype!!! and also dark support cards can go in here as well. Lol Brilliant! I gonna try make a deck list on this XD. Link to comment
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 [quote name='P4Temperance' timestamp='1341740244' post='5970457'] I love psychics, so immediately you got me squealing like a girl, and I like the Xyzs and my gods! spam-able level 4 psychics all over the place! I almost thought I could shove psychic wizards, panda borgs clerics and witches into this archetype. well (some could work) kinda but some of the more generic psychic support cards will go Deliciously in this archetype!!! and also dark support cards can go in here as well. Lol Brilliant! I gonna try make a deck list on this XD. [/quote] Thank you so much for your kind words XD it really helps me know that people like this archetype. Oh and Bump. Link to comment
wizered67 Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Finally, someone made a decent psychics deck that is actually playable. I really like it. great job! Link to comment
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='wizered67' timestamp='1342711404' post='5982835'] Finally, someone made a decent psychics deck that is actually playable. I really like it. great job! [/quote] Thank you very much I really couldn't think of any good type for these cards and for some reason psychics just spoke to me. Bump-ity bump bump Link to comment
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 I only read the effect monsters so far, but loving it. Effects are balanced and OCG is great! I will get to the rest soon, i on;y wish that there were pictures Link to comment
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1342984014' post='5985704'] I only read the effect monsters so far, but loving it. Effects are balanced and OCG is great! I will get to the rest soon, i on;y wish that there were pictures [/quote] You have no idea how bad I wish I could find pictures for these cards...but I couldn't find any that really would fit them in my opinion. Link to comment
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2012 Bump. Please leave a constructive comment when you read these cards please! Link to comment
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