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[quote name='Kakashi Hatake' timestamp='1341189426' post='5965066']
... Can I wear this? :D
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Depends on what type of shoes you have on, you need to match bro. (only if you pass me some o' dat sweet southern cee en cee)

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[quote name=''Nw' timestamp='1341189659' post='5965070']
Depends on what type of shoes you have on, you need to match bro. (only if you pass me some o' dat sweet southern cee en cee) [color=#006400]«Ok, this exactly describes my accent.[/color]
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Alright, well I can't exactly tell what the focal is (which I guess is the point since it seems to be more towards abstract), but I think it is supposed to be a person and the light source is in front of him/her. The lighting seems to be mostly on the dot but I don't like how the entire piece has almost flat-line brightness all of the way across except fo the small areas around the lights. Not a fan of the clouds at the bottom or the bland grunge background. It just seems to me that it would look better aoverall if you continued to make it colorful across the board. Other than that, I really like the style and I haven't see much lie it in a while.

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[quote name='Kakashi Hatake' timestamp='1341190328' post='5965074']
Alright, well I can't exactly tell what the focal is (which I guess is the point since it seems to be more towards abstract), but I think it is supposed to be a person and the light source is in front of him/her. The lighting seems to be mostly on the dot but I don't like how the entire piece has almost flat-line brightness all of the way across except fo the small areas around the lights. Not a fan of the clouds at the bottom or the bland grunge background. It just seems to me that it would look better aoverall if you continued to make it colorful across the board. Other than that, I really like the style and I haven't see much lie it in a while.
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Why I couldn't make it colorful across the board and only on the side in which he was grasping (not pointing) was to show two sides of the piece. On the left we have the man in a dark place (for the most part) and on the right he's grasping for a much brighter and colorful (symbolically meaning better) place.

The clouds compliment the "zen" theme of the piece.

But yeah thanks for the cnc, wear it proudly friend.

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[quote name=''Nw' timestamp='1341190822' post='5965080']
Why I couldn't make it colorful across the board and only on the side in which he was grasping (not pointing) was to show two sides of the piece. On the left we have the man in a dark place (for the most part) and on the right he's grasping for a much brighter and colorful (symbolically meaning better) place.

The clouds compliment the "zen" theme of the piece.
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Well in that sense, good grade, my brother.

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You should take the whole person out of it in my opinion, and turn it into a full abstract piece.
The blurred clouds on the left don't seem to fit the depth attempted here.
Got some good looking effects going out there but the person ruins it.

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